for No More Fear2/8/2010 c1 tiger982305
really great story, though why are you ending it as a one-shot? this could be a very interesting full story look forward to your next story/update.
really great story, though why are you ending it as a one-shot? this could be a very interesting full story look forward to your next story/update.
2/8/2010 c1 
22Prats 'R' Us
I love it it's brilliant! Great story! I love the ending and I love Gohan's speech and Vegeta's to, I had to read it out loud in a real posh accent lol
22Prats 'R' UsI love it it's brilliant! Great story! I love the ending and I love Gohan's speech and Vegeta's to, I had to read it out loud in a real posh accent lol
2/7/2010 c1 DBZLOVER
excellent story, great detail, very well written, the fight scenes were great.
excellent story, great detail, very well written, the fight scenes were great.
2/7/2010 c1 marc
wonderful story
wonderful story
2/7/2010 c1 13Guardian of Nesh
Amazing. You pulled it off magnificently. Not much to say other than that really, although it's a pity it had to end in one shot. This had to be left on a cliffhanger though...
13Guardian of NeshAmazing. You pulled it off magnificently. Not much to say other than that really, although it's a pity it had to end in one shot. This had to be left on a cliffhanger though...