for Scary Stories10/1/2010 c7 ilovethetribe
omg im to scared to look in the mirror now x
omg im to scared to look in the mirror now x
7/9/2010 c8 Nolesr1
WOW! the stories were really good. I mean REALLY good! the first one really, really creeped me out. I mean really? Where did you find those stories? anyways, GOOD JOB! update pleeeeeeeeaaaasssseeeee!
WOW! the stories were really good. I mean REALLY good! the first one really, really creeped me out. I mean really? Where did you find those stories? anyways, GOOD JOB! update pleeeeeeeeaaaasssseeeee!
2/23/2010 c8 
7QuickSand311
first the sentance, the girl backs back... doesnt sound right... second, it seems rushed you should go back and add some more detail or rewrite it to sound better. it is a decent story creepy. but it could be so much more. i could pry take this and spend twent pages just talking about the fake mom. but still. ok job.
7QuickSand311first the sentance, the girl backs back... doesnt sound right... second, it seems rushed you should go back and add some more detail or rewrite it to sound better. it is a decent story creepy. but it could be so much more. i could pry take this and spend twent pages just talking about the fake mom. but still. ok job.
2/22/2010 c8 31StopTheMadness
I don't really get it? Anyway, hope you update soon!
{Peace}
StopTheMadness
31StopTheMadnessI don't really get it? Anyway, hope you update soon!
{Peace}
StopTheMadness
2/11/2010 c5 QuickSand311
this one was funny. it would have been better if you had not put in the comments after every sentance. its fine i guess though.
this one was funny. it would have been better if you had not put in the comments after every sentance. its fine i guess though.
2/11/2010 c4 QuickSand311
i have heard this one before, and that is not how it goes. it really goes like this. one night a man was driving for a very long time and he was getting tired. soon he came upto a smal motel and desided to pull in for the night to get some sleep. when he went in and asked for a room, the lady looked at him with a frown and said "We only have one room left, and im not sure youll want it." before the man could say anything she went on. "there was a murder a few years ago in the room next door." the man frowned, but not wanting to look afriad and being so tired he said he didnt care and took the room key. later when he had been lieing in bed for a while, he heard some music from the room next door. curiuosly, he got up from the bed and went over to the door, there was a small keyhole, so he decided to look through it for a moment. there was a young girl in a white dress danceing.around the room with her back to him. he smiled and went back to bed. later that night he woke up again from the music. curusisabout why the girl was still up, he looked through the key hole again. but this time alls he could see was red. he didnt think much off it, just that a drapp or something had fallen. he wentn back to bed and slept through the night. in the morning as he was checking out, the man causaly asked about the murder in the next room over. she said "She was such a sweet young girl. loved her music, always played it before bed."... "Oh really the man said. "Yes. there was only one strange thing about her." the man looked at her. 'She had red eyes."
now see, that is much creepier and better sounding.
i have heard this one before, and that is not how it goes. it really goes like this. one night a man was driving for a very long time and he was getting tired. soon he came upto a smal motel and desided to pull in for the night to get some sleep. when he went in and asked for a room, the lady looked at him with a frown and said "We only have one room left, and im not sure youll want it." before the man could say anything she went on. "there was a murder a few years ago in the room next door." the man frowned, but not wanting to look afriad and being so tired he said he didnt care and took the room key. later when he had been lieing in bed for a while, he heard some music from the room next door. curiuosly, he got up from the bed and went over to the door, there was a small keyhole, so he decided to look through it for a moment. there was a young girl in a white dress danceing.around the room with her back to him. he smiled and went back to bed. later that night he woke up again from the music. curusisabout why the girl was still up, he looked through the key hole again. but this time alls he could see was red. he didnt think much off it, just that a drapp or something had fallen. he wentn back to bed and slept through the night. in the morning as he was checking out, the man causaly asked about the murder in the next room over. she said "She was such a sweet young girl. loved her music, always played it before bed."... "Oh really the man said. "Yes. there was only one strange thing about her." the man looked at her. 'She had red eyes."
now see, that is much creepier and better sounding.
2/11/2010 c3 QuickSand311
this one wasnt scary or good. very badly written. im sorry, but you should go back andr rewrite this. and the moral at the end, i think you have it a bit mixed up. i dosent really go with the story
this one wasnt scary or good. very badly written. im sorry, but you should go back andr rewrite this. and the moral at the end, i think you have it a bit mixed up. i dosent really go with the story
2/11/2010 c2 QuickSand311
i know your friend told you these, but you couldhave made them more your own. a little long more detail. better written. and they arnt that scary, just a bit creepy.
i know your friend told you these, but you couldhave made them more your own. a little long more detail. better written. and they arnt that scary, just a bit creepy.
2/10/2010 c4 L.Pupper
Hmm,I've heard this one before,except its in another version.The hotel owner asked the man not to open his door after 12 midnight.and it was a little girl ghost,not a woman.
Hmm,I've heard this one before,except its in another version.The hotel owner asked the man not to open his door after 12 midnight.and it was a little girl ghost,not a woman.