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6/18/2010 c7 8Filthy Weeabu Trash
very nice, love the diolaug.
5/16/2010 c6 Filthy Weeabu Trash
a nice little chapter, could be longer i think but its still nice, try working on youre length of chapters. that would help a lot. also you may want to expand on your general plot.

but anyway, i though it was nice. keep it up.
5/16/2010 c6 19Lord Kelvin
Please do not post writing in chat format inside your chapters. It is illegal on FFN. Other sites may allow it, but here everyone complies to Content Guidelines.

Chapter one is a non-story character list. Please remove it.

Welcome to the site.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.
2/26/2010 c4 8Filthy Weeabu Trash

2/13/2010 c2 10reckless gamer
in terms of errors: there are many mainly you need to use pronouns instead of calling evrybody by their names everywhere, capitalzations are needed for names, you also need apostrophes or words like i'll will be ill and where are the periods by the way. finally you need more length but i'm not one to argue
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