for Micro Effect3/7/2010 c2 
5Candle in the Night
Ha ha ha ha I love the first two chapters! I can't believe I missed this fic! And yes, I always thought Illium had quite a few moments where your potential love interst might have got a little jealous.
Brilliant little translation at the bottom too!
5Candle in the NightHa ha ha ha I love the first two chapters! I can't believe I missed this fic! And yes, I always thought Illium had quite a few moments where your potential love interst might have got a little jealous.
Brilliant little translation at the bottom too!
3/7/2010 c11 1OnlyDeadStoriesHere
"Bitch'n."? Oh wow. That's an interesting reaction. Personally, I shuddered when I EDI say that.
Minor nitpick, the 1/10th light speed thing for the Infantry weapons is off. Even Dreadnoughts (which have entire fusion or anti-matter power plants inside them) only fire at 1.3% light speed, so I don't think ME small arms shoot any faster then hypersonic speeds.
Other then that everything looks good. This has been a fun story so far and I look forward to reading more.
1OnlyDeadStoriesHere"Bitch'n."? Oh wow. That's an interesting reaction. Personally, I shuddered when I EDI say that.
Minor nitpick, the 1/10th light speed thing for the Infantry weapons is off. Even Dreadnoughts (which have entire fusion or anti-matter power plants inside them) only fire at 1.3% light speed, so I don't think ME small arms shoot any faster then hypersonic speeds.
Other then that everything looks good. This has been a fun story so far and I look forward to reading more.
3/7/2010 c4 a reader
Why bother about the British/Australian thing anyway?
'The Australian Cerberus Operative [did something]' sounds completely unnatural. (hint: did you find similar phrases in the last book you read?)
Why bother about the British/Australian thing anyway?
'The Australian Cerberus Operative [did something]' sounds completely unnatural. (hint: did you find similar phrases in the last book you read?)
3/7/2010 c11 3Angelos D. Wolf
"Bitch'n!"
Seriously though, pretty damn cool. That Maw was one of the most frustrating parts, and it still holds the good humor you implement in your stories, bonus! Anyway, really cool man, can't wait for more.
Angelos.
3Angelos D. Wolf"Bitch'n!"
Seriously though, pretty damn cool. That Maw was one of the most frustrating parts, and it still holds the good humor you implement in your stories, bonus! Anyway, really cool man, can't wait for more.
Angelos.
3/7/2010 c11 tankanon
Hah.
Seems like your Shepard has a thing for dem Krogan wimmenz.
Good chapter. :D
Hah.
Seems like your Shepard has a thing for dem Krogan wimmenz.
Good chapter. :D
3/4/2010 c10 28Sharem
*laughs* This is by far one of the funniest stories I have read on this site...XD I love Tali's jealousy and the shower incident with Garrus's POV...XD This chapter has it's great points too...my favorite part is when he made a soundbite stating that was it was his favorite adult movie...XD
28Sharem*laughs* This is by far one of the funniest stories I have read on this site...XD I love Tali's jealousy and the shower incident with Garrus's POV...XD This chapter has it's great points too...my favorite part is when he made a soundbite stating that was it was his favorite adult movie...XD
3/4/2010 c10 tankanon
Wait.
Human/Krogan porn.
After thoroughly allowing that phrase seep into my mind, I find myself wishing that I had a firearm nearby so I could blow my goddamned brains out.
_
Seriously though, you're pretty good. Few One-Shot collections are good, but yours sticks out to me.
Could I request something Shepard/Tali related soon?
Wait.
Human/Krogan porn.
After thoroughly allowing that phrase seep into my mind, I find myself wishing that I had a firearm nearby so I could blow my goddamned brains out.
_
Seriously though, you're pretty good. Few One-Shot collections are good, but yours sticks out to me.
Could I request something Shepard/Tali related soon?
3/4/2010 c10 Minesweep 100
This chapter is a masterpiece. Faved, Reviewed, and recommended on other sites. You win, sir. Bravo.
This chapter is a masterpiece. Faved, Reviewed, and recommended on other sites. You win, sir. Bravo.
2/28/2010 c9 3Angelos D. Wolf
Excellent, all superbly excellent! I really enjoyed the humor in it, something we see in the game itself, but not as often as I would have liked. This really helps to counter the seriousness of the game where death is at every corner and makes life on the Normandy much more real and flushed out than going from room to room, talking to people, learning about them, pulling your dead fish out of the water tank in your quarters, and hitting up the star map for another mission. Very cool, and genuinely funny too, make more soon, please!
Angelos.
3Angelos D. WolfExcellent, all superbly excellent! I really enjoyed the humor in it, something we see in the game itself, but not as often as I would have liked. This really helps to counter the seriousness of the game where death is at every corner and makes life on the Normandy much more real and flushed out than going from room to room, talking to people, learning about them, pulling your dead fish out of the water tank in your quarters, and hitting up the star map for another mission. Very cool, and genuinely funny too, make more soon, please!
Angelos.
2/28/2010 c9 RacingM3GTR
I hope the guys find out who had stolen their hot water - I can't exactly imagine a bunch of men beating Shepard up, but it'd be funny nonetheless.
I hope the guys find out who had stolen their hot water - I can't exactly imagine a bunch of men beating Shepard up, but it'd be funny nonetheless.