
2/18/2010 c4
1Spontaneous.Combustion99
i like this chapter.
i dont have braces, but i have glasses that are a little thick rimmed.
my first day of highschool was spent staring at the floor. lol
you captured it perfectly.
liked the random too :P

i like this chapter.
i dont have braces, but i have glasses that are a little thick rimmed.
my first day of highschool was spent staring at the floor. lol
you captured it perfectly.
liked the random too :P
2/18/2010 c4
17Asher Knight
Awesome chapter.
I loved all of it.
Caleb is so sweet
and Logan deserved
the black eye.
Nice job...
Update soon please
and the ending did
not suck. It was really
very good. :)
xoxo
Kris♥

Awesome chapter.
I loved all of it.
Caleb is so sweet
and Logan deserved
the black eye.
Nice job...
Update soon please
and the ending did
not suck. It was really
very good. :)
xoxo
Kris♥
2/16/2010 c3 Venetiangrl92
random made my day! great chapter and yes u could push Kira in but y make the pool suffer? you could expand there relationship or put Caleb's pov on the story/ his feelings and how and when they started
random made my day! great chapter and yes u could push Kira in but y make the pool suffer? you could expand there relationship or put Caleb's pov on the story/ his feelings and how and when they started
2/15/2010 c3
11x XRoweenaJAugustineX x
you could always go back and strech it out so its like a long and prosperous story. I'd read that.

you could always go back and strech it out so its like a long and prosperous story. I'd read that.
2/15/2010 c2 x XRoweenaJAugustineX x
too short 4 my taste. I love this story. please update soon!
~~P.S
I don't like Sarah either. Blonde bimbo has Caleb! *jealous rawr.*
too short 4 my taste. I love this story. please update soon!
~~P.S
I don't like Sarah either. Blonde bimbo has Caleb! *jealous rawr.*
2/15/2010 c3
17Asher Knight
Great chapter. I
loved every word.
It was awesome.
For the next chapter,
maybe you could write
a flashback scene of
Rachel and Caleb
on their first day
of high school. You
could use Taylor Swift's
song Fifteen. Or maybe
you could write
another chapter
about Rachel and
Caleb when he first started
dating Sarah and use
Taylor Swift's song
Teardrops On My Guitar.
Anyway, awesome chapter.
Update soon please.
xoxo
Kris♥

Great chapter. I
loved every word.
It was awesome.
For the next chapter,
maybe you could write
a flashback scene of
Rachel and Caleb
on their first day
of high school. You
could use Taylor Swift's
song Fifteen. Or maybe
you could write
another chapter
about Rachel and
Caleb when he first started
dating Sarah and use
Taylor Swift's song
Teardrops On My Guitar.
Anyway, awesome chapter.
Update soon please.
xoxo
Kris♥
2/14/2010 c2 Spontaneous.Combustion99
i like this..
i LOVE the little random piece at the end.
you should put a random at the end of every chapter
lol
i like this..
i LOVE the little random piece at the end.
you should put a random at the end of every chapter
lol
2/14/2010 c2
17Asher Knight
Can you please kick
Sarah for me too,
pretty please with
Caleb on top? 0_0
Awesome chapter, short
but that just makes
me want to read more.
Great job. I'll be
looking forward to
your update tomorrow.
:)
...hm, so I guess
I really don't have
to ask you to update
soon, do I...nah, gonna
do it anyway...please
update soon. :)
xoxo
Kris♥

Can you please kick
Sarah for me too,
pretty please with
Caleb on top? 0_0
Awesome chapter, short
but that just makes
me want to read more.
Great job. I'll be
looking forward to
your update tomorrow.
:)
...hm, so I guess
I really don't have
to ask you to update
soon, do I...nah, gonna
do it anyway...please
update soon. :)
xoxo
Kris♥