for No More Fear9/11/2011 c1 
4Silhouette of a Life
You really need to continue this, I'd love to see this evolve into an actual story and not just a one shot. PLease continue this story.
4Silhouette of a LifeYou really need to continue this, I'd love to see this evolve into an actual story and not just a one shot. PLease continue this story.
1/25/2011 c1 bright night
yo if you haven't made one yet you should continue the story it feels cliff hanger to me and it seems to have a great story if turned multichapter. any way see ya. peace.
yo if you haven't made one yet you should continue the story it feels cliff hanger to me and it seems to have a great story if turned multichapter. any way see ya. peace.
7/1/2010 c1 14Sairey13
This story, is so sweet! U should make another 1, the next part when Trunks came from the future and Gohan recieved the virus instead of Goku. It's just a thought, but it would b cool if u make another 1.
14Sairey13This story, is so sweet! U should make another 1, the next part when Trunks came from the future and Gohan recieved the virus instead of Goku. It's just a thought, but it would b cool if u make another 1.
6/17/2010 c1 kim
hell yeah! GO GOHAN! this is how it should have happened!
hell yeah! GO GOHAN! this is how it should have happened!
6/16/2010 c1 WTF
What the hell was that? After reading your ZAT story you got my hopes up to see good stories from you but I guess I was wrong. Like the last reviewer said you put almost no thought into this story it was almost word for word from the show except Goku was replaced with Gohan. I couldn't even finish it after Gohan had Dende leave him on Namek.
What the hell was that? After reading your ZAT story you got my hopes up to see good stories from you but I guess I was wrong. Like the last reviewer said you put almost no thought into this story it was almost word for word from the show except Goku was replaced with Gohan. I couldn't even finish it after Gohan had Dende leave him on Namek.
6/16/2010 c1 Britons
Sorry to say but most people have low standards. This story is basically the same as the original but with gohan instead of goku. Very poorly written— gohan is completely unrealistic and different. The suspense with the dragon and frieza's wish is totally anticlimatic and just... Bad.
Sorry to say but most people have low standards. This story is basically the same as the original but with gohan instead of goku. Very poorly written— gohan is completely unrealistic and different. The suspense with the dragon and frieza's wish is totally anticlimatic and just... Bad.
5/24/2010 c1 8Lady Venamisa
OMG! O.O Very nicely written, Revy! :3 And haha gotta love Freiza, (or hate him, ether one). Normally, I don't read a lot of stuff with Goku, but this takes the cake. ^-^
Sorry for my long absence. After I contacted you on yahoo last, things got a bit crazy. Won't give you a sob story, but I am truly sorry about not talking to you in so long.
Unfortunately, I am without computer, but I am using a computer at the library, so I'll try to message you more often. Got chapters of my stuff to write, and I hope that I see more of your awesome works :D
Take care, and ttyl!
~Lady Venamisa
8Lady VenamisaOMG! O.O Very nicely written, Revy! :3 And haha gotta love Freiza, (or hate him, ether one). Normally, I don't read a lot of stuff with Goku, but this takes the cake. ^-^
Sorry for my long absence. After I contacted you on yahoo last, things got a bit crazy. Won't give you a sob story, but I am truly sorry about not talking to you in so long.
Unfortunately, I am without computer, but I am using a computer at the library, so I'll try to message you more often. Got chapters of my stuff to write, and I hope that I see more of your awesome works :D
Take care, and ttyl!
~Lady Venamisa
2/14/2010 c1 chase
great story man, you could almost turn this into your new story!
great story man, you could almost turn this into your new story!
2/9/2010 c1 inshidoaol.com
Man! that was a great one-shot! you should just make a real story out of it!
Man! that was a great one-shot! you should just make a real story out of it!
2/8/2010 c1 asweetlilpixie
Great story once again Revu! Really can't wait until your next fic or update!
So until next time, its 'farewell' from everyone's favourite Pixie!
P.S. You are OFFICIALLY my fave author on this site now!
Great story once again Revu! Really can't wait until your next fic or update!
So until next time, its 'farewell' from everyone's favourite Pixie!
P.S. You are OFFICIALLY my fave author on this site now!