for Butterfly Kisses11/7/2005 c1 
7Vylette Satine
Oh, man... you people keep on reminding me I'm a DADDY's GIRL!
I cried... I really did... because I love my daddy...
I loved this fic... very much...
7Vylette SatineOh, man... you people keep on reminding me I'm a DADDY's GIRL!
I cried... I really did... because I love my daddy...
I loved this fic... very much...
10/25/2004 c1 Kristi07
Hi there,
Good story, but I just thought you might like to know that you made a few errors in your writing. First, you chose the word "alter" to indicate where the marriage ceremony took place. This word means "to change". The correct word is "altar". Second, I couldn't help but notice that the use of the word "your" was incorrect in the following sentence: "Your welcome, Koneko,...". It should have been "You're", which is the contraction of "You are". This is a major error that a lot of people make and it really needs to be corrected for your writing to be taken seriously. There were a couple of other details, but those were the major two that stuck out in my mind. Hope that helps for future writing.
Hi there,
Good story, but I just thought you might like to know that you made a few errors in your writing. First, you chose the word "alter" to indicate where the marriage ceremony took place. This word means "to change". The correct word is "altar". Second, I couldn't help but notice that the use of the word "your" was incorrect in the following sentence: "Your welcome, Koneko,...". It should have been "You're", which is the contraction of "You are". This is a major error that a lot of people make and it really needs to be corrected for your writing to be taken seriously. There were a couple of other details, but those were the major two that stuck out in my mind. Hope that helps for future writing.
7/23/2004 c1 blue bear
lol hiya!
^-^;;
i luv ur story!
i actually cried...-.-;;
keep writing!
lol hiya!
^-^;;
i luv ur story!
i actually cried...-.-;;
keep writing!
1/13/2004 c1 B Asakura
I love it
I almost cry snif*
you are a great autor
I love it
I almost cry snif*
you are a great autor
8/30/2003 c1 Guest
i cried awsome job oh the saddness
i cried awsome job oh the saddness
8/11/2003 c1 Ruby
*sob* So sweet *Sob*
*sob* So sweet *Sob*
8/6/2003 c1 Chaosu Kokoro
That's so sweet. ;.;
That's so sweet. ;.;
7/31/2003 c2 Ivy
You fic was actually heart-warming. I give my support to Killer Angel.
You fic was actually heart-warming. I give my support to Killer Angel.
7/9/2003 c1 7Python1984
I love the sonf Butterfly Kisses. It describes Vegeta and his little princess well.
7Python1984I love the sonf Butterfly Kisses. It describes Vegeta and his little princess well.
7/1/2003 c1 SilverKnight
It's...sappy. That's all I can think of at the moment, but then, I haven't slept in almost 24 hours. It's not bad, though.
It's...sappy. That's all I can think of at the moment, but then, I haven't slept in almost 24 hours. It's not bad, though.
6/26/2003 c1 wha
I LOVE THIS FIC!
I LOVE THIS FIC!