
2/4/2015 c8 RebelKing
Great story, but a sequel would be great. And the sequel should have more porn.
Great story, but a sequel would be great. And the sequel should have more porn.
7/16/2014 c8 Ms. S
I loved this story. Well done.
I loved this story. Well done.
6/19/2014 c1 john
It's a very good story, to bad you didn't fix your spelling! Ha, that,s obviously funny
It's a very good story, to bad you didn't fix your spelling! Ha, that,s obviously funny
4/7/2013 c8 Matt
Really liked it but I whant more its a beast story
Really liked it but I whant more its a beast story
4/7/2013 c6 Matt
I want to see them but I think you have all ready decided
I want to see them but I think you have all ready decided
7/30/2012 c8
1Masterbluestar
very good story and its not hared to make me squle with exciment (no joke) but this story is a very well done in depth story and hope that you might be able to update because i know as a wrighter myself that many people would like to see a very good ending but but in the long run a very good story and hope to see more good storys

very good story and its not hared to make me squle with exciment (no joke) but this story is a very well done in depth story and hope that you might be able to update because i know as a wrighter myself that many people would like to see a very good ending but but in the long run a very good story and hope to see more good storys
12/31/2011 c8
40Jedi Ani Unduli
Excellent ending.
Hope you had a Merry Christmas and may you have a Happy New Year!
~Ani

Excellent ending.
Hope you had a Merry Christmas and may you have a Happy New Year!
~Ani
12/21/2011 c7
5Padfootkicksbutt
this story idea was awesome and well executed, i just wish there was more written :/

this story idea was awesome and well executed, i just wish there was more written :/
12/5/2011 c7 jenn
i look forward to reading more! i really loved reading this so far. it would be pretty sweet if they went off to yavin 4 or something and began luke's jedi order before he was born ;P also anakin could so join them
i look forward to reading more! i really loved reading this so far. it would be pretty sweet if they went off to yavin 4 or something and began luke's jedi order before he was born ;P also anakin could so join them
1/31/2011 c7
40Jedi Ani Unduli
I could just see this coming? Wow! All those guys leaving? I can't wait for another update. This is so cool! I foresee two possible marriages coming up!
~Ani

I could just see this coming? Wow! All those guys leaving? I can't wait for another update. This is so cool! I foresee two possible marriages coming up!
~Ani
1/25/2011 c7
5charliebrown1234
That's okay. Everybody gets writers block and leaves a story hanging at least once in their lives... That's why I only have two stories up! If I don't start 'em, I don't have to update 'em! Anywho, thanks for updating!
~charliebrown1234

That's okay. Everybody gets writers block and leaves a story hanging at least once in their lives... That's why I only have two stories up! If I don't start 'em, I don't have to update 'em! Anywho, thanks for updating!
~charliebrown1234
12/4/2010 c6
40Jedi Ani Unduli
C'mon! They can't do this! Not yet! Couldn't they disappear sometime during a battle... or something? I mean, why can't Luminara be crazy and hide this with her friends?
Anyways, great story. More, please?
~Ani

C'mon! They can't do this! Not yet! Couldn't they disappear sometime during a battle... or something? I mean, why can't Luminara be crazy and hide this with her friends?
Anyways, great story. More, please?
~Ani