for Dream of a Normal Life5/10/2011 c1 Black Dragon Slayer
Write another chapter for the jalior already!
Write another chapter for the jalior already!
6/28/2010 c1 puffdadder
now you didn't just give up on this story did you? -glares- it's pretty good, leaves you wondering what'll happen. So is this like AU modern times?
Why it's a good chap,
catches your interest, leaving you wanting more. The grammar is good. A couple of times could use a little word variance (Photographer scene), but not much, happens to the best of us. as for the content, there's something eerie, underlying the surface calling you. nice job, thanks for your contribution. :)
now you didn't just give up on this story did you? -glares- it's pretty good, leaves you wondering what'll happen. So is this like AU modern times?
Why it's a good chap,
catches your interest, leaving you wanting more. The grammar is good. A couple of times could use a little word variance (Photographer scene), but not much, happens to the best of us. as for the content, there's something eerie, underlying the surface calling you. nice job, thanks for your contribution. :)