for The Darkest Hour8/2/2022 c7 TennesseeCaliforniaGuy
You should have had this in third person... it being in Edward pov and him reading every ones mind is OOC cause he would literally only focus on bella..
You should have had this in third person... it being in Edward pov and him reading every ones mind is OOC cause he would literally only focus on bella..
8/2/2022 c3 TennesseeCaliforniaGuy
new Moon only works cause bella never moved on. Bella moved on in this fic so all the hurt feelings that are sure to come will not hit hard... You will have to ignore the fact that Bella actually moved on and was happy.
new Moon only works cause bella never moved on. Bella moved on in this fic so all the hurt feelings that are sure to come will not hit hard... You will have to ignore the fact that Bella actually moved on and was happy.
4/20/2014 c32 1853kaz
Thank you for the privilege! A well thought out, satisfying take on the twiverse. :)
Thank you for the privilege! A well thought out, satisfying take on the twiverse. :)
4/20/2014 c31 1853kaz
What a place to end! Kinda good, though. We know just how ready these 2 are for this moment. :)
What a place to end! Kinda good, though. We know just how ready these 2 are for this moment. :)
4/19/2014 c20 1853kaz
Great discussions, even though I flinch with Edward. All the better in the long run :)
Great discussions, even though I flinch with Edward. All the better in the long run :)
4/19/2014 c19 1853kaz
He's kinda slow on the uptake! I wonder if hearing Jacob and Bella together will foster his insecurities? :)
He's kinda slow on the uptake! I wonder if hearing Jacob and Bella together will foster his insecurities? :)