for Bleached Vampire11/21/2012 c46 Tomon
Pretty happy spirited several chapter :) Nice for reading and now it seems that the final conclusion is coming.
Keep up the good work ;)
Pretty happy spirited several chapter :) Nice for reading and now it seems that the final conclusion is coming.
Keep up the good work ;)
11/21/2012 c46 Multifan
It would seem that Soul Society had learned an important lesson from the Winter War – the enemy of my enemy is my ally. The Vizards drove that point to the hardliners like Yamamoto and Soifon – as much as they dislike the Shinigami for banishing them, they despised Aizen, Gin, and Tousen for turning them into Vizards in the first place.
I forgot to add last time – I bet Soifon would have grinned like a Cheshire cat when Yoruichi knocked out Urahara.
I could see Nel being the most approachable. Harribel, her fracciones, and the twins would have been next on the list. Grimmjow would definitely be at the bottom.
I would have thought the youkai group would feel at ease around Harribel’s fracciones. Their bickering would probably be no different than the bickering that would go on between Kurumu and Mizore.
Currently she was up against Loly and Menoly and from the looks of it she was holding her own with that boy – I think this could have been worded differently. At first, you gave the impression that Moka was fighting against Tsukune as well as the twins.
I get the feeling that when Demonio shows up, the yokai group will know whom he used to be.
LOL at Gin’s antics. Him coming back as a perverted Arrancar. It would take a long time, but I can actually see that. Bad enough he’s the enemy of women in life. If that were to happen, the female Shinigami would kill Gin not out of duty but out of feminine fury.
If Grimmjow felt he should be king, wouldn’t he have held resentment towards Aizen, Ulquiorra, and all the others who were of higher rank than him.
I bet most of the other yokai are grinning on the inside knowing that Inner Moka had been knocked off her high horse.
Frankly, I’m more inclined to have Aizen killed. That way, there’s no chance of him escaping and causing trouble again.
Nice to see the couples acting lovey-dovey, though I’m not surprised Grimmjow wasn’t pleased.
The brainiac with a method to his madness has finally found a solution.
As fast as Urahara could implement his idea, it won’t be fast enough.
Demitrio lucked out big time when he gave the good news to Demonio.
I think I’ll be hearing in my mind the song with the same title as the next chapter next time. Unfortunately, I don’t think Ichigo’s ready to face off against Demonio. I’ll wait to see if this is true and how you’ll handle it.
And we're in the final stretch for this story.
It would seem that Soul Society had learned an important lesson from the Winter War – the enemy of my enemy is my ally. The Vizards drove that point to the hardliners like Yamamoto and Soifon – as much as they dislike the Shinigami for banishing them, they despised Aizen, Gin, and Tousen for turning them into Vizards in the first place.
I forgot to add last time – I bet Soifon would have grinned like a Cheshire cat when Yoruichi knocked out Urahara.
I could see Nel being the most approachable. Harribel, her fracciones, and the twins would have been next on the list. Grimmjow would definitely be at the bottom.
I would have thought the youkai group would feel at ease around Harribel’s fracciones. Their bickering would probably be no different than the bickering that would go on between Kurumu and Mizore.
Currently she was up against Loly and Menoly and from the looks of it she was holding her own with that boy – I think this could have been worded differently. At first, you gave the impression that Moka was fighting against Tsukune as well as the twins.
I get the feeling that when Demonio shows up, the yokai group will know whom he used to be.
LOL at Gin’s antics. Him coming back as a perverted Arrancar. It would take a long time, but I can actually see that. Bad enough he’s the enemy of women in life. If that were to happen, the female Shinigami would kill Gin not out of duty but out of feminine fury.
If Grimmjow felt he should be king, wouldn’t he have held resentment towards Aizen, Ulquiorra, and all the others who were of higher rank than him.
I bet most of the other yokai are grinning on the inside knowing that Inner Moka had been knocked off her high horse.
Frankly, I’m more inclined to have Aizen killed. That way, there’s no chance of him escaping and causing trouble again.
Nice to see the couples acting lovey-dovey, though I’m not surprised Grimmjow wasn’t pleased.
The brainiac with a method to his madness has finally found a solution.
As fast as Urahara could implement his idea, it won’t be fast enough.
Demitrio lucked out big time when he gave the good news to Demonio.
I think I’ll be hearing in my mind the song with the same title as the next chapter next time. Unfortunately, I don’t think Ichigo’s ready to face off against Demonio. I’ll wait to see if this is true and how you’ll handle it.
And we're in the final stretch for this story.
11/21/2012 c46 
1Yvori Gevura
oooo dmn so this fic is reaching the end? drats! oo well every good thing must reach an end and this was one of the most great fics i readed so far, i like your style, you do have a certain way to see the world and is very interesting! well lets see what is in store for the next chapter! see ya man! you rock!
pd: I still think you should try your hand at a Spider-man Black-cat fic XD
1Yvori Gevuraoooo dmn so this fic is reaching the end? drats! oo well every good thing must reach an end and this was one of the most great fics i readed so far, i like your style, you do have a certain way to see the world and is very interesting! well lets see what is in store for the next chapter! see ya man! you rock!
pd: I still think you should try your hand at a Spider-man Black-cat fic XD
11/21/2012 c46 Blinded in a bolthole
Guess Aizen's Tea had something to do with his evil-mad scientist-overlord persona.
A bit mushy for my taste though mention of Orihime's large expressive eyes kinda made me smile ( Brought up image of when she satre at that Fullbring bunny-girl's donates).
Guess Aizen's Tea had something to do with his evil-mad scientist-overlord persona.
A bit mushy for my taste though mention of Orihime's large expressive eyes kinda made me smile ( Brought up image of when she satre at that Fullbring bunny-girl's donates).
11/20/2012 c46 10Writer Sage
It was a good chapter, but (no offense) you had A LOT of spelling and grammatical errors.
10Writer SageIt was a good chapter, but (no offense) you had A LOT of spelling and grammatical errors.
11/20/2012 c46 19Rialga
Wow, looks like the arrancar are settling in better than I expected. That's good to see. And it is also a good point that Kurumu silently brought up with herself: Inner Moka does need to get knocked down slightly and that is turning out nicely with everyone now there. Wonder how she would have reacted to Aizen... And wow, I never thought of the similarity between Moka drinking blood from Tsukune and Demonio with his biting. Perhaps he is a former vampire or something.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
19RialgaWow, looks like the arrancar are settling in better than I expected. That's good to see. And it is also a good point that Kurumu silently brought up with herself: Inner Moka does need to get knocked down slightly and that is turning out nicely with everyone now there. Wonder how she would have reacted to Aizen... And wow, I never thought of the similarity between Moka drinking blood from Tsukune and Demonio with his biting. Perhaps he is a former vampire or something.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/20/2012 c46 4DarkJackel
Kind of dissapointing to not get more time with the arrancar running around Yokai. It could have been fun. Also would have been nice to see Ichigo and Grimmjow go all out on each other like they did in their last fight and let the others get an eyeful of what awaits. On the other hand this last battle will have Yammy so it should be challenging.
4DarkJackelKind of dissapointing to not get more time with the arrancar running around Yokai. It could have been fun. Also would have been nice to see Ichigo and Grimmjow go all out on each other like they did in their last fight and let the others get an eyeful of what awaits. On the other hand this last battle will have Yammy so it should be challenging.
11/10/2012 c28 Guest
I want ichigo at full power soon!
I want ichigo at full power soon!
11/5/2012 c45 john sands
I think Harribel would be great in the karate club.
I think Harribel would be great in the karate club.
11/5/2012 c1 Guest
I aplaud your commitment to this!:)
I aplaud your commitment to this!:)
11/6/2012 c45 H-PockySticks
Thanks for the latest chapter. Glad to see a couple of the espadas, arrancars, fraccions alive.
Regards to the current chapter Omake, you could have added Loly into the group as well.
Regards to the next chapter (Arracncar at the Yokai Academy)... be kinda fun to have Orihime and Kurumu give a tour of the school for Nel, Tia, and Mila... oh how the red (bloody nose) sea would flood the school, only to part for these girls.
Thanks for the latest chapter. Glad to see a couple of the espadas, arrancars, fraccions alive.
Regards to the current chapter Omake, you could have added Loly into the group as well.
Regards to the next chapter (Arracncar at the Yokai Academy)... be kinda fun to have Orihime and Kurumu give a tour of the school for Nel, Tia, and Mila... oh how the red (bloody nose) sea would flood the school, only to part for these girls.