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12/4/2010 c1 
7tinyinara
Hey, I liked this, you wrote it very nicely. The beginning was really powerful and there was great imagery. This line made me laugh: " 'Vampires don't go in the sun'. How hard is that to remember?" :)
7tinyinaraHey, I liked this, you wrote it very nicely. The beginning was really powerful and there was great imagery. This line made me laugh: " 'Vampires don't go in the sun'. How hard is that to remember?" :)
8/1/2010 c1 60Stargirl888
I really enjoyed this fic, and its the first Vic/James cp fic I've come across. I really liked seeing Victoria in a rage at the start an the little speech she made before he went over the log - "I'm your mate and your maker: it's my job to keep you from getting yourself killed, and if the only way to do that is with the palm of my hand, then so be it."
I hope you do more CP fics in fututre because, if this one is anything to judge by, they'll be really good.
60Stargirl888I really enjoyed this fic, and its the first Vic/James cp fic I've come across. I really liked seeing Victoria in a rage at the start an the little speech she made before he went over the log - "I'm your mate and your maker: it's my job to keep you from getting yourself killed, and if the only way to do that is with the palm of my hand, then so be it."
I hope you do more CP fics in fututre because, if this one is anything to judge by, they'll be really good.
7/26/2010 c1 12MidsummerNightGirl
I liked it. it's the first James/Victoria story I have ever read and it was well written and engaging. Good job.
12MidsummerNightGirlI liked it. it's the first James/Victoria story I have ever read and it was well written and engaging. Good job.
6/25/2010 c1 2silkyselkie
Hey there. Really nice hurt/comfort story. I actually have not read/seen Twilight, but might just to figure out who these two are. XD
2silkyselkieHey there. Really nice hurt/comfort story. I actually have not read/seen Twilight, but might just to figure out who these two are. XD
5/3/2010 c1 121ficwriterjet
This is the firt Victoria and James story I've read. I liked the reason behind the spanking, and that he seemed to know he'd done something wrong before she started in. I also liked the way she pointed out she could make him submit if he refused. Nice job.
I would like to offer a suggestion. Instead of so many 'smack smack' lines, try to vary it up a little with lines like 'after the 25th smack he started to squirm' or ' he was able to remain stoic until the the 15th smack came crashing down', etc.
I hope you write more spanky fic. :)
121ficwriterjetThis is the firt Victoria and James story I've read. I liked the reason behind the spanking, and that he seemed to know he'd done something wrong before she started in. I also liked the way she pointed out she could make him submit if he refused. Nice job.
I would like to offer a suggestion. Instead of so many 'smack smack' lines, try to vary it up a little with lines like 'after the 25th smack he started to squirm' or ' he was able to remain stoic until the the 15th smack came crashing down', etc.
I hope you write more spanky fic. :)
2/12/2010 c1 17TwilightGuru09
Good job for a first time. Very believable if you think an adult male will allow himself to be punished in this way. I thought you did a pretty good job on the story line and you developed the reasoning well.
17TwilightGuru09Good job for a first time. Very believable if you think an adult male will allow himself to be punished in this way. I thought you did a pretty good job on the story line and you developed the reasoning well.
2/7/2010 c1 5icul8er
This was cute, and very original! Well done; i have yet to read a spankfic like this one ;p
5icul8erThis was cute, and very original! Well done; i have yet to read a spankfic like this one ;p
2/6/2010 c1 13jewelsbyers
He he! Loved it, funny without being too stupid. Nice to see more people having fun with James and Victoria.
13jewelsbyersHe he! Loved it, funny without being too stupid. Nice to see more people having fun with James and Victoria.