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5/5/2013 c49 Multifan
I bet Ichigo felt a nasty sense of déjà vu when Demonio caught Tensa Zangetsu. That should be incentive enough for him to kick the notch up to where it was during his last battle against Aizen.

Nel and Harribel might have the numerical advantage, but against Yammy they’re going to need a lot more than that.

I think when Gin sees Harribel and Mila Rose in their released forms, he’s going to howl in perverted delight.

For a change, Grimmjow used his head rather than relying on savage fury.

I think Inner Moka would have been as impressed with Demitri as Grimmjow was.

Against Yammy, I think Nel, Harribel, and Grimmjow are going to have their hands full.

You’d think Inner Moka would have learned by now that there are times when you put pride on the side burner and focus on survival. Telling Demetrio to go all out was asking for trouble, and he delivered it.

I think Gin’s going to milk his saving Kokoa for all it’s worth. In other words, I can see him going to Inner Moka after the battle and say, “Hey, I saved your sister. You owe me a favor.” Given how he is, I think we can guess what kind of favor he’d ask.

For Renji, I guess he felt it was like old times, back in the 11th Division.

Good thinking on the fracciones’ part. Things are hectic enough. The last thing they need is to bring forth a monster that even they have trouble controlling. However, that monster might make an appearance later to be used against Yammy.

Great. Urahara’s ready to get serious, but he’s forced to fight with an arm tied behind his back, so as to speak.

If Fong Fong got involved, why do I get the feeling the rest of the students and faculty are going to get involved? It'll help stem the tide, but it'll increase the risk of casualties.
5/5/2013 c49 19Rialga
Nice. Glad to see that Grimmjow was able to take care of his opponent in short order, but damn, Moka's and Tsukune's opponent seems like a very tricky one to beat. And now with Yammy unleashing his release mode, things are going to get very chaotic. And juding by the title of the next chapter, it looks like Demonio is going to be unleashing his full power too and considering how his battle with Ichigo is going, it won't be a pretty sight.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/23/2013 c48 urs-v
Good story man! I took me some time to read it all, but it was definitivly worth-it! I'm just sad that it "end" here in the middle of the battle, but I suppose that I just have to wait and the next chapters will come one after one!
4/20/2013 c48 Ruka
I was really happy to have found your story! I have been looking for a long good story with action and ichihime and it had been hard! Thanks for writing this! I'm a huge ichihime fan and at the same time I love action scenes and good plot. I am mostly amazed by your writing of Ichigo and Orihime, individually, for they were in character. So thanks for that! Making them a couple was a wonderful bonus! I love how you portray Orihime she's really a beautiful person and of course Ichigo too! Hope you write more ichihime with action/adventure; you write them realistically! And thanks for not making rukia a love rival! I love rukia and Orihime friendship. Kudos! ( just be careful with your punctuation though, the rest are awesome)
4/19/2013 c48 2Ermilus
I just read the whole story in one day. I enjoyed it so u have a new reader now! Update soon
3/27/2013 c48 1Arniecar145
Oh how wonderful. Took me 3 days to catch up to this chapter and it was worth it. I cant wait for the next chapter
3/26/2013 c7 2HannokiKaen
I like this story but there was one thing in this chapter i thought i should point out. You mention (towards the end of the chapter) that Ichigo doesn't understand the english lettering on his shirt having bought it due to popularity or looks. That doesn't really make sense because Japanese highschoolers (and other grades) study english - you could make an argument about him not being good at it but the canon for bleach states that he is in the top 20 in the school for marks (uryu is 1 and orihime was either 2 or 3)... In addition i remember reading somewhere that Shakespeare is one of Ichigo's favorite authors. Now he could be reading Hamlet or whatever in japanese but the two facts combine to make me think that he has at the least a knowledge of the roman alphebet and corresponding sounds as well as a working knowledge of the basics of english.
Now that i am finished my large rant i'll finish up with reiterating that i love everything (plotwise especially - i hearts the fact that the gang came with ichigo) that you have written. I'll get back to the story now...
kaen
3/20/2013 c25 3Scrap333
At the end of this chapter it says: No rest for the weary. I find that funny cause as I was reading it the song No rest for the wicked was playing and the corous started and I accidentily read it wrong but it still fit. I didn't realize it until the song ended amd I re-read the chapter.
3/1/2013 c48 2Aviman12
Good story so far, post soon please
2/27/2013 c17 3green eyed typhoon
could deus ex orihime help ichigo with his powers? speed up the healing process or something, just something i thought of.
2/23/2013 c48 1RedGamer101
Wow another great Chapter! can,t wait for the lead fights. VAMPIRE HOLLOW! Nice!
2/20/2013 c48 Blinded in a bolthole
You guessed wrong laddie... bad guys usually guess wrong because they are too full of themselves to see more. Unless of course they are Orochimaru, Madara and as such, in this case they know so much they suffer from sensory overload and can't see it coming.
2/17/2013 c48 arandomreviewer
A lead male protagonist, a lead female protagonist, and a girl capable of making reality her bitch if she wanted to, Demetrio you poor poor foolish fool.
2/18/2013 c48 13RoninS636
Finally! Man I was waiting on this chapter forever. Nice job keep on going up until Fairy Tale or wherever and finish it off.
2/17/2013 c48 5ShinigamiMaster
Doing well, my friend. Very well. I hope that the story doesn't end off at the defeat of Demonio. That it continues into the manga as it currently is. Y'know, the Fairy Tale/Alucard Arc. Would love to see that. Sure others would as well. Keep being awesome.

Live Long and Prosper

SM
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