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10/8/2011 c1 9Ensimismada
Thanks for allowing an old man his sorrow and thanks for sharing it.
9/21/2011 c1 2NeverisaDork
8/18/2011 c1 22truthlieslovestars
5/23/2011 c1 1Lupus7
I have to disagree with you on one point. I thought that was very well done, and it didn't seem out of character at all. At the end of the game (good ending, at least, haven't gotten the evil ending yet), he confesses his love for Trish. He may have done some terrible things throughout the course of the game, but he did them for all the right reasons. So, it stands to reason, that even if she didn't know it, Trish would have been just as proud of Kessler as she was of Cole.
1/8/2011 c1 19Foopar
i thought this was great. and kessler was very in character, to people who say he's not, remember that he loved trish to.
5/28/2010 c1 131TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba
It didn't suck but it wasn't mind blowingly amazing. The end of that game was though. Do you think the Beast is another version of Cole?
5/24/2010 c1 18Project Phoenix Agent 003
I thought Kessler was perfectly in character.
4/19/2010 c1 smashbrawlguy
Yes, Kessler is a bit OOC, but not enough to detract from the experience. Good job!

Nothing is true. Everything is permitted.

3/28/2010 c1 The lazy one
Actually, we haven't been given enough of Kessler to say that his character is wrong. Maybe, that's who he actually is; a 140-year old man with a sickened heart. Maybe, that's what he actually said, maybe that was the conversation the two had before Trish was on the ground. Maybe, but we're not sure.

You're underestimating yourself :)
3/7/2010 c1 Valid User Name
Really Good! Even if Kessler is slightly out of character it must have been still hard to kill his own wife. Anyway great idea!
2/5/2010 c1 1Dragoonfliy
*sniffle sniffle*

THANK YOU. This was excellent, Kessler might not be in character, but it's a lovely perspective on the whole tragedy of killing your past future wife thing. I can imagine him being all like... PUSH "I love you." And her quote to Cole from Kesslers perspective was a poignant touch.

Only issue, a few typos. "moisture" instead of "moister" down at the second to last line and "monetarily" should be "momentarily" at the 4th to last line.

But yeah. Nice stuff!
2/5/2010 c1 lazyguy90
Nice work on this. Very well done. Keep at it.

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