for The Karana Incident4/8/2014 c1 wannabepokemorph
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2/9/2014 c1 
13What Lies Beyond
Not bad. A bit of background might be nice, especially since most of the characters were human at one point.
13What Lies BeyondNot bad. A bit of background might be nice, especially since most of the characters were human at one point.
3/15/2010 c1 slyfox
love this one. is there going to be more? would love to more about the accident. keep up the good work.
love this one. is there going to be more? would love to more about the accident. keep up the good work.
2/15/2010 c1 s11jande
Good start! When I read the summary, I was expecting the Karana Incident to be in the first chapter, but this is a good idea too. Also like the idea of using a new region. I'm trying to make one too.
Good start! When I read the summary, I was expecting the Karana Incident to be in the first chapter, but this is a good idea too. Also like the idea of using a new region. I'm trying to make one too.
2/14/2010 c1 5Perri Lightfoot
I practically fell out of my chair when I saw this XD Five+ years and a ton of pestering later, you FINALLY deliver in starting a new fanfic! :) There's not really enough here for me to critique - it seems somewhat interesting, even if the whole idea of morphs (not to mention pokemon disguised as morphs) owning Pokemon and going on Trainer journeys always struck me as being in somewhat bad taste ^^' The setting also seems a little dull at the moment - three weeks after a major, catastrophic change like this and I don't think life would "return to normal" so quickly - but I trust that you'll be able to liven things up and make something unique of this, rather than a typical OC Trainer fic with pokemorphs and a transfigured Lugia stuck in for flavor :) Keep up on writing this, Kura! I look forward to where you take it and to seeing what happens (hopefully, it involves plusle XD ); and getting to know these characters more (especially Laura and her odd decision to mingle among the humans XD ).
5Perri LightfootI practically fell out of my chair when I saw this XD Five+ years and a ton of pestering later, you FINALLY deliver in starting a new fanfic! :) There's not really enough here for me to critique - it seems somewhat interesting, even if the whole idea of morphs (not to mention pokemon disguised as morphs) owning Pokemon and going on Trainer journeys always struck me as being in somewhat bad taste ^^' The setting also seems a little dull at the moment - three weeks after a major, catastrophic change like this and I don't think life would "return to normal" so quickly - but I trust that you'll be able to liven things up and make something unique of this, rather than a typical OC Trainer fic with pokemorphs and a transfigured Lugia stuck in for flavor :) Keep up on writing this, Kura! I look forward to where you take it and to seeing what happens (hopefully, it involves plusle XD ); and getting to know these characters more (especially Laura and her odd decision to mingle among the humans XD ).