for Another Cliché Kakashi and Sakura Story, I know5/11/2010 c15 Amanda
Love it...can't wait for more...you should do a sequal
Love it...can't wait for more...you should do a sequal
5/6/2010 c14 
16LoreilDarksky00
wow, this is getting really really interesting. i am completely hooked! can't wait for the next chapter!
16LoreilDarksky00wow, this is getting really really interesting. i am completely hooked! can't wait for the next chapter!
4/30/2010 c14 A. Loy
Love this story... Please update soon...;)
Love this story... Please update soon...;)
4/15/2010 c3 Someone you don't know
"and I Tsunade gasped from the bedroom" I think you may have a typo here
"He voice didn't..." First the hand is a male and now the voice
As to your question I won't say where I think Sakura went...A very hot lace ;)
If not for the blasted typos this story would be perfect
"and I Tsunade gasped from the bedroom" I think you may have a typo here
"He voice didn't..." First the hand is a male and now the voice
As to your question I won't say where I think Sakura went...A very hot lace ;)
If not for the blasted typos this story would be perfect
4/5/2010 c2 Someone you don't know
She hit every vital organ, man she's good, brain to?
"how she going "butterflies"" Uh...Am I supposed to know what that means?
"He hand that was resting on my leg" So his hand is a he, is that what that means
Answer to your question: I think jumping off a 1 1/2 story building when you're injured is one of the stupidest things you could do, it's right up there with licking the + and - ends of a battery at the same time.
She hit every vital organ, man she's good, brain to?
"how she going "butterflies"" Uh...Am I supposed to know what that means?
"He hand that was resting on my leg" So his hand is a he, is that what that means
Answer to your question: I think jumping off a 1 1/2 story building when you're injured is one of the stupidest things you could do, it's right up there with licking the + and - ends of a battery at the same time.
4/5/2010 c1 You don't know me at all
Ok my sis and I looked it over
1) "fists were denched" ?
2) "He was so longer looking at me" ? I so longer look at you to
more editing to come ;)
Ok my sis and I looked it over
1) "fists were denched" ?
2) "He was so longer looking at me" ? I so longer look at you to
more editing to come ;)
3/24/2010 c10 4craizypet
she will burst into tears? maybe will try to fight him? i dont know, do tell!
4craizypetshe will burst into tears? maybe will try to fight him? i dont know, do tell!
3/6/2010 c9 revel13
heres my first ever review coz i want to keep reading your story
i think uv done sakura well considering the grief shes going through. and i like that kakashi beats around the bush regarding how he feels about her because that synchronizes him with his real character i think. gaara is a bit out of character coz hes speaking a fair amount but so far im enjoying ur story so please keep uploading!
heres my first ever review coz i want to keep reading your story
i think uv done sakura well considering the grief shes going through. and i like that kakashi beats around the bush regarding how he feels about her because that synchronizes him with his real character i think. gaara is a bit out of character coz hes speaking a fair amount but so far im enjoying ur story so please keep uploading!
3/5/2010 c8 susan
great story!
please keep writing =) =')
great story!
please keep writing =) =')
2/13/2010 c3 Tai Lei
I think this is a good start, just make sure u keep with the character because kakashi would definately add a title to tsunade. I find it very sad that kakashi feels responsible to take care of her, because that's pity, not love. Also I found it kind of strange that you keep have kakashi saying that "After I told her I couldn't love her back" which makes mE assume that he does love her just won't admit it.
I think this is a good start, just make sure u keep with the character because kakashi would definately add a title to tsunade. I find it very sad that kakashi feels responsible to take care of her, because that's pity, not love. Also I found it kind of strange that you keep have kakashi saying that "After I told her I couldn't love her back" which makes mE assume that he does love her just won't admit it.
2/13/2010 c3 2Indxms
Aw man! I cried, why do men have to be butts!
I love this so far, and I also do the same thing with handwriting.
I find it easier when I finish typing a chapter to save it and immediatly begin on the other one and print if I don't finish and then like glue or tape it in lol. Idk if you do that but yep.
And I have no idea where Sakura went, though I am positive that she left Konohana...*i cant spell*
and one more thing "Tell Kakashi I lo I’ll miss you two." what were you trying to say there
2IndxmsAw man! I cried, why do men have to be butts!
I love this so far, and I also do the same thing with handwriting.
I find it easier when I finish typing a chapter to save it and immediatly begin on the other one and print if I don't finish and then like glue or tape it in lol. Idk if you do that but yep.
And I have no idea where Sakura went, though I am positive that she left Konohana...*i cant spell*
and one more thing "Tell Kakashi I lo I’ll miss you two." what were you trying to say there