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7/29/2018 c10 Ryoji Mochizuki
oh. ok.
3/10/2015 c2 1Lois Blu
Kinda wish you would've chosen a different bike type than a Harley. My dad is an enthusiast of anything with a motor, and I remember him talking about how Harleys just turn gas into noise, don't have that much power and are heavy as hell(reason for the big engine). Not sure if you were going for the 'muscular' look of the Harley but Kawasaki makes damn good looking bikes.

Though I do understand how you want her to stand out with having an American bike, so its okay.
10/2/2014 c3 11Rakuen91
At what part she realized haruhi is a girl? And she just blurted out being woman. Also keep taps on your name spelling.
1/25/2014 c3 12DeathFrown
I like how random and as anime-like as possible you've made your story. I've seen Ouran Host Club, repeated times. I don't regret that choice as much as I do the time when i saw... It's a fun anime which takes itself really lightly until some later episodes where they wanted to bring in us back-story to Tamaki-Senpai. :P
1/25/2014 c2 DeathFrown
"It's English so it must be fast." does not compute. Harvey Davidson was founded by Americans and therefore I call blasphemy! At the least change it to, "It's a Harvey Davidson so it must be fast." and another thing is, it ain't necessarily fast. Most bikes are usually fast along with exceptions to that. :P I don't especially care about it but it's something about not getting facts right when mentioning real life things is kinda annoying. :P
9/3/2013 c1 Wewillbeback
Um last time I checked we spoke English here in England. But yeah I'll read through the rest.
7/23/2012 c11 Hetomi
Please cont.
3/27/2012 c11 1darkspace137
is good please update
3/20/2012 c12 6Verdammten Ehrfurchtig
Please update Mysterious type.
12/17/2011 c11 5Needles of Rain
Lul. Just. Pure. Lul. I like it. :D Though... Tamaki isn't butting in as much. *gasp* XD Entertaining with the fangirls... XD That smchuk deserved what he got. XD *imagined Major getting flattened by Mori and Honey-senpai's drop kicks* 8D Ah, well, I can't wait for more of your story.
8/31/2011 c3 logan
Did she say she was a stunt woman?
8/19/2011 c11 5SilverNeira
... Continue... That's all... It's good...
7/18/2011 c11 1Kainen-no-Kitsune
I like that word, clubdescend.
7/10/2011 c11 6Verdammten Ehrfurchtig
Yay! I've been waiting for this 3. Save for the grammatical errors I... LOVED it.
5/24/2011 c2 naru894
i like the bike ^^

i think is sempai...

question do you want a betta? if you want one i am available ^^
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