for Assassin3/23/2020 c25 
1arullan
I like the story line but it annoys me that she is this strong assassin and yet goes back to being weak and doing what she is told when told by the Cullens. I hope she changes in the next chapters and shows them she doesn’t need them to protect her.
1arullanI like the story line but it annoys me that she is this strong assassin and yet goes back to being weak and doing what she is told when told by the Cullens. I hope she changes in the next chapters and shows them she doesn’t need them to protect her.
9/23/2019 c33 Guest
Really enjoyed your story
Really enjoyed your story
2/22/2014 c33 InuYashaTKagome
FOR CHAPTER 31 OR 32 SORRY FOR CHAPTER 33 WRITING IN THE BLOCK BUT STILL GREAT STORY.
FOR CHAPTER 31 OR 32 SORRY FOR CHAPTER 33 WRITING IN THE BLOCK BUT STILL GREAT STORY.
2/22/2014 c33 InuYashaTKagome
Dawn it you did a great job on this story.
Love the death of the redhead b*** vampire and Bella two ex-friends.
BELLA AND EDWARD LOVE FOREVERRRRRR.
READ WRITE LOVE YOUR STORY HOOO B.
Dawn it you did a great job on this story.
Love the death of the redhead b*** vampire and Bella two ex-friends.
BELLA AND EDWARD LOVE FOREVERRRRRR.
READ WRITE LOVE YOUR STORY HOOO B.
1/1/2013 c33 Wolf Goddess
Who the hell is Vanessa?
Who the hell is Vanessa?
10/2/2010 c33 N0L0ng3rWr1t1ngH3r3
Aw! I love this story! It was so cool. But it feels complete now.
-Music
Aw! I love this story! It was so cool. But it feels complete now.
-Music
8/19/2010 c30 Little Angel of Love
I lurve where u goin withthis story! One side of my body is like do Mellisa's pov but the other side is like no if you keep going with bella's pov then the fight will come quicker making readers happier so I can't really help with that unless you do half of the chap in Mellisa's pov and the other half in Bella's like getting to know how both of them feel that would be pretty cool! Keep going
I lurve where u goin withthis story! One side of my body is like do Mellisa's pov but the other side is like no if you keep going with bella's pov then the fight will come quicker making readers happier so I can't really help with that unless you do half of the chap in Mellisa's pov and the other half in Bella's like getting to know how both of them feel that would be pretty cool! Keep going
8/17/2010 c25 nicky
it was awsome.p.s emeite,idiot
it was awsome.p.s emeite,idiot
8/14/2010 c14 crazyperson17
awesome she ran into someone she knows that awesome! oh wait i already said that...oh well...AWESOME!
awesome she ran into someone she knows that awesome! oh wait i already said that...oh well...AWESOME!