
5/22/2010 c4
2Deadly Nightshade1395
There are three things that I would like to state:
1. I love your writing :)
2. I love this story
3. I also love Atreyl's writing :)
The plot is coming on quite nicely! Oh, okay. Super duper quick question. (This is totally going to make you think I'm crazy) But does it make sense to you to have repeating colors in gummy worms? o.O I mean, I'm eating gummy worms and there are two different pairs with the same color. Yellow and red. And blue and red. Just doesn't make sense to me. *shrug* anyway, great story, great work. Keep it up!

There are three things that I would like to state:
1. I love your writing :)
2. I love this story
3. I also love Atreyl's writing :)
The plot is coming on quite nicely! Oh, okay. Super duper quick question. (This is totally going to make you think I'm crazy) But does it make sense to you to have repeating colors in gummy worms? o.O I mean, I'm eating gummy worms and there are two different pairs with the same color. Yellow and red. And blue and red. Just doesn't make sense to me. *shrug* anyway, great story, great work. Keep it up!
5/22/2010 c2 L Ryuuzaki
[Was leaning closely to the computer screen]
N~Nu!
Who's the stalker~? Dx
[Waves arms in the air slightly] Cliffhanger! Cliffhanger!
And aweh, poor Mello...Crying alone ;~; [Hugs Mello] v_v
[Rushes off to read the next chapter] This is getting so good! w
[Was leaning closely to the computer screen]
N~Nu!
Who's the stalker~? Dx
[Waves arms in the air slightly] Cliffhanger! Cliffhanger!
And aweh, poor Mello...Crying alone ;~; [Hugs Mello] v_v
[Rushes off to read the next chapter] This is getting so good! w
5/22/2010 c4 Stabbythings
B scares me. I love it great chapter. I can't wait to see what B's no doubt creepy gift is.
B scares me. I love it great chapter. I can't wait to see what B's no doubt creepy gift is.
5/22/2010 c3
64Atreyl
If Near's going to help Mello, I'll love him in this short period of time. I swear. xD
And for some weird reason, I love that BB kidnapped Matt. It's so sweet that he loves the little redhead.

If Near's going to help Mello, I'll love him in this short period of time. I swear. xD
And for some weird reason, I love that BB kidnapped Matt. It's so sweet that he loves the little redhead.
5/8/2010 c2 Atreyl
~le gasp
I haven't reviewed for this fic yet. Anyway, I just reviewed to say that the stalker is a certain jam-lover. Or, should be. NearxMatt bugs the hell out of me, but if Near's the actual stalker, I guess I won't mind. As long as it's MxM in the end. *thumbsup*
~le gasp
I haven't reviewed for this fic yet. Anyway, I just reviewed to say that the stalker is a certain jam-lover. Or, should be. NearxMatt bugs the hell out of me, but if Near's the actual stalker, I guess I won't mind. As long as it's MxM in the end. *thumbsup*
4/27/2010 c2
2Deadly Nightshade1395
I don't know if you've decided or not, but...is it Near? Seems like something he'd do. I don't know.

I don't know if you've decided or not, but...is it Near? Seems like something he'd do. I don't know.
4/6/2010 c2
7Ren Hardy
THAT'S ALL I GET? Oh, that's SO not cool. I'm a total sucker for MxM, which I write in my spare time. BAD STALKER, THAT'S NOT YOUR MATTY! -throws rocks- My guess is it's Near. He'd stalk Matt...of course, I'd stalk Matt too...but I'm harmless! Unlike a certain creepy albino kid...

THAT'S ALL I GET? Oh, that's SO not cool. I'm a total sucker for MxM, which I write in my spare time. BAD STALKER, THAT'S NOT YOUR MATTY! -throws rocks- My guess is it's Near. He'd stalk Matt...of course, I'd stalk Matt too...but I'm harmless! Unlike a certain creepy albino kid...
4/2/2010 c3 Stabbythings
I would help even though I just started this story, but my brain is not in working order the last thing I wrote was some cracked up fic that made no sence at all. Well I really like this story so I hope some one helps you out soon.
I would help even though I just started this story, but my brain is not in working order the last thing I wrote was some cracked up fic that made no sence at all. Well I really like this story so I hope some one helps you out soon.
4/2/2010 c3
6ShySlasher
I'd love to help you out with this wonderful story, if you could give me a vaugue idea of what you have in mind for this (If you give me free reign on something, well, it's going to be hacked up to say the least...), I could write up something fairly quick. I don't want to see this fic die, so I'll gladly help out.

I'd love to help you out with this wonderful story, if you could give me a vaugue idea of what you have in mind for this (If you give me free reign on something, well, it's going to be hacked up to say the least...), I could write up something fairly quick. I don't want to see this fic die, so I'll gladly help out.