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2/18/2010 c4 Venetiangrl92
very cute chapter, logan so had that black eye coming
2/18/2010 c4 1Spontaneous.Combustion99
i like this chapter.

i dont have braces, but i have glasses that are a little thick rimmed.

my first day of highschool was spent staring at the floor. lol

you captured it perfectly.

liked the random too :P
2/18/2010 c4 17Asher Knight
Awesome chapter.

I loved all of it.

Caleb is so sweet

and Logan deserved

the black eye.

Nice job...

Update soon please

and the ending did

not suck. It was really

very good. :)

xoxo

Kris♥
2/16/2010 c3 Venetiangrl92
random made my day! great chapter and yes u could push Kira in but y make the pool suffer? you could expand there relationship or put Caleb's pov on the story/ his feelings and how and when they started
2/15/2010 c3 11x XRoweenaJAugustineX x
you could always go back and strech it out so its like a long and prosperous story. I'd read that.
2/15/2010 c2 x XRoweenaJAugustineX x
too short 4 my taste. I love this story. please update soon!

~~P.S

I don't like Sarah either. Blonde bimbo has Caleb! *jealous rawr.*
2/15/2010 c3 17Asher Knight
Great chapter. I

loved every word.

It was awesome.

For the next chapter,

maybe you could write

a flashback scene of

Rachel and Caleb

on their first day

of high school. You

could use Taylor Swift's

song Fifteen. Or maybe

you could write

another chapter

about Rachel and

Caleb when he first started

dating Sarah and use

Taylor Swift's song

Teardrops On My Guitar.

Anyway, awesome chapter.

Update soon please.

xoxo

Kris♥
2/15/2010 c3 1Spontaneous.Combustion99
OMIGODD!

love the random :P

the story is awesome too
2/15/2010 c2 Venetiangrl92
Tell sarah off! push her in the pool!
2/14/2010 c2 Spontaneous.Combustion99
i like this..

i LOVE the little random piece at the end.

you should put a random at the end of every chapter

lol
2/14/2010 c2 3Mistress Persephone
aww i usually like sarah but not in this case please update soon!
2/14/2010 c2 binxs13
I love it but I'm kinda confused
2/14/2010 c2 17Asher Knight
Can you please kick

Sarah for me too,

pretty please with

Caleb on top? 0_0

Awesome chapter, short

but that just makes

me want to read more.

Great job. I'll be

looking forward to

your update tomorrow.

:)

...hm, so I guess

I really don't have

to ask you to update

soon, do I...nah, gonna

do it anyway...please

update soon. :)

xoxo

Kris♥
2/14/2010 c1 Venetiangrl92
love it! update soon!
2/13/2010 c1 binxs13
I love it
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