for Another Cliché Kakashi and Sakura Story, I know3/14/2012 c18 Guest
I liked it, it was sweet I love the Kakashi and Sakura pairing its one of my favorites. Although parts are depressing ou could tell he loved her from the beginning(don't know if that's a good or bad thing) but the ending was sweet. Good job hope you keep up the good work:)
I liked it, it was sweet I love the Kakashi and Sakura pairing its one of my favorites. Although parts are depressing ou could tell he loved her from the beginning(don't know if that's a good or bad thing) but the ending was sweet. Good job hope you keep up the good work:)
5/4/2011 c18 Taylor
This is BY FAR the best KakaSaku pairing story I have ever read. You have a talent at writing stories.
This is BY FAR the best KakaSaku pairing story I have ever read. You have a talent at writing stories.
11/21/2010 c4 leslie
i love gaara
i love gaara
7/26/2010 c18 Winter
could u please write another chapter (like one where it shows them older) and mabye they could have just had a kid or something and btw this is my fav story on fanfiction (IT IS SOOO GOOD!)
could u please write another chapter (like one where it shows them older) and mabye they could have just had a kid or something and btw this is my fav story on fanfiction (IT IS SOOO GOOD!)
6/16/2010 c18 
1TheresADogOnYouHeadCo
i loved it! it was just so awesome and cute...but you did a GREAT job on it! u rock!
1TheresADogOnYouHeadCoi loved it! it was just so awesome and cute...but you did a GREAT job on it! u rock!
6/9/2010 c18 3VestakiaSilverfur
This story was amazing i really loved it i had never really heard of the SakuraxKakashi paring. i did think about it and thought it would be a little strange seeing as he was her teacher. and then i thought, after reading this. :OMIGOSH they acctually make a great paring /: so thank you you have inspired me keep up the good work.
3VestakiaSilverfurThis story was amazing i really loved it i had never really heard of the SakuraxKakashi paring. i did think about it and thought it would be a little strange seeing as he was her teacher. and then i thought, after reading this. :OMIGOSH they acctually make a great paring /: so thank you you have inspired me keep up the good work.
5/29/2010 c17 2FissionPowered
Your story's really good but this chapter is like eehhhhhhh I dont know...Its sort of...never ind.
2FissionPoweredYour story's really good but this chapter is like eehhhhhhh I dont know...Its sort of...never ind.
5/27/2010 c17 Omg first time reader
You repeat things too often. The authors notes contain more story for each chapter than the submitted work holds. People don't come here for your life story. They try to escape and just read something. You are not supposed to be the subject. Please stop that.
About your characters: you need to think about who they actually are. Both Kakashi and Sakura are intelligent people. Please give the the logic that goes with their characters.
This is not a flame. It is a review...those things you also spend too much time begging for. Copy and paste all of your author notes in word and see how long they are.
You repeat things too often. The authors notes contain more story for each chapter than the submitted work holds. People don't come here for your life story. They try to escape and just read something. You are not supposed to be the subject. Please stop that.
About your characters: you need to think about who they actually are. Both Kakashi and Sakura are intelligent people. Please give the the logic that goes with their characters.
This is not a flame. It is a review...those things you also spend too much time begging for. Copy and paste all of your author notes in word and see how long they are.
5/18/2010 c16 FissionPowered
Wow that was epic! I cant wait for the next one! And I also cant wait for the sequel!
You write very well, and I really like this story a lot, for... personal reasons... but, keep, writing :D
Wow that was epic! I cant wait for the next one! And I also cant wait for the sequel!
You write very well, and I really like this story a lot, for... personal reasons... but, keep, writing :D
5/18/2010 c16 A. Loy
Please update again soon!
Please update again soon!
5/17/2010 c6 Someone you don't know
- If you have an idea for a Sasuke + Sakura fic, why are you writing thew sequal to this story already New Moon style?
- I think I am finding less and less mistakes, and Sakura needs to suck it up.
- If you have an idea for a Sasuke + Sakura fic, why are you writing thew sequal to this story already New Moon style?
- I think I am finding less and less mistakes, and Sakura needs to suck it up.
5/17/2010 c5 Someone you don't know
- I recommend in the typed version you should give the readers a better hint at when you're changing characters. I know in the written there are stars...but they don't seem to show up here
- I recommend in the typed version you should give the readers a better hint at when you're changing characters. I know in the written there are stars...but they don't seem to show up here
5/17/2010 c4 Someone you don't know
-Last I checked not everyone in the sand village wears a sand gourd
-I never knew Garra could be so feeling, but I know how much you would hate having to create your own character for her to talk to...a Stew.
- "I changed into something more comfortable clothed and dropped onto the bed." (?)
- "I know going that long without sleep is a little unrealistic but whatever" (A little? You can say whatever after you've gone running for three days without sleep)
- I wouldn't say I'm a Garra fan, I'd have to say I'd prefer Konkaru(sp)to him, but he is an interesting character none the less.
-Last I checked not everyone in the sand village wears a sand gourd
-I never knew Garra could be so feeling, but I know how much you would hate having to create your own character for her to talk to...a Stew.
- "I changed into something more comfortable clothed and dropped onto the bed." (?)
- "I know going that long without sleep is a little unrealistic but whatever" (A little? You can say whatever after you've gone running for three days without sleep)
- I wouldn't say I'm a Garra fan, I'd have to say I'd prefer Konkaru(sp)to him, but he is an interesting character none the less.