
5/19/2018 c1
7Valerie Chavous
I've always loved this story. I only ever got to chapter 28 so I have some catching up to do. I'm back after 5 years away from Fanfiction baby! #keen #ultimatefanfictionstoriesmarathom #legendarystorieslikethis

I've always loved this story. I only ever got to chapter 28 so I have some catching up to do. I'm back after 5 years away from Fanfiction baby! #keen #ultimatefanfictionstoriesmarathom #legendarystorieslikethis
10/1/2014 c47 KittyCat134
This is so... So... So romantic! I loved it a lot! Is there going to be a sequel? I really want a sequel!
This is so... So... So romantic! I loved it a lot! Is there going to be a sequel? I really want a sequel!
1/9/2014 c47 InsanityIsYourSalvation
That was awesome. There is no word to describe how untameable-y awesome that was! Thank you so much for putting this story into my mind! It's great...I just might have to reread it!
-Insanity
That was awesome. There is no word to describe how untameable-y awesome that was! Thank you so much for putting this story into my mind! It's great...I just might have to reread it!
-Insanity
1/9/2014 c40 InsanityIsYourSalvation
I'm loving the story! And NO I did not give a reveiw because of what you put at the end of this chapter! How dare you think such a thing! PSH! No!
I'm loving the story! And NO I did not give a reveiw because of what you put at the end of this chapter! How dare you think such a thing! PSH! No!
11/1/2013 c47 Guest
The ending sucks. What about the children dont they exist anymore.
The ending sucks. What about the children dont they exist anymore.
7/31/2013 c47 FlameOfThePheonex
You made me laugh, cry, scream, giggle, and more. You are an amazing writer and you have been given a gift. Your gift lets you touch the hearts of those who read your words.
You made me laugh, cry, scream, giggle, and more. You are an amazing writer and you have been given a gift. Your gift lets you touch the hearts of those who read your words.
7/8/2013 c47 luvPillow
You have nooo idea how long i've kept up with this story... it was amazing!And you say it was your first. Ibet if you keep at writing you'll be twice as good. Reading this story it was just... wow...
You have nooo idea how long i've kept up with this story... it was amazing!And you say it was your first. Ibet if you keep at writing you'll be twice as good. Reading this story it was just... wow...
5/18/2013 c47
8HimekoUchia
Sorry for not reviewing earlier got distracted by life...
Oh my gosh 5 babies? -_-' poor Akira's uterus/vagina...
Awwwww this was so sweet! I love the whole ending and chapter, it must have been painful for Gaara... But he loved her, so it was all worth it! And there is a happy ending so yay!
You typoed for the date... its supposed to be 2000 not 2010. Otherwise, no other visible errors.
I like Junko! and the last few lines always make me happy smile :)
Great story! congrats on finishing it! XD

Sorry for not reviewing earlier got distracted by life...
Oh my gosh 5 babies? -_-' poor Akira's uterus/vagina...
Awwwww this was so sweet! I love the whole ending and chapter, it must have been painful for Gaara... But he loved her, so it was all worth it! And there is a happy ending so yay!
You typoed for the date... its supposed to be 2000 not 2010. Otherwise, no other visible errors.
I like Junko! and the last few lines always make me happy smile :)
Great story! congrats on finishing it! XD
5/10/2013 c47
1xXBlackBeautyXx
I loved this story. it was very entertaining and heart filling. keep making some of these amazing stories:)

I loved this story. it was very entertaining and heart filling. keep making some of these amazing stories:)
5/8/2013 c47
4AceSeven
Well so love overcomes all is a fact and that has been proven to me more than once.

Well so love overcomes all is a fact and that has been proven to me more than once.
5/5/2013 c14 AceSeven
So, Akira's being targeted for her orbs, the same think the Kazekage is after I predict and she has a sun godess inside of her? Well I believe that later on in the story, Akira will protect herself and maybe Gaara will even protect her too, mostly because of Shukaku.
So, Akira's being targeted for her orbs, the same think the Kazekage is after I predict and she has a sun godess inside of her? Well I believe that later on in the story, Akira will protect herself and maybe Gaara will even protect her too, mostly because of Shukaku.
5/5/2013 c47
2X-Kookies-X
I can't believe this is your first story it's way to amazing and I totally didn't cry at the ending.

I can't believe this is your first story it's way to amazing and I totally didn't cry at the ending.
5/5/2013 c47 ChippedCoffeeCup
I loved this story and loved the ending it was a big twist that i wasn't expecting
And i liked how gaara stayed himself and his personality stayed the same as in canon
I loved this story and loved the ending it was a big twist that i wasn't expecting
And i liked how gaara stayed himself and his personality stayed the same as in canon
5/2/2013 c47
5Leahcar-Soutaichou
Oh my god.. This has been one of the best stories I've ever read in my life.. I have laughed and cried. It makes me look at my life and say, "Man I wish it was like that.". I'm so happy I got to read this _ I hope to read more like this in the future!

Oh my god.. This has been one of the best stories I've ever read in my life.. I have laughed and cried. It makes me look at my life and say, "Man I wish it was like that.". I'm so happy I got to read this _ I hope to read more like this in the future!