
2/13/2010 c1
12PancakesAndGilbird
aw thats so sweet and in character to which is hard to find n_n
favourited :P

aw thats so sweet and in character to which is hard to find n_n
favourited :P
2/11/2010 c1 fanficlunatic234
that was actually a lot better than i expected! i saw your summary and i was convinced that a 12 year old had written it so i passed it about 4 times before i finally convinced myself to read it. there were some spelling errors that sorta bugged me like "defidently" is actually "definitely" and yeah. on the whole, it was adorable really. there was a lot of oc-ness (esp with kaiba) but i figured that it was his private self he only showed to jou.
that was actually a lot better than i expected! i saw your summary and i was convinced that a 12 year old had written it so i passed it about 4 times before i finally convinced myself to read it. there were some spelling errors that sorta bugged me like "defidently" is actually "definitely" and yeah. on the whole, it was adorable really. there was a lot of oc-ness (esp with kaiba) but i figured that it was his private self he only showed to jou.