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8/6/2010 c9 1Jezabel Harman
. Lol, I can't wait until you update the story ! :)
7/28/2010 c9 aurevoirfanfiction
its good, but like, when someone says something, even if its in a quote it needs punctuation. like

"Hi," Cam said.

or

"Hey."

Just saying. anyways, it was good. Thanks for reviewing my story!

:))
7/28/2010 c4 aurevoirfanfiction
pretty good
7/28/2010 c3 aurevoirfanfiction
I liked it a lot better with the " marks. It was SO much easier to read. It was good, its getting better, but there are still alot of like typos throughout. Sorry, i'm like being rude, but im not trying to be, just trying to help.
7/28/2010 c2 aurevoirfanfiction
liked this one better it was easier to follow.

:)
7/28/2010 c1 aurevoirfanfiction
that was really confusing the way its wrote.
7/25/2010 c9 bbrodriguez
UPDATERZ SOON!
6/12/2010 c8 Stephanie-Anne Ross
ui love your story it is so good but have more romance with zach and cammie !
6/10/2010 c8 3hearts4ever
awesome job :) i liked it! update soon.
6/2/2010 c7 Janey
Love it,all of it keep writing it. the suspense and the way you built up the Gabriella character is pure awesome. I can't wait for the next chapters, so you better make them quick.

Sorry about you leaving town... alone, must be scary. Have fun.

Janey
6/1/2010 c7 hearts4ever
update soon :) good job.
5/8/2010 c6 hearts4ever
good! good! update soon :)
4/18/2010 c5 1Duchess55
I think Luke will ask Gabby to try to help him find his brother. Update soon!
4/3/2010 c5 3hearts4ever
wow! the story could go anywhere! (: update soon!
3/14/2010 c4 hearts4ever
update soon! need to know:)

awesome! i liked it.
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