for Bleached Vampire6/26/2013 c49 Tomon
Other then a lot of typos, very satisfying chapters. Good work, thank you for enjoyable reading :)
Other then a lot of typos, very satisfying chapters. Good work, thank you for enjoyable reading :)
6/24/2013 c49 ulquiorra.schiffer.1291
You should have Ulquiorra be alive aswell...fit him in this somewhere...i would find that enjoyable
You should have Ulquiorra be alive aswell...fit him in this somewhere...i would find that enjoyable
6/16/2013 c1 
1DBZt warrior
I like this story. It'll probably take some time for me to catch up on the current chpt but who cares. This is a good story that I plan to keep on reading.
1DBZt warriorI like this story. It'll probably take some time for me to catch up on the current chpt but who cares. This is a good story that I plan to keep on reading.
6/16/2013 c49 Jasmine5
I really love this story! The battles are getting more intense and I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Wonderful job!
I really love this story! The battles are getting more intense and I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Wonderful job!
6/13/2013 c49 Guest
Frikken love this story! You are awesome at writing
Frikken love this story! You are awesome at writing
6/7/2013 c33 3Yubi.Ink
i'm so glad ichigo's hollow is back! things are always more interesting when the main character has a dark side
3Yubi.Inki'm so glad ichigo's hollow is back! things are always more interesting when the main character has a dark side
6/7/2013 c29 Yubi.Ink
i really like your story and the way it has evolved. a lot of stories have all the main characters present from the start so a change is nice
i really like your story and the way it has evolved. a lot of stories have all the main characters present from the start so a change is nice
5/18/2013 c49 Guest
Keep updating, and if possible do a young justice story.
Keep updating, and if possible do a young justice story.
5/11/2013 c49 Gaby
Great story,Any chance you do a New Spider-man,s story after you end this One?
Great story,Any chance you do a New Spider-man,s story after you end this One?
5/11/2013 c9 Sage of Wind Dragons
so this lord Domino doesn't seem that hot but its nice that a new power structure (even if its one so far weaker than the previous that they might freak if they find Shinigami at this new site)
rose up, I see that you decided not to have Harribel survive nor Grimjow.
its a shame oyu didn't have Stark survive though. he could hav ebeen a fun king forced on the crown and actually strong enough and then after the war with soul society might feel some motivation so he d be a sad wise still evil because hes a hollow but still got to feed the hollows and that be fun.
or any espada rebuilding themselves really, why isn't Nell in charge of everyone? even if her adult form comes out sprridoic at best it respond to threats at least and her two aides are actually sorta strong.
well shes crippled in a lot of ways so shes probably wouldent work.
but perhaps Demonio has some tricky power that will make him work here? I do like the idea of a King of a small power triying to raise himself up here, it make him interesting, even if he were to be cut down easily.
but who knows what powers this new guy will awaken? it be cool if he was a vasto lorde that hid from AIzens involvement and didn't interfear with Braggan.
make it quite nice there if he was, even if hes surrounded by super weak subordinates that be at best on par with a good lieutenit fighter.
well perhaps hes got some plans here to build his power structure better.
so this lord Domino doesn't seem that hot but its nice that a new power structure (even if its one so far weaker than the previous that they might freak if they find Shinigami at this new site)
rose up, I see that you decided not to have Harribel survive nor Grimjow.
its a shame oyu didn't have Stark survive though. he could hav ebeen a fun king forced on the crown and actually strong enough and then after the war with soul society might feel some motivation so he d be a sad wise still evil because hes a hollow but still got to feed the hollows and that be fun.
or any espada rebuilding themselves really, why isn't Nell in charge of everyone? even if her adult form comes out sprridoic at best it respond to threats at least and her two aides are actually sorta strong.
well shes crippled in a lot of ways so shes probably wouldent work.
but perhaps Demonio has some tricky power that will make him work here? I do like the idea of a King of a small power triying to raise himself up here, it make him interesting, even if he were to be cut down easily.
but who knows what powers this new guy will awaken? it be cool if he was a vasto lorde that hid from AIzens involvement and didn't interfear with Braggan.
make it quite nice there if he was, even if hes surrounded by super weak subordinates that be at best on par with a good lieutenit fighter.
well perhaps hes got some plans here to build his power structure better.
5/10/2013 c8 Sage of Wind Dragons
Yeah I always wondered what Orohimes power once she learned what its nature would get a reaction orm her, what shed think about it?
Ive noticed that she cant use the powers on herself so she cant reject her OWN reality or her own perception but could change everything else a lot.
And hell considering that she cant change her self and her powers are directly supplied by her power and will (generally more power means less will , more will less power)
She is the fun little power child of the hogyuaku.
I mean Chad is a fullbringer apparently so he mgith have been charged by the fullbringer but he already had the previous requsits.
Hold on… that means his mother was attacked by a hollow when he was in the womb. Huh.
I think that the hollow bait largely could be either three separate things or all of them interacting with each other.
#1 apparently the whole of Kankura town was a spiritual nexus so while normally the hollow bait would have brought a manageable amount of hollows for a Quincey (and I also think that as its hollow BAIT previous quinces set trapps and such things to handle that)
#2 Aizen is a doosh. He could have convietly set that up to get attention on rukia cause what the hell?
#3 Ichigo OOZES resitu everywhere so his resitu carried the hollow bait sent and spreat it everywhere.
I think it’s a mixture of all three things really on why that happened.
I wonder if it be worse or better at a School of Yokai witch would count as a Yokai nexus I guess.
So im a bit surprised that the news gang didn't really see the faces UNDER the masks and freak the fuck out here. impressed they survived long enough against a hoard before those who actually try and kill killed the hollows and they did nice work they certainly can defend themselves.
I also have to say I love Moka and Ichigo butting heads here its nice and fun!
hmm after Grimjow I bet Ichigo at least knows how to fight someone that uses their fist a whole lot better but I bet that still isn't a strong point of his, witch is completely fine.
and he fights with a sword witch is easy to kill people with.. perhaps if he did what he did to actually cut Kenpachi only in reverse he could fight her without accidently killing her incase he puts to much power in a strike? just to be on the safe side as Moka IS tough little thing even as shes young I don't think she has the sheer youkai energy to compete with ichigo, but who knows? Yomi's do have some advatages...
poor Moka! when she transforms her clothes don't transform with her! so shes ALWAYS dong stripperifc stuff even when she doesn't want to! and she probably is aware of it but cant really do anything about it! so much fun that insequrity where she can function with that as long as no one comments on it!
Yeah I always wondered what Orohimes power once she learned what its nature would get a reaction orm her, what shed think about it?
Ive noticed that she cant use the powers on herself so she cant reject her OWN reality or her own perception but could change everything else a lot.
And hell considering that she cant change her self and her powers are directly supplied by her power and will (generally more power means less will , more will less power)
She is the fun little power child of the hogyuaku.
I mean Chad is a fullbringer apparently so he mgith have been charged by the fullbringer but he already had the previous requsits.
Hold on… that means his mother was attacked by a hollow when he was in the womb. Huh.
I think that the hollow bait largely could be either three separate things or all of them interacting with each other.
#1 apparently the whole of Kankura town was a spiritual nexus so while normally the hollow bait would have brought a manageable amount of hollows for a Quincey (and I also think that as its hollow BAIT previous quinces set trapps and such things to handle that)
#2 Aizen is a doosh. He could have convietly set that up to get attention on rukia cause what the hell?
#3 Ichigo OOZES resitu everywhere so his resitu carried the hollow bait sent and spreat it everywhere.
I think it’s a mixture of all three things really on why that happened.
I wonder if it be worse or better at a School of Yokai witch would count as a Yokai nexus I guess.
So im a bit surprised that the news gang didn't really see the faces UNDER the masks and freak the fuck out here. impressed they survived long enough against a hoard before those who actually try and kill killed the hollows and they did nice work they certainly can defend themselves.
I also have to say I love Moka and Ichigo butting heads here its nice and fun!
hmm after Grimjow I bet Ichigo at least knows how to fight someone that uses their fist a whole lot better but I bet that still isn't a strong point of his, witch is completely fine.
and he fights with a sword witch is easy to kill people with.. perhaps if he did what he did to actually cut Kenpachi only in reverse he could fight her without accidently killing her incase he puts to much power in a strike? just to be on the safe side as Moka IS tough little thing even as shes young I don't think she has the sheer youkai energy to compete with ichigo, but who knows? Yomi's do have some advatages...
poor Moka! when she transforms her clothes don't transform with her! so shes ALWAYS dong stripperifc stuff even when she doesn't want to! and she probably is aware of it but cant really do anything about it! so much fun that insequrity where she can function with that as long as no one comments on it!
5/10/2013 c7 Sage of Wind Dragons
Wouldent these guys count as border beings of sorts? I mean really only Uryu would maby get in trouble as his people were monster hunters, and as the Bleach world and the Rosiro world seem to be in the same, I bet you that some Quinces killed some Youkais in battle.
And hell considering the ginto tubes and a lot of those techniques (witch are essentially spirituals water, or holy water surrounded in holy silver)
Theyd probably have been the bane of vampires. And feared and stuff. But I could see them allowing a Quincey in the school as well cause they could count as a established border being.
So Uryu has the most controversial issue with the truth but he could probably stay at the school even with the truth out in the open.
Orohime would have to lie, and be very quiet with what exactly her abillites are,
she couldent really pass herself off as a witch or anything cause then our little witch would be curious to learn and while Rukias have a structured order to it that she might be able to teach and even if it wasent it be still reconizes as spells,
Orohimes wouldent, but she might be able to pass it off more than Chad could.
however perhaps its not unheard of for new border beings to be born? rare certainly but they might be able to pass that off as well.
Ichigo and RUkia would be opening a whole can of worms that need not be touched.
Now that I think about it, uryu and Chad don’t have girlfriends! Have them woe some girls from Tsukunes admirers! It be funny when Tsukune gets strangely happy and possisve at the same time.
I mean quite frankly a large part of the harem with Rosiro in mind besides plot purposes is because it seems there isn’t any other decent fellas at the school that arnt like Gin and so are so eccentric.
Poor Kon the man cant really live that well considering he can only hijack Ichigos body if he wants to have fun.
If only he had his own gigai!
speaking of witch Id be nice if you show some of Uryus GInto techniques and add some fun new ones!, it be INTRESTING. and seeing how a group of the youkais from the gang slowly gets used to a Quincey who might have a fearsome reputation even so long later and Uryu whose used to his people stories from more of the ran across some Yokais that were the despeciable kind or the Quinceys have a lethal (for both sides) missunderstandings in some situations.
speacking of that, Im kind of surprised that Rukia isn't a little uncomfortable with the whole soul destroying thing.
or maby seeing as they known Uryu for a while they have already made pieace with it a while ago.
out of all of them Id wonder who is the most perturbed by it though?
I do like how it has been noted and all about the gangs lack of life and death fights, and that they don't Aim to KILL.
anyway this should be fun!
Wouldent these guys count as border beings of sorts? I mean really only Uryu would maby get in trouble as his people were monster hunters, and as the Bleach world and the Rosiro world seem to be in the same, I bet you that some Quinces killed some Youkais in battle.
And hell considering the ginto tubes and a lot of those techniques (witch are essentially spirituals water, or holy water surrounded in holy silver)
Theyd probably have been the bane of vampires. And feared and stuff. But I could see them allowing a Quincey in the school as well cause they could count as a established border being.
So Uryu has the most controversial issue with the truth but he could probably stay at the school even with the truth out in the open.
Orohime would have to lie, and be very quiet with what exactly her abillites are,
she couldent really pass herself off as a witch or anything cause then our little witch would be curious to learn and while Rukias have a structured order to it that she might be able to teach and even if it wasent it be still reconizes as spells,
Orohimes wouldent, but she might be able to pass it off more than Chad could.
however perhaps its not unheard of for new border beings to be born? rare certainly but they might be able to pass that off as well.
Ichigo and RUkia would be opening a whole can of worms that need not be touched.
Now that I think about it, uryu and Chad don’t have girlfriends! Have them woe some girls from Tsukunes admirers! It be funny when Tsukune gets strangely happy and possisve at the same time.
I mean quite frankly a large part of the harem with Rosiro in mind besides plot purposes is because it seems there isn’t any other decent fellas at the school that arnt like Gin and so are so eccentric.
Poor Kon the man cant really live that well considering he can only hijack Ichigos body if he wants to have fun.
If only he had his own gigai!
speaking of witch Id be nice if you show some of Uryus GInto techniques and add some fun new ones!, it be INTRESTING. and seeing how a group of the youkais from the gang slowly gets used to a Quincey who might have a fearsome reputation even so long later and Uryu whose used to his people stories from more of the ran across some Yokais that were the despeciable kind or the Quinceys have a lethal (for both sides) missunderstandings in some situations.
speacking of that, Im kind of surprised that Rukia isn't a little uncomfortable with the whole soul destroying thing.
or maby seeing as they known Uryu for a while they have already made pieace with it a while ago.
out of all of them Id wonder who is the most perturbed by it though?
I do like how it has been noted and all about the gangs lack of life and death fights, and that they don't Aim to KILL.
anyway this should be fun!
5/5/2013 c49 arandomreviewer
Awww Shit, Cero Espada is in the field! Call in the Kenpocalypse and RUN FOOL RUN!
Awww Shit, Cero Espada is in the field! Call in the Kenpocalypse and RUN FOOL RUN!
5/6/2013 c49 3FelgrandDragon
Another excellent chapter, now were finally getting into all the big battles. I can feel the intensity of the clash and I can't wait to see how they're going to deal with Yammy. I think also that Ichigo's full hollow form is going to appear at some point, very exciting! I would like to note that this chapter could use some cleaning with a few sentences and misspellings. Keep up the good work!
3FelgrandDragonAnother excellent chapter, now were finally getting into all the big battles. I can feel the intensity of the clash and I can't wait to see how they're going to deal with Yammy. I think also that Ichigo's full hollow form is going to appear at some point, very exciting! I would like to note that this chapter could use some cleaning with a few sentences and misspellings. Keep up the good work!