for All's Fair When Love Is War5/13/2013 c9 
22AnneValkyria
Now this was a good chapter. Not as great as the first one, coz that was awesome... Put the second best so far.
22AnneValkyriaNow this was a good chapter. Not as great as the first one, coz that was awesome... Put the second best so far.
5/13/2013 c8 AnneValkyria
This is just weird. Soon after she whatched him beat her ex into a bloody pulp she agrees to be his girlfriend. Who does that?
This is just weird. Soon after she whatched him beat her ex into a bloody pulp she agrees to be his girlfriend. Who does that?
5/13/2013 c7 AnneValkyria
I told you about the jealousy. Now its not fun anymore. And love-triangels. Pu-lease.
But still a good story. But are they ever going to hopp in to bed?
I told you about the jealousy. Now its not fun anymore. And love-triangels. Pu-lease.
But still a good story. But are they ever going to hopp in to bed?
5/13/2013 c6 AnneValkyria
Well, jealousy is fun. for about 5 minutes. Plz no more. And who ever tried to help with the roses shouldve clued him in on it.
Well, jealousy is fun. for about 5 minutes. Plz no more. And who ever tried to help with the roses shouldve clued him in on it.
5/13/2013 c5 AnneValkyria
Ok. No games. That gets old. FAST.
Im pretty sure youre not getting this. But a girls gotta complain every now and han.
Still awesome though
Ok. No games. That gets old. FAST.
Im pretty sure youre not getting this. But a girls gotta complain every now and han.
Still awesome though
5/13/2013 c3 AnneValkyria
What is this? No more hate? Awwww
Declorations of lave this early cant be good.
And now Im hungry
What is this? No more hate? Awwww
Declorations of lave this early cant be good.
And now Im hungry
5/13/2013 c1 AnneValkyria
Crap. I mean... I started this story knowing there would be no ending and i can already say thats REALLY gonna suck. I just LOVE these love-hate relationships
Crap. I mean... I started this story knowing there would be no ending and i can already say thats REALLY gonna suck. I just LOVE these love-hate relationships
5/12/2013 c10 Guest
Okay, sorry. My phone is broken and decided to post my review while I was writing it -'
So : like I've just said, most of French people can speak English quite well, so that' not a big deal if they haven't learn French ;)
Then, I just wanted to tell you that the sentence : "Je vais prendre pour vous à votre hôtel" means... nothing :S If you meant : I'll drive you to your hotel, you should write : "Je vais vous emener à votre hôtel" or "Je vais vous accompagner à votre hôtel".
I don't know if you can change it now because the chapter is posted, but if you can, that could be better for your French readers, like me :)
Okay, sorry. My phone is broken and decided to post my review while I was writing it -'
So : like I've just said, most of French people can speak English quite well, so that' not a big deal if they haven't learn French ;)
Then, I just wanted to tell you that the sentence : "Je vais prendre pour vous à votre hôtel" means... nothing :S If you meant : I'll drive you to your hotel, you should write : "Je vais vous emener à votre hôtel" or "Je vais vous accompagner à votre hôtel".
I don't know if you can change it now because the chapter is posted, but if you can, that could be better for your French readers, like me :)
5/12/2013 c10 Guest
Hey!
I love your story, please, keep writing it! O.o
I just wanted to say something about their trip in Paris :p
First off : that's not a big deal if they can't speak French, you know. Most of us, poor Fe
Hey!
I love your story, please, keep writing it! O.o
I just wanted to say something about their trip in Paris :p
First off : that's not a big deal if they can't speak French, you know. Most of us, poor Fe
4/24/2013 c13 2madsen
Hi. Hello there.
Okay, so I know that it is quite some time since you last updated, but I only just read your story, and I just wanted to tell you that I thought it was awesome, and that I am very sad that there isn't more chapters.
It was very funny and entertaining to read, and it was, in my opinion, one of the better MI fanfics.
Okay. Well, that was it. That was all I wanted to say. Okay. Bye then.
Me
2madsenHi. Hello there.
Okay, so I know that it is quite some time since you last updated, but I only just read your story, and I just wanted to tell you that I thought it was awesome, and that I am very sad that there isn't more chapters.
It was very funny and entertaining to read, and it was, in my opinion, one of the better MI fanfics.
Okay. Well, that was it. That was all I wanted to say. Okay. Bye then.
Me
3/17/2013 c13 Guest
Hi, I've read your story and I really like it, it's a shame you haven't updated in so long! Hopefully you'll start writing again soon 'cause I'd really like to know what's gonna happen! Thanks for writing such an awesome story!
Hi, I've read your story and I really like it, it's a shame you haven't updated in so long! Hopefully you'll start writing again soon 'cause I'd really like to know what's gonna happen! Thanks for writing such an awesome story!
3/2/2013 c3 Guest
HAHA! This story is hilarious! "I would call you stupid, but that would be an insult to stupid people everywhere" HAHA! :D and "if you don't get whats wrong with me you are depriving a village somewhere of their idiot"! This is HILARIOUS! I have never laughed this hard over something i read! This is great!
HAHA! This story is hilarious! "I would call you stupid, but that would be an insult to stupid people everywhere" HAHA! :D and "if you don't get whats wrong with me you are depriving a village somewhere of their idiot"! This is HILARIOUS! I have never laughed this hard over something i read! This is great!