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6/15/2010 c1 25Fluffy no Danna
That was adorable and major win XD nice work :3
2/18/2010 c1 4RandomRockerGrl
rewoo rewoo! awesum story alert! i luvd dis story so much^^ it was so funny! lol i enjoyed myself so much while reading ur fic!
2/6/2010 c1 52scrambled-eggs-at-midnight
I liked it a lot, and I don't think the ending was too sappy at all. It was really cute. However, I do think you might want to invest in a beta, just for some small grammar and spelling issues.

Great job!

-Eggy
2/5/2010 c1 subaru1999
wonderful oneshot! it was very well written and funny! I cant wait to see what you will write next...

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