for All's Fair When Love Is War7/1/2013 c13 
6SailorVegeta13
I'm sorry about your best friend.
This chapter was really touching, and realistic, and cute, and all that good stuff. Hope you'll update soon!
6SailorVegeta13I'm sorry about your best friend.
This chapter was really touching, and realistic, and cute, and all that good stuff. Hope you'll update soon!
7/1/2013 c10 SailorVegeta13
Lol! This is why, if my friends and I ever plan a trip to Paris together, we're definitely not going without funbunny99, because she's the only one who knows French ;) (The rest of us take either Spanish or Chinese.)
Lol! This is why, if my friends and I ever plan a trip to Paris together, we're definitely not going without funbunny99, because she's the only one who knows French ;) (The rest of us take either Spanish or Chinese.)
7/1/2013 c7 SailorVegeta13
Zach is starting to remind me of Zachary Goode, from Ally Carter's Gallagher Girls series. (Cammie's Zach is infuriating, annoying, way too good with girls, quite a bit like Jace in various ways, and he always signs his notes, "Z". Yeah, it's mostly the last one.)
But Zach Goode isn't a world-class jerk - he's actually sweeter than Jace, if that's possible.
Zach is starting to remind me of Zachary Goode, from Ally Carter's Gallagher Girls series. (Cammie's Zach is infuriating, annoying, way too good with girls, quite a bit like Jace in various ways, and he always signs his notes, "Z". Yeah, it's mostly the last one.)
But Zach Goode isn't a world-class jerk - he's actually sweeter than Jace, if that's possible.
7/1/2013 c5 SailorVegeta13
And the ex returns. Of course he does.
Do you ever feel like overused plotlines are more than okay if the person using them is a really amazing writer? Because that's kinda how I feel about your fics.
And the ex returns. Of course he does.
Do you ever feel like overused plotlines are more than okay if the person using them is a really amazing writer? Because that's kinda how I feel about your fics.
7/1/2013 c3 SailorVegeta13
Cliffhangers are painful. They're recommended for people prone to writer's block, though; did you know that? Apparently if you stop in an exciting place, it makes you want to pick up the story - makes sense to me. What do you think?
Cliffhangers are painful. They're recommended for people prone to writer's block, though; did you know that? Apparently if you stop in an exciting place, it makes you want to pick up the story - makes sense to me. What do you think?
7/1/2013 c1 SailorVegeta13
Wow. A lot of sentences in the beginning start with "I", but it gets much, much better. Just as an overall tip, I'd use "smirk" instead of "sneer" - smirking is sexy. Sneering is for asshats.
Your writing is some of the best I've seen in a while - it's absolutely amazing!
Wow. A lot of sentences in the beginning start with "I", but it gets much, much better. Just as an overall tip, I'd use "smirk" instead of "sneer" - smirking is sexy. Sneering is for asshats.
Your writing is some of the best I've seen in a while - it's absolutely amazing!
5/23/2013 c13 IridescentLight
aw, this chapter was amazing and it made me cry :p sorry! Really, the part about Valentine just killed me. It just that talking about deads like that (because of cancer mostly) breaks my heart... I just can't...
aw, this chapter was amazing and it made me cry :p sorry! Really, the part about Valentine just killed me. It just that talking about deads like that (because of cancer mostly) breaks my heart... I just can't...
5/22/2013 c9 IridescentLight
Yey! At last Max! I was waiting this whole time for him to make his appearance.
Yey! At last Max! I was waiting this whole time for him to make his appearance.
5/21/2013 c7 IridescentLight
Jesus! What the..? Oh, God! Seriously, what..? *unable o think properly*
Jesus! What the..? Oh, God! Seriously, what..? *unable o think properly*
5/21/2013 c2 IridescentLight
'What I think'? What do YOU think I think would be a better question? xp
'What I think'? What do YOU think I think would be a better question? xp
5/19/2013 c13 1
this is amazing, your writing is amazing.. even better than your other story. best eva
this is amazing, your writing is amazing.. even better than your other story. best eva
5/13/2013 c10 22AnneValkyria
WTF? Making fun of her phobias? Thats not cockey. Thats just mean.
Kind of feels like he got tired as soon as she was his
22AnneValkyriaWTF? Making fun of her phobias? Thats not cockey. Thats just mean.
Kind of feels like he got tired as soon as she was his