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2/5/2012 c77 32Louey06
electra sure is a blessing for sirius. he probabl relly needed to have someone to talk to who wouldn't be mad with him which is just what he got. Great chapter
1/20/2012 c76 6Rayven49
Oh this one made me so sad! Sirius is absolutely beastly to Remus. And James never did manage to say no to him...ever.

I like the bit at the end where James isn't as fast as Remus, who's sitting behind them and trying to be unobtrusive. :)

Can't wait for more!

Yours,

Rayven
1/19/2012 c76 StarKid McFly
Sirius is so horrid! Poor Remus D:

But another wonderful chapter and a real contrast to the recent few which works really well, I like it :D

Rocky

Xx
1/19/2012 c76 32Louey06
He is comedy gold, just not i quite the way Sirius thinks. lovely chapter, Poor Remus, james and Surius can be so mena. making fun of his stutter (whike totally understandable) was really creul and tactless, especially since James was trying (emphasis on trying) to be nice. I look forward to next chapter!
1/19/2012 c76 17Snarky64
Oh no! I don't think I can bear small Lupin being bullied by Sirius! However, it was an excellent chapter!
1/2/2012 c74 3Geek09
Loved the John-Sirius interaction here! I think he made a good impression :)
1/1/2012 c2 1SarikaS
Dear Scandalacious Intentions,

This is not a review for the chapter, but for all your writings in general. I have read each and every one of your Harry Potter stories and all I can say is that your plots are very interesting and new. The stories are touching, heartrendingly real, which is their real charm. I was wondering , if you could do a piece about the aftermath of Sirius' incarceration from the point of view of Electra Nott. I know these things cannot be ordered at will , but I think that has the potential for a great story. Keep up the good work .

Wishing you the best,

Sarika S
12/28/2011 c75 spawater
Aaah, Remus, the poor boy. I liked this chapter a lot 3
12/26/2011 c75 6Rayven49
Ha, I loved this. Peter just messes up everyone's lives, and he doesn't even mean to. Yet.

And I can't wait for Electrius! That makes me ridiculously excited.

Can't wait for more!

Yours,

Rayven
12/26/2011 c75 StarKid McFly
Fabulous chapter. Absolutely brilliant! I love the girls, they're so realistic, and they're likable too which is always great :D I also loved the smooth transition from girls to Marauders, who were even funnier. :D

And that ending paragraph... Hilarious, absolutely brilliant.

Thank you so much for this lovely chapter and I hope you had a lovely Christmas and are set for a fab New Year.

Rocky

Xxxx :)
12/23/2011 c4 Loserslurgy
I really don't think Peter's that cunning and evil I actually think he was quite lovable
12/15/2011 c74 StarKid McFly
Brilliantly funny chapter! I love John and the ending made me giggle like hell!

And your a/n made me laugh too, although I'm sorry you had to put up with this girl/woman :D

Rocky

Xx
12/15/2011 c74 spawater
I now have very disturbing images of Sitius trying to seduce Remus's mum in my mind... Great chapter, though.
12/14/2011 c74 32Louey06
Wonderful, as usual. I;ve started to notie that my favorite lines in the chapters are usually the very last ones. I really liked Mr Lupin in this, he's so awesome. I look forward to next chapter, please update as soon as possible.
12/14/2011 c74 6Rayven49
loved this! sirius vulnerable and making his connection to the lupins :) it was perfect in how uncomfortable it was and how satisfying at the same time.

can't wait for more!

yours,

Rayven
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