for Micro Effect2/27/2010 c1 Shart-Ruse
You still have "Sheppard" in the first paragraph. Also, much how "human" is left lowercase when referring to the species, so are the names of alien species. Example: krogan instead of Krogan.
Nitpicky stuff aside, it was an enjoyable read.
You still have "Sheppard" in the first paragraph. Also, much how "human" is left lowercase when referring to the species, so are the names of alien species. Example: krogan instead of Krogan.
Nitpicky stuff aside, it was an enjoyable read.
2/27/2010 c4 ViktorMayrin
Yvonne Strahovsky, the lady voicing Miranda, is Australian, actually.
Though, to be fair, they put the Queen on their money, too.
Yvonne Strahovsky, the lady voicing Miranda, is Australian, actually.
Though, to be fair, they put the Queen on their money, too.
2/27/2010 c9 
8Sayle
Hah! Amusing, certainly, and a nice tie in this chapter to the one where Shepard originally commandeers the hot water.
8SayleHah! Amusing, certainly, and a nice tie in this chapter to the one where Shepard originally commandeers the hot water.
2/27/2010 c9 18Allora Gale
lmao. These are good. I can't wait for more. I like your Shepard, he's a hilariously selfish badass.
18Allora Galelmao. These are good. I can't wait for more. I like your Shepard, he's a hilariously selfish badass.
2/20/2010 c2 Anonymous
“You’d make a worthy opponent, little Quarian, but I believe it would be best to save our strength fighting the Collectors rather than each other.”
A krogan refusing to fight?
“You’d make a worthy opponent, little Quarian, but I believe it would be best to save our strength fighting the Collectors rather than each other.”
A krogan refusing to fight?
2/20/2010 c8 RacingM3GTR
Also, will you be writing anything about Legion? Adding Tali in the same chapter would be a bonus.
Also, will you be writing anything about Legion? Adding Tali in the same chapter would be a bonus.
2/20/2010 c8 RacingM3GTR
I would've picked Samara. I don't really know why though. Maybe because Morinth kills you if you try to have sex with her.
I hope your Shepard does NOT make the same mistake Nef and every single one of Morinth's victims did.
I would've picked Samara. I don't really know why though. Maybe because Morinth kills you if you try to have sex with her.
I hope your Shepard does NOT make the same mistake Nef and every single one of Morinth's victims did.
2/19/2010 c7 5The Mad Dragon
Well... Hawthorne didn't do NOTHING he DID try to save Joker from the Collectors... even though he got his ass handed to him...
5The Mad DragonWell... Hawthorne didn't do NOTHING he DID try to save Joker from the Collectors... even though he got his ass handed to him...
2/19/2010 c7 RacingM3GTR
Goodbye Joker... we'll all miss you.
Also, what will happen to the two crewmembers? Krogan food?
Goodbye Joker... we'll all miss you.
Also, what will happen to the two crewmembers? Krogan food?
2/18/2010 c6 Dark omega z
I'll say this again; Joker you will be missed greatly.
This is a lesson for the crew, Never F* with Shepard. And Karma is a lovable b!tch when it wants to be.
I'll say this again; Joker you will be missed greatly.
This is a lesson for the crew, Never F* with Shepard. And Karma is a lovable b!tch when it wants to be.
2/18/2010 c5 5Stickki
These are really funny, and easy to read.
Exchange between Tali and Grunt was cool.
You should write more of Grunt.
5StickkiThese are really funny, and easy to read.
Exchange between Tali and Grunt was cool.
You should write more of Grunt.
2/18/2010 c5 Dark omega z
Joker, you will be missed greatly.
I'll give Shepard 4 hours tops to find out the truth, just hope Joker will still be alive when karma bites back XD
Joker, you will be missed greatly.
I'll give Shepard 4 hours tops to find out the truth, just hope Joker will still be alive when karma bites back XD
2/18/2010 c4 2Angurvddel
*snickers* okay these are pretty awesome. Good characterizations, and highly amusing.
(Random nitpick though, Miranda's accent is actually Australian, not British.)
2Angurvddel*snickers* okay these are pretty awesome. Good characterizations, and highly amusing.
(Random nitpick though, Miranda's accent is actually Australian, not British.)
2/18/2010 c4 3Malakai013
Carry on ladies indeed.
The man's gone mad with power!
No one can stop the renegade Shepard when he sets his mind on something! MWAHAHAHAHA!
Good chapter all things considered. Short but sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter and the zany hi-jinks that are bound to happen.
3Malakai013Carry on ladies indeed.
The man's gone mad with power!
No one can stop the renegade Shepard when he sets his mind on something! MWAHAHAHAHA!
Good chapter all things considered. Short but sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter and the zany hi-jinks that are bound to happen.