for The Darkest Hour6/22/2010 c17 
9BAFan
"Don't go all caveman on me." Heh, I love that line. This chapter is *so* satisfying! After what felt like a long buildup and several backslidings, they're finally together again. Hallelujah!
Of course, there remains the problem of Bella being human and Edward not wanting to change her, and how this love will be consummated. Good job, btw, reminding us that Edward still has control issues around Bella - or thinks he does. *g*
Can't wait!
9BAFan"Don't go all caveman on me." Heh, I love that line. This chapter is *so* satisfying! After what felt like a long buildup and several backslidings, they're finally together again. Hallelujah!
Of course, there remains the problem of Bella being human and Edward not wanting to change her, and how this love will be consummated. Good job, btw, reminding us that Edward still has control issues around Bella - or thinks he does. *g*
Can't wait!
6/21/2010 c17 1WrestlingDiva
Definately worth the wait! Edward was so different then! And i like how you made Edward such a strong man. "if you love someone truly, you can let them go and all you want id for them to be happy". Edward defiantely portrayed that type of reasoning, I always knew bella didnt fully love Jacob. I guessed that when I read the first chapter, but I was glad to know it all the same. I am also happy bella and Edward are happily back together and great job to the others for helping to get them back. I dont know if you ever mentioned it, but you should do some past things to let us know how charlie died and what ever happened to bellas mom and such...just an idea. lol great job though. Cant wait for the next chapter!
1WrestlingDivaDefinately worth the wait! Edward was so different then! And i like how you made Edward such a strong man. "if you love someone truly, you can let them go and all you want id for them to be happy". Edward defiantely portrayed that type of reasoning, I always knew bella didnt fully love Jacob. I guessed that when I read the first chapter, but I was glad to know it all the same. I am also happy bella and Edward are happily back together and great job to the others for helping to get them back. I dont know if you ever mentioned it, but you should do some past things to let us know how charlie died and what ever happened to bellas mom and such...just an idea. lol great job though. Cant wait for the next chapter!
6/21/2010 c16 WrestlingDiva
I am so sorry i took so long to review. I have been so busy with work and with my family..ugh. I am getting a tattoo tomorrow so i have been dealing with that too. but anyway I really like this chapter. it was very informative and i cant wait to find out how bella reacted! I am getting ready to read chapter 17 now. Until next chapter :D
I am so sorry i took so long to review. I have been so busy with work and with my family..ugh. I am getting a tattoo tomorrow so i have been dealing with that too. but anyway I really like this chapter. it was very informative and i cant wait to find out how bella reacted! I am getting ready to read chapter 17 now. Until next chapter :D
6/21/2010 c17 TeamEmmette
Good turn of events, will they have sex and Bella still get pregnant? How would Jake react to that? Especially since his baby died? Somthing to think about.
Good turn of events, will they have sex and Bella still get pregnant? How would Jake react to that? Especially since his baby died? Somthing to think about.
6/20/2010 c16 9BAFan
All right! Things are finally moving forward! *great big happy grin* Jasper's explanation of why Bella reacted so strangely to Edward when he suggested he'd never stopped loving her, made a lot of sense. (And was that sentence convoluted or what?) And that's *so* like Bella, rushing off to be alone rather than confronting Edward with her feelings!
Jasper also makes a very good point when he tells Edward that their relationship has to change - that Bella needs to feel that she's Edward's equal in abilities, or she'll always feel like a child in need of protection.
I assume the next chapter will be the ladies' chat with Bella? Hopefully she'll summon enough courage to actually *talk* to Edward about what she's thinking and feeling. Can't wait to read it! Oh, and I liked the prank. It was benign and hurt no one and it was funny, lol!
Great chapter.
9BAFanAll right! Things are finally moving forward! *great big happy grin* Jasper's explanation of why Bella reacted so strangely to Edward when he suggested he'd never stopped loving her, made a lot of sense. (And was that sentence convoluted or what?) And that's *so* like Bella, rushing off to be alone rather than confronting Edward with her feelings!
Jasper also makes a very good point when he tells Edward that their relationship has to change - that Bella needs to feel that she's Edward's equal in abilities, or she'll always feel like a child in need of protection.
I assume the next chapter will be the ladies' chat with Bella? Hopefully she'll summon enough courage to actually *talk* to Edward about what she's thinking and feeling. Can't wait to read it! Oh, and I liked the prank. It was benign and hurt no one and it was funny, lol!
Great chapter.
6/19/2010 c16 ravenlovestwilight
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6/14/2010 c15 NJ94
That had to be emotional for her to see Jacob. I hope Edward soon opens up to her about his feelings. And I wonder what happened with the talk to Rosalie? Otherwise still very much enjoying the story.
That had to be emotional for her to see Jacob. I hope Edward soon opens up to her about his feelings. And I wonder what happened with the talk to Rosalie? Otherwise still very much enjoying the story.
6/10/2010 c15 BAFan
Another good chapter. A lot is going on, but you're not rushing things - damn it. ;) Bella's reaction to Edward's declaration of never having forgotten her is once again mystifying. I'm eager to find out the explanation for that!
Poor Bella. Finding out that Olivia has a child - what a blow.
I'm very curious about what everyone's up to - "the plan" - and can't wait to read what happens when Edward and Bella are away from each other. I know you'll update ASAP, but it can't be soon enough. :)
Another good chapter. A lot is going on, but you're not rushing things - damn it. ;) Bella's reaction to Edward's declaration of never having forgotten her is once again mystifying. I'm eager to find out the explanation for that!
Poor Bella. Finding out that Olivia has a child - what a blow.
I'm very curious about what everyone's up to - "the plan" - and can't wait to read what happens when Edward and Bella are away from each other. I know you'll update ASAP, but it can't be soon enough. :)
6/9/2010 c15 1WrestlingDiva
I like how this story is playing out. Everything is moving slowly and not rushing anything. I am excited to hear what happens while the boys are gone and the girls are home with Bella. Cant wait for the next chapter. I wasnt expecting Bella to be mad or upset about Edward still missing her. I thought she would have cried or something. Always leave me surprised! :D
1WrestlingDivaI like how this story is playing out. Everything is moving slowly and not rushing anything. I am excited to hear what happens while the boys are gone and the girls are home with Bella. Cant wait for the next chapter. I wasnt expecting Bella to be mad or upset about Edward still missing her. I thought she would have cried or something. Always leave me surprised! :D
6/5/2010 c14 WrestlingDiva
That is a good chapter...Although I hope Bella opens up to Edward and tells him what rose said and tell him whats bothering her...It is kinda suspense heightening! lol Cant wait for the next chapter!
That is a good chapter...Although I hope Bella opens up to Edward and tells him what rose said and tell him whats bothering her...It is kinda suspense heightening! lol Cant wait for the next chapter!
6/3/2010 c14 9BAFan
Maybe this chapter isn't as dramatic as some of the others, but there's quite a bit happening in it. Bella and Edward continue to grow closer (though I'm dying to find out just what she and Rosalie talked about that has her blushing every time Edward brings it up!). Edward cooked for the first time, making fettuccine Alfredo for Bella's dinner.
All in all, progress of the good kind. So now when's the next update? ;)
9BAFanMaybe this chapter isn't as dramatic as some of the others, but there's quite a bit happening in it. Bella and Edward continue to grow closer (though I'm dying to find out just what she and Rosalie talked about that has her blushing every time Edward brings it up!). Edward cooked for the first time, making fettuccine Alfredo for Bella's dinner.
All in all, progress of the good kind. So now when's the next update? ;)
5/4/2010 c13 BAFan
Aw, loved the ending! Pretty much loved the entire chapter, and wish I'd read it sooner (real life was a bit hectic this past week). Can't remember if I've mentioned this before, but it's heartwarming that the Cullen family cares so much for Bella that they'd put their own lives on hold for her.
I liked that Rosalie had her talk with Bella, and didn't blow it, lol. I don't quite understand why Bella got so upset when Edward asked her if she wanted to talk about it, though. There didn't seem to be any reason for her panicked reaction.
". . .nobody likes a voyeur. . . ."? This is different! Hmm, maybe Edward has matured a bit? *g*
Another good chapter!
Aw, loved the ending! Pretty much loved the entire chapter, and wish I'd read it sooner (real life was a bit hectic this past week). Can't remember if I've mentioned this before, but it's heartwarming that the Cullen family cares so much for Bella that they'd put their own lives on hold for her.
I liked that Rosalie had her talk with Bella, and didn't blow it, lol. I don't quite understand why Bella got so upset when Edward asked her if she wanted to talk about it, though. There didn't seem to be any reason for her panicked reaction.
". . .nobody likes a voyeur. . . ."? This is different! Hmm, maybe Edward has matured a bit? *g*
Another good chapter!
4/29/2010 c13 1WrestlingDiva
I love the whole watching movies and I am so glad that Edward and Bella are becoming closer. I hope things continue on :D I have to admit that I am curious about the whole conversation between Bella and Rosalie was about lol.. And I like how you told us about Carlisle and the thugs. Cant wait for the next chapter. :D
1WrestlingDivaI love the whole watching movies and I am so glad that Edward and Bella are becoming closer. I hope things continue on :D I have to admit that I am curious about the whole conversation between Bella and Rosalie was about lol.. And I like how you told us about Carlisle and the thugs. Cant wait for the next chapter. :D