
9/23/2014 c5 Guest
You switch your POV WAYYY to many times.
You switch your POV WAYYY to many times.
8/17/2012 c21 Anonymous
i loooovvveee this story!
i loooovvveee this story!
6/4/2011 c9
7Teehee Tummytums
its a pretty good concept, it just needs to flow better with more story. Not just this happened, this happened, then that happened. You need an in-between, you know?
Anyway, it's a good plot line

its a pretty good concept, it just needs to flow better with more story. Not just this happened, this happened, then that happened. You need an in-between, you know?
Anyway, it's a good plot line
3/11/2011 c21
4SpiralNinja05
ah a very good chapter. I just found this story today and i loved it. I hope you continue this story. ^^

ah a very good chapter. I just found this story today and i loved it. I hope you continue this story. ^^
2/22/2011 c19 amaranteotaku
Yay, a real chapter after authors notes, haha ;) And a very good one, if I do say so myself.
Yay, a real chapter after authors notes, haha ;) And a very good one, if I do say so myself.
2/22/2011 c3 amaranteotaku
Ahaha, lol, nakedness is my favorite thing in the worl-
ANYWAY, this is awesome, but can you make longer chapters?
Ahaha, lol, nakedness is my favorite thing in the worl-
ANYWAY, this is awesome, but can you make longer chapters?
2/22/2011 c1 amaranteotaku
This is a really good beginning! Can I ask, though, why it's all in bold? It makes it harder to read, but ANYWHO...
This is a really good beginning! Can I ask, though, why it's all in bold? It makes it harder to read, but ANYWHO...
8/4/2010 c14
2Jesse Rae
Awesomeness. This story is going to be good, I can't wait for the next chapter. Iggy sounds pretty happy. Update soon please.

Awesomeness. This story is going to be good, I can't wait for the next chapter. Iggy sounds pretty happy. Update soon please.
7/8/2010 c12 Jesse Rae
Wow, didn't expect that. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder how the teacher is going to react to finding out that Iggy is blind too.
Wow, didn't expect that. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder how the teacher is going to react to finding out that Iggy is blind too.
6/22/2010 c10 Jesse Rae
Awesomeness. Really short, but oh well, at least it's something. I can't wait to read what happens. Update as soon as you can please.
Awesomeness. Really short, but oh well, at least it's something. I can't wait to read what happens. Update as soon as you can please.