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10/22/2014 c1 Darkness
Seems more like a King Kong and Godzilla crossover...
3/16/2013 c1 gandalf
Kong murdered innocent people? He's an animal. Animals don't murder. If he's being called to account for it it's only because in this fic they're intelligent beings talking.
11/9/2012 c1 Guest
make a chapter 2
4/14/2012 c1 mark3232
This is unfair. Kong does what he does because he's an animal. So is Godzilla, even though he has sometimes shown human intelligence.
6/27/2010 c1 24Loki The Trickster Zoroark
I do like the idea of this story, but it needs some work. You see, you start new paragraphs too much. Let me give you an example. You seem to do this, alot.

"Blah Blah," Person 1 said.

"Blah Blah Blah," Person 1 continued.

It should be like this.

"Blah Blah," Person 1 said. He then continued, "Blah Blah Blah."

The only reason you should start a new paragraph is either when the paragraph needs to be ended (Such as when you write enough for the paragraph) or when someone new speaks. You also need to describe more of the setting. I wanna know where they are, I wanna be able to know what the place looks like, what it smells like, what it feels like. And I'd like to see some backstory as well.

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