for Bleached Vampire8/15/2012 c1 Guest
Interesting idea you have here though I must admit it worries me that Ruby had such a hard time just killing a simple Hollow though granted it took her by surprise. I hope she and the newspaper and aren't shown up by the likes of Ichigo the entire story. It's especially worrying since aside from Tsukune and Moka, Ruby is the strongest of their group as far as I can tell.
I'm interested so I can put up with the grammer/spelling mistakes for now, I just hope the newspaper club does their own equal part in killing the Hollows.
Interesting idea you have here though I must admit it worries me that Ruby had such a hard time just killing a simple Hollow though granted it took her by surprise. I hope she and the newspaper and aren't shown up by the likes of Ichigo the entire story. It's especially worrying since aside from Tsukune and Moka, Ruby is the strongest of their group as far as I can tell.
I'm interested so I can put up with the grammer/spelling mistakes for now, I just hope the newspaper club does their own equal part in killing the Hollows.
8/15/2012 c9 Soul Climax
So this Demonio is behind the Hollow attacks, I imagine that his released form will look something like the devil. He already has that sort of feel going for him what with his name and appearance. It figures that the newspaper club would ask for training. I wonder how that will go and how they will handle the incoming Menos attack.
So this Demonio is behind the Hollow attacks, I imagine that his released form will look something like the devil. He already has that sort of feel going for him what with his name and appearance. It figures that the newspaper club would ask for training. I wonder how that will go and how they will handle the incoming Menos attack.
8/15/2012 c8 Soul Climax
Good boy Chad saving Mizore chan, Kurumu was at least taking down a few of them this time before Uryu intervened. Real Moka vs Ichigo was by far the highlight of the chapter, I knew those two wouldn't see eye to eye, Moka might actually need to get serious if a fight breaks out and it was great to see Ichigo comment on someone kicking like that in Moka's skirt, brave fool doesn't realize he is talking to the daughter of one of the vampires who ever freaking lived aside from Alucard.
Explanation time and they have a lot of explaining to do, that is for damn sure. Nice to see the two mascots at each other's throats as well though Kon is more of the mascot since the bat has no role at all in the first season of the manga, he is only really the mascot for the anime. Kon shut your impudent mouth the Rosario manga is still on-going thank you very much.
Good boy Chad saving Mizore chan, Kurumu was at least taking down a few of them this time before Uryu intervened. Real Moka vs Ichigo was by far the highlight of the chapter, I knew those two wouldn't see eye to eye, Moka might actually need to get serious if a fight breaks out and it was great to see Ichigo comment on someone kicking like that in Moka's skirt, brave fool doesn't realize he is talking to the daughter of one of the vampires who ever freaking lived aside from Alucard.
Explanation time and they have a lot of explaining to do, that is for damn sure. Nice to see the two mascots at each other's throats as well though Kon is more of the mascot since the bat has no role at all in the first season of the manga, he is only really the mascot for the anime. Kon shut your impudent mouth the Rosario manga is still on-going thank you very much.
8/15/2012 c7 Soul Climax
Both groups have gathered their forces and march on the Hollow's forest. What will happen if they encounter each other and Hollows attack them forcing everybody to work together to kill them all? The secrets going to be blown soon, I just know it.
Both groups have gathered their forces and march on the Hollow's forest. What will happen if they encounter each other and Hollows attack them forcing everybody to work together to kill them all? The secrets going to be blown soon, I just know it.
8/15/2012 c6 Soul Climax
Damn Kurumu, when a huge creature comes out of nowhere showing no signs of intelligent thought, a viscous inhuman roar and intent to kill you'd think she'd know better than to hold back. Well at least next time she knows about their heads/masks being the weak point for the Hollows. She can also tell the rest of the newspaper club and of course this means they have their cover story for the paper. There isn't much Rukia can do, Kurumu not only saw but actually fought and was nearly eaten by a Hollow and she is definitely going to want to know what the hell it was and who saved her.
That Ichigo got lazy to have allowed a Hollow to escape from him and when will he ever think for ten seconds. I mean using a Getsuga, seriously Ichigo if you had put enough power into that and aimed it the wrong way you could have destroyed the school your supposed to be protecting. If you really wanted to end it fast you should have just yelled one simple word. BANKAI! Rukia is going to tear his head off when she finds him.
Damn Kurumu, when a huge creature comes out of nowhere showing no signs of intelligent thought, a viscous inhuman roar and intent to kill you'd think she'd know better than to hold back. Well at least next time she knows about their heads/masks being the weak point for the Hollows. She can also tell the rest of the newspaper club and of course this means they have their cover story for the paper. There isn't much Rukia can do, Kurumu not only saw but actually fought and was nearly eaten by a Hollow and she is definitely going to want to know what the hell it was and who saved her.
That Ichigo got lazy to have allowed a Hollow to escape from him and when will he ever think for ten seconds. I mean using a Getsuga, seriously Ichigo if you had put enough power into that and aimed it the wrong way you could have destroyed the school your supposed to be protecting. If you really wanted to end it fast you should have just yelled one simple word. BANKAI! Rukia is going to tear his head off when she finds him.
8/15/2012 c5 Soul Climax
Oh this is not good for the girls of Youkai Private Academy. As I predicted the enemies of all women Gin and Kon have teamed up. How long will they get away with their perverted antics before Ichigo or Moka kicks both their asses? Speaking of Ichigo, he certainly isn't making any friends, how long before some stupid student tries to attack him in monster form and ends up on the receiving end of an ass kicking from the orange haired Shinigami substitute?
I pity the Hollow that gets on the bad side of the combined forces of team Karakura and the Newspaper club. Hope they find out about each other soon.
Oh this is not good for the girls of Youkai Private Academy. As I predicted the enemies of all women Gin and Kon have teamed up. How long will they get away with their perverted antics before Ichigo or Moka kicks both their asses? Speaking of Ichigo, he certainly isn't making any friends, how long before some stupid student tries to attack him in monster form and ends up on the receiving end of an ass kicking from the orange haired Shinigami substitute?
I pity the Hollow that gets on the bad side of the combined forces of team Karakura and the Newspaper club. Hope they find out about each other soon.
8/5/2012 c43 Guest
Hi
First, great chapter as always. This unworthyhumble peasant has nothing to critizisesame with the rest of the story. I have right now just about one wish and that would be Isshin's fingerflick of doom.
Why, because it is EPIC nuff said.
If you cuold do that just about any wish I had for this story so far would be fullfilled
Hi
First, great chapter as always. This unworthyhumble peasant has nothing to critizisesame with the rest of the story. I have right now just about one wish and that would be Isshin's fingerflick of doom.
Why, because it is EPIC nuff said.
If you cuold do that just about any wish I had for this story so far would be fullfilled
8/2/2012 c43 OldHwonDos
Agent-G! Its been a while since I last left a review but it is always good to see your stories pop up on my alert emails. I always loved Youkai Academy's Family Day. And thanks for bringing Isshin. I can't wait to see what else comes up from that guy. One problem, Mizore's family name is Shiroyuki. There's a 'Y' in there. It means *white flower.
Anywho I love your stuff and can't wait for what's next.
Peace
Agent-G! Its been a while since I last left a review but it is always good to see your stories pop up on my alert emails. I always loved Youkai Academy's Family Day. And thanks for bringing Isshin. I can't wait to see what else comes up from that guy. One problem, Mizore's family name is Shiroyuki. There's a 'Y' in there. It means *white flower.
Anywho I love your stuff and can't wait for what's next.
Peace
8/1/2012 c43 
16KnighteWolfe
I'm liking this. The pairing are great and complement each other.
Keep up the great work!
KW
16KnighteWolfeI'm liking this. The pairing are great and complement each other.
Keep up the great work!
KW
7/31/2012 c3 2Riverfury
"although she wasn't a ranked member of the Thirtieth Division" Don't you mean Thirteenth division?
2Riverfury"although she wasn't a ranked member of the Thirtieth Division" Don't you mean Thirteenth division?
7/30/2012 c43 12DrZevil
I for one like the pairings and agree that you shouldn't change them! Ruining the story! Some people are just to closed minded to see the big picture.
12DrZevilI for one like the pairings and agree that you shouldn't change them! Ruining the story! Some people are just to closed minded to see the big picture.
7/29/2012 c43 51Coltsguy
Whew. It takes a while to read though a backlog. Anyway, so far as I've seen, you're doing a pretty good job with your story. My complaints are only about silly grammatical problems that I see here and there, and the occasional juxtaposition in places. The latter is rare so it doesn't really bother me. The story itself is good and you should feel good about it. Keep it up. Also, if you don't hear anything else from me, then you know that you're doing a good job.
51ColtsguyWhew. It takes a while to read though a backlog. Anyway, so far as I've seen, you're doing a pretty good job with your story. My complaints are only about silly grammatical problems that I see here and there, and the occasional juxtaposition in places. The latter is rare so it doesn't really bother me. The story itself is good and you should feel good about it. Keep it up. Also, if you don't hear anything else from me, then you know that you're doing a good job.