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8/7/2014 c1 Guest
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
CUTE!
7/20/2014 c1 quadraticutie
Aw. This is so cute.
5/27/2014 c1 1love.friends.books
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
!
3/29/2014 c1 2Waitingforagame
Cuteeee
1/5/2014 c1 12sakura240
Kura: oh gosh, I am dying for the adorable sweetness of it all!

Berry: haha, I can really see their relationship be like that! :) and the use of those pick-up lines...hilarious...pbth...

Kura: though the demwntor one made me wanna smack america...anyway, I also love how luna talked about whatisits. I found it funny that she was discussing it with neville :D

Berry: anyway, this was really an adorable fic :)

Kura: damn, ill love it forever! XD
8/25/2013 c1 animebaka14
HA. THIS IS WAS SO SWEET I GOT DIABETES.

yeah i agree with the lamecakes ending. :I

DON'T JOKE WITH DEMENTOR'S ALFRED. THEY ARE SOME CREEPY SHIT

aanndddiamreadinganoldficit's2013nowlol
7/9/2013 c1 2JigglyJelloWithCoconut
This reminds me!
There is a fic called 'Crafty Words' by A Bleach-Drinking Hetalian where it is basically a Harry Potter pick-up lines showdown between America an dEngland.
I really recommend it! :D
6/22/2013 c1 3TheHeroicAmerica
Does Dumbledore read doujinshi?! I wouldn't be surprised...
6/21/2013 c1 26Fi Suki Saki
Boys in Love

*giggles*

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"Hey, Arthur, if you were a Dementor, I'd become a criminal just to get your kiss!"

*burst out laugh* XDDD

Seriously, Alfred?! LOL!
12/20/2012 c1 2UnstableFable
Awwwwwwwwwwww...

My feels! I...can't... *rolls*
10/3/2012 c1 Guest-sama
This is so freaking sweet!
I always read it to put a smile on my face!
8/13/2012 c1 10scarletskies123
I have one:
Your like levicorpus, able to sweep me off my feet without a word.

Is that any good?
7/25/2012 c1 11BernardTheWolf
haha i loved it! i like USUK when its AU, and the Potterverse is about as AU as u can get. the pick up lines were great!

I got a pick-up line! Is 'Jelly Legs' your trademark? Because you make me week in the knees.

Agh its so corny and lame!
6/20/2012 c1 35Zeplerfer
D'aw, this story contains so much fluff I can't even handle it. I also like how you managed to fit in so many Harry Potter references. I'm glad you placed Arthur in Ravenclaw. The fanon debate seems to be over making him a Gryffindor or a Slytherin, but Ravenclaw seems the best choice for him. Also, Dumbledore's reaction to USUK is perfect-I love how you subtly worked in a reference to his relationship with Grindelwald. Poor Dumbledore...

I think I spotted one typo: "blind blowing" should probably be "mind blowing." Otherwise, I don't have any comments on the writing style. It's an excellent mix of dialogue and description. I also like the style of having short scenes from everyone else's perspective, and then ending with a scene from the POV of Arthur and Alfred. The only part I don't understand is the title. Is it a reference to the Daedelus song?

Finally, here's my contribution to the Harry Potter pick-up lines:

"You must be a horcrux, because you've captured part of my soul."

Thank you for the lovely story!
6/14/2012 c1 1mlpnkobnhjui
BEST CROSSOVER EVER, that's all I have to say. USUK is my favorite pairing!
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