11/9/2020 c1 3abbyweyr
checking in on older stories and didn't review this first time. Sad and beautiful story.

3/25/2018 c1 Debbie Hicks
2 Chapter 2.
then Tan ya my wife was sick then then Alien rattlesnake knoc kede her out had a fem ale Isabella Cullen then too late with four sons then suddenly was drain ed as all of blood had Reyerson's Disease waas too far thinner then it was too late from the Alien rattle Sn akes she was aging fater then too late the medical place declareed her Clinically ill really sickest ran a fever then Edward we found the the cause she has truest Reryerson's Disease a blood disorder in the blood but the child aged to be a Woman is a teenager then too late Alice sighten a terrifying newest Event Carlisle tested her health was far too skinniest where it from Amanda Grayson Sarek oh no that herself with them waited her own heart to stop beating like in Breaking Dawn was Fred with us with them ther suddenly with her then with best friends as all of it then bodies were delivered to Italy then were iciest coldest blown apart then news of her death was resurrected so us both with them were more then herself was a different woman but the Bodies all of them waxen then too late herself had become someone else memory loss of the disease was turning her into a Living Corpse so us/they then too late newspapers now with all of them herseldf was in agonizing pain fire was into us/them with her then the teenager remembered she was a reincarn ate of her then came was born with teeth watch her mother undergo the Change found a mate was not human then too late with us/them suddenly had stopped birthing sterilized Alice what happened to us/them that Mom yes you got teeth/Fangs Doctor recall m e you died yes but the Womb is stone hardest with theirs Tanya you are a Kindred it is a new word it's a Vampire she/ brothers bitten me with him with others then snapped delivered then our death was real with theirs suddenly with theirs suddenly with them suddenly turn ed very too hardest smashed then delivered to Italy then n ews of her alien rebirth born with teeth an d longer canines were fangs she was frozen at Eighteen uh you need to hunt it's healther then tried it suddenly caused us/them to form a but were too late to save with the corpse of both then m erged together then destroyed a coven with cold skins and were as all of them as all of them were with bitten hum an s as all of them sudden as all of mazillions with help then blown caused the bodies to be destroyed then suddenly Exploding then were as all of as very far way too much as all of them suddenly had looks/voices ten had buried us/them as all of them she was right it turn ed us/them as all of therm into Vegetarians AAlice gotten a headache began feling a vision then suddenly a more supernatural thing Reading minds herself was a Mental block was a shield Tan ya could speak to the dead with their powers emerged but it was too late herself sighten Jake Black her own closed mouth was probing Words Do you Remember me Imzadi Do you Remember What I Have Taught you Can you still sense my Thoughts Alice! what it means please then it is a Betazoid word for Beloved Pu'! then tests proved she was cured but was Telepathic hair of lighter Brown with bangs was darker had very Strange colored eyes were Black irises oh my god she's what Betazoid weee a telepathic extraterrestrial civlization from the Planet Betazed but God sent her to you with Teenaged Ocampan Eers are pointed had the same Arching eyebrows are upswept wearing from the 1979 mini-series of White Martian Female robes religious jewelry hands neck and her longer more expanded hair was in Double colif swore to Apollo was a Acolyte of Gol was a Vulcan priestess was chaste from Artemis with her twin brother Apollo was still swearing Vows the Jewelry smashed then was real she was allowed to have religious freedom Sir! she is not human is a Vulcan priestess bound to religious life given service to her high master what is her n ewest name Sc'hn T'Gat T'Lar is new Name reborn again then now while in our house hugest then Asleep then with them Cracked delivered then too late had them studied then were poisoned were as all of them thre as all of them suddenly too late dead on Arrival then with thre e each bothas all m ated women then with her with the kids they later had kids fol;l;owed now imprinted then smashed from here delivered from here that herself had Eight kids but no longer fertile at all then were Immortal beings that were with Golden eyes paler skins cold as ice then too late were unable to reproduce at all of the diseasaesa then will lln esses with alimen ts sm ashed frely delivered now more as all of them then suddenly bodies aged far too much as all of them existed in the year 2165-2382 burst as all of them as all of them suddenly too late holes of the very as all of them then came too late the bodies were as all of them buried then too late as all of more smashed blood were drained had Red Eyes then caused as all of them were lured then news of as all of them were dead people walking deaceased that gain great-great-great-grandchildren were born different caused a shock that Tanya was very thin of the disease but gain ed newest super strength an d speed was really hungry was both so they had lost weight the caused was the birth of her kids were mated to different people our coven grown larger was expanding but it c am e too late while asleep blew freely then suddenly unable to breed caused us/them then blown twice then delivered then a Hugest noise as all of them suddenly more as all of them as all of them very far way too much man y more ten sudden ly had stopped agin g for good then suddenly the bodies as all of them buried more than as all of them caused as all of blood taken from here then no longer from here from a future then it really happened both merged then came with a very more monstrously as all of them of all of noises then caused a newest event lost the ablity to mate then TAanya was weaken by the disease was still more thinner the disease ran it's course then was too thin herself had help was not well who caused it and why to happen herself was stronger by now while asleep then blowen freely then crunched with the kids as all of them crunching freely then brought here to them via time travel then Atomized had them destroyed from here from the 21st to the early 23rd century then a Scream of Alice freaking out Volterra was destroyed in our future created a species not quite human then too late Tanya was paler so us/them had short hair of the disease grew long again was recovering more then went to a doctor reported sterile of the very great-grandchildren looked young so they never aged Edward they caused this I Have this illness it is masking me different oh my god now healed differently the bodies were bones but herself evolved so myself with them were not humans.

12/26/2015 c1 fanfictionalcolic
So sad and so sweet ta the same Time. Thanks for sharing.

4/11/2015 c1 ChristyWIX
Whew, that was a very sad one to read. It hurt my heart. I'm glad that Tanya and Edward found each other. At least they understand, their would be no them without her. So sad that they found that magical love, yet didn't get to enjoy it, but for a few visits here and there. My heart hurts.

9/3/2014 c1 Leila
I heard about this story from another fanfic writer and I never got to it until now, and I have to saw I'm glad I did. This fanfic was the probably the best oneshot I ever read. It was fantastic! Thanks for writing it. :)

8/1/2013 c1 2JCreader
This was so sad;(
But I've always loved the concept that life goes on...:)

6/7/2013 c1 4Cordelia Amelie
I had a feeling that Bella will die somewhere in the story but when she did die, my goodness. I was a wreck. My mom thought I'd gone crazy after I told her Bella died. This story was beautifully written and had an awesome plot. I never really liked Tanya based on the fics that I read but you made me love her. I totally adored this story. Good job.

1/24/2013 c1 lisa-alice-cullen
hi, i didnt no how to talk to you so this is the only way i no how, im trying to find the stories boycotts and barflies and were going where but i cant find them, i believe you wrote them, have they been deleted? my email is coudl you please reply to me on there