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for Where Dwell the Brave at Heart The Outtakes

6/5/2012 c79 6Rayven49
Hi!

Poor Peter, always getting trampled. No wonder he housed to much resentment. You can just imagine it building up over the years as the things he said were ignored and trivialized.

I like Dearheart...sad to see her go :( But I also like the idea of making her more human by showing her life outside of school. Very Rowling of you.

So excited for Outtakes galore! I don't care how dark.

Yours,

Rayven
6/5/2012 c79 11Padfoot24601
Yo, thanks for putting a good spin on a mixed day :)

I really love Dearheart/Maynard :)

Actually Padfoot197

P.S Go to the studio tour! I was like a puppy on crack earlier today!
6/5/2012 c79 78deeplyshallow
I'm still here! Your first ever reviewer! When you were just a little Wicked girl (pointedly ignores the fact you're older than me). Not many authors can claim they still have their first reviewer reviewing after 3 years (god 3 years!) of course I haven't actually read further than the author's note - with my A levels in a week and everything but still :)

PS: you see what I mean by covers now? I think you can change the image depending on stories.
2/28/2012 c78 27HeartsandEyesDelight
So I've been working my way through your writing for the last week (still working on it, actually) and have been absolutely enthralled. I imagined that I would probably send you a review eventually telling you that I am one of the many people who read everything without reviewing (despite my own dislike for those people as a writer), but that your work was phenomenal. But your author's note on this last chapter compelled me to say this. I don't know what caused you to doubt your writing abilities, but you shouldn't. You are a fantastic writer, no matter if you're writing fanfiction, and the depth and clarity of your characters has completely captivated me. I find it hard to imagine any other set of parents for Remus, or any other first love, for that matter. You have expanded on Rowling's world in a way that is worthy of her, and that is not something I say lightly. I have, as yet, not successfully written anything in this fandom because I am so certain that nothing I write can live up to the original, and that she flushed out the world so completely that there isn't anything I could possibly add that would improve upon it. But you have something to add. Your Marauders are epic and poignant and perfect, and I find myself laughing so hard reading your writing that I'm left in tears, and I don't know if it's because it's so funny or if it's because it's so perfectly fitting and appropriate. Please don't doubt yourself; you have real, unquestionable talent. :) That is all.
2/15/2012 c78 2silentpenguin
I DO love the light chapters... :) This one was cute and hilarious.

And honestly, your writing is great. Don't worry about it :)
2/15/2012 c78 6Rayven49
Ahaha a bit of Sirius guilt made Lupin a badass. So much love for this chapter. It was lovely! And certainly light :)

Can't wait for more!

Yours,

Rayven
2/14/2012 c78 1Aquarius23
lmao, thank you for updating, I needed to half wet myself yet again.

You're story always brightens my day, I've said this about 100 times but I'm in love with your characters, they're perfect!

Sorry I didn't review last chapter, I read it but you updated before I got around to reviewing because I'm slow.

Anyways, loved it, pls update again soon :)
2/14/2012 c78 spawater
""And my own father! 'Remus, are you here with a girl?' No, Dad. I'm dating a fucking centaur!""

Love it!
2/13/2012 c78 1Queer King stephen
Thanks love this chapter made my day.lol

"no i'm dating a fucking centaur!"
2/13/2012 c78 32Louey06
This was great. I loved seeing Mr lupin, meeting your father on a date would be absolutely mortifying. I loved watching Remus flip out at the marauders. Is Sirius Remus' personal stylist? he seems to lend out clothes a lot
2/13/2012 c78 11BluLady
Chin up my dear, I think your writing is fantastic...

He cleared his throat. "What do you want, by the way?"

Lupin raised an eyebrow. "Nothing. You called me.

I love Remus and John interacting together, they both have such a dry wit.

"He's a Muppet. You know those things I collect? He's my favourite"

Excellent taste in muppets... although i do have a soft spot for miss piggy!

Sirius snorted. "Remus, you are a fucked-up little spaz."'

This one made me lol... Have I ever told you how much I love your Sirius? Yes? Oh well...

Not The Beatles, try The Who...

I'll probably be slated for this..but I whole heartedly agree...the beatles were good but the who were better :D

Amazing as ALWAYS!

Lea xXx
2/13/2012 c78 StarKid McFly
I love it again!

Poor Remus, nothing seemed to want to go right for him, however John was bloody hilarious and the other three as usual were just brilliant, just typical teenage boys.

Anna was wonderful as usual (I shall always love Anna and Electra) and I could slap Sirius as usual for making derogatory comments, but you really really capture the essence of teenage boys by doing that, and when he was helping Remus at the end that was hilarious!

Don't let any criticism or general rudeness knock you down. I can say without a doubt that you are my all time favourite author on fanfiction and you are very talented - you can make me laugh and cry and swear - sometimes all three at once. :)

I hope you have a better week this week and thank you for the update!

Rocky

Xxx
2/8/2012 c77 1Queer King stephen
Could you put in some more funny ones? The serious ones are important but I value the marauders for their carefree humor.
2/6/2012 c77 StarKid McFly
My love for Electra has just upped even further.

She's so comforting and oblivious and just perfect, and it just breaks my heart even more for Remus and Sirius and the Snape Incident.

This was a fantastic chapter that had a bittersweet tang to it and I loved it.

Thank you :)

Rocky x
2/6/2012 c77 6Rayven49
Thank you for this! I always liked the Electrius pairing but couldn't understand how'd they'd manage to get together. This makes it much more clear that Sirius and Electra care for more than just the sex when it comes to each other. Lots of Sirius angst=a lovely piece.

Can't wait for more!

Yours,

Rayven
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