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2/17/2013 c48 Multifan
I’ve been waiting for this chapter.

Well, the cat’s really out of the bag now.

Seems as if Grimmjow fights to prove his existence. Sounds a lot like how Gaara was at the beginning.

I don’t know if I should have Treachery or Invasion playing in the background at various points in the chapter.

The order of battle had been drawn, and everyone’s doing their part. I would think that Moka and Tsukune would have stayed with Renji and the fracciones to provide additional support to that group or to be on standby in case Chad and the others needed assistance.

Poor Yukari. Thanks to Yoruichi’s shunpo, I think she’s out of the fight.

Even in a fight, Kurumu has to flirt with Uryu? Girl needs to get her priorities set.

When it comes to intelligence, I wonder if Urahara saw Yukari as a potential apprentice of sorts.

And so our heroes finally get to meet Demonio face to face.

And just when we get to the good stuff…

Here’s hoping Loly and Menoly arrive in time to deliver some payback to Yammy.

I know that whenever there’s a big showdown, whether in the regular episodes or the movies, you have several members of the Gotei 13 there to help out. Any chance of that happening, or the Visored coming to help?
2/17/2013 c48 1FreeTraderBeowolf
Ah it's getting good now. I am expecting a titanic set of battles. And I feel you are not going to disappoint. The various battles are all well setup. And man did Ichigo get the bad guys attention.
2/17/2013 c48 19Rialga
Wow, I bet Yukari and Ruby weren't expecting to be moving that fast, ha ha ha. I hope they can get that seal up and running soon. And so Demonio really was a vampire! Or at least, was one a long time ago. And for him to recognize Moka's blood/power... all of a sudden I have a bad feeling about who or what he once was. Oh yeah, the battle against him will be far, far, far from easy, that much is certain.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
2/17/2013 c48 bankai777
it sure looks like that battle will get forward to see what occurs next time.
2/17/2013 c48 Zon Yokai Blade of the Spirits
oh this is going to be goood
2/14/2013 c47 1FreeTraderBeowolf
I am so looking forward to the next chapter. This has been a great bleach RV crossover. As for those that didn't like the pairings. I am with the author on this. Also I was a bit suprised that Captain Toshiro Hitsugaya wasn't sent there along with Rukia and Ichigo. It would have been interesting to see him interact with Yukari Sendo.
2/14/2013 c37 FreeTraderBeowolf
Ah, sweet little Nel. I still remember the first time she was drawn in her adult form in the Manga. Talk about hot. Yeah it was nice to see her and harribel show up.
2/14/2013 c35 FreeTraderBeowolf
Ah that was bittersweet. One can hope they find the love they deserve.
2/14/2013 c34 FreeTraderBeowolf
Actually putting the hole in the hollow does feel right. good job.
2/14/2013 c33 FreeTraderBeowolf
About the two Moka's, From a storytelling aspect it has possibilities. My only problem with it is that there isn't two bodies but two minds in one body. The mirror should only cause Inner Moka to control the body like belmont does to her. But this is your story so it is up to you to devise why she is now in two pieces.
2/14/2013 c31 FreeTraderBeowolf
Re:AN: Yeah I know how you feel about reviews. They are what keeps us going. Well that is part of it, but the joy of writing is also what is driving me. Right now I am taking a break from my fifteenth chapter, and I am enjoying this story. Again I love the imagery that you build in the story. Little details mean a lot. I am still getting the hang of that. So hang in there your work is appreciated.
2/14/2013 c30 FreeTraderBeowolf
Well I love to see characters grow and you are doing that in spades. First with Kurumu, then Orihime, and now Moka and Tsukune.
2/14/2013 c24 FreeTraderBeowolf
Yeah she does sound like an angel, especially when her power comes from love.
2/14/2013 c22 FreeTraderBeowolf
Ah now that was a vampire love scene. I could almost see it playing like an anime before my eyes as I read. Really excellent imagery, And I loved the way you captured just what motivates a vampire in choosing their mate.
2/13/2013 c2 FreeTraderBeowolf
Well this is coming along well. Being a big fan of Bleach I am very familiar with the characters and I think you are doing a good job on handling them. I particularly like the way your making Ishida san a bit standoffish. Any on to the next chapter.
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