for Eyes Of An Angel8/28/2012 c1 
16LunaLovegood1997
Lovelovelove! I like the rosary he prays for Matt- reminiscent of the last part of St Francis's prayer: "For it is in giving that we receive; in pardoning that we are pardoned; and in dying that we are born into eternal life." Definitely a winner! Xoxo luna
16LunaLovegood1997Lovelovelove! I like the rosary he prays for Matt- reminiscent of the last part of St Francis's prayer: "For it is in giving that we receive; in pardoning that we are pardoned; and in dying that we are born into eternal life." Definitely a winner! Xoxo luna
3/7/2010 c1 1This Iz Pointless
for some reason, this ending made me laugh. But good job! I is looking forward to any "fluff" you may come up with. :]
1This Iz Pointlessfor some reason, this ending made me laugh. But good job! I is looking forward to any "fluff" you may come up with. :]
2/18/2010 c1 1HappehMerro
At the start of the story, Mello says the lie would keep Matt in the house but later on he thinks about how Matt's going to follow him, this doesn't make much sense and when Mello's dead, he thinks about how he's going to live though it, but he's dead. Sorry, I just thought I'd say :)
Apart from that, it's a good story. It's nice to see people with fresh outlooks on how they died, and what happens afterwards, Mello always seems to think he's going to hell but never does. Even though Mel got into heaven, I still found it fun to think about him in the hell you described, though that might just be my sick sense of mind XD
1HappehMerroAt the start of the story, Mello says the lie would keep Matt in the house but later on he thinks about how Matt's going to follow him, this doesn't make much sense and when Mello's dead, he thinks about how he's going to live though it, but he's dead. Sorry, I just thought I'd say :)
Apart from that, it's a good story. It's nice to see people with fresh outlooks on how they died, and what happens afterwards, Mello always seems to think he's going to hell but never does. Even though Mel got into heaven, I still found it fun to think about him in the hell you described, though that might just be my sick sense of mind XD
2/17/2010 c1 The Original Gamer
That was beautiful. ;D
Like...in the epic way.
Just the right amount of fluff, y'know? And in character to boot.
I personally say you should continue with some M&M heaven fluff. xD 3
That was beautiful. ;D
Like...in the epic way.
Just the right amount of fluff, y'know? And in character to boot.
I personally say you should continue with some M&M heaven fluff. xD 3