for Universe1/21/2019 c1 1tingk
thsi is fkin bs, were is the ed and alphonse yaoi? i was born in 89' and have been waiting my whole life to see them bang each other. u r a dissapointment to the yaoi community and i am reporting u and raping my edward elric bopdy pillow later it is 150cm u can buy from my link on ebay also. mine is so hard if i drop it on the floor it will shatter into a million pieces and diffuse throught the air and impregnate every woman on this earth UwU
thsi is fkin bs, were is the ed and alphonse yaoi? i was born in 89' and have been waiting my whole life to see them bang each other. u r a dissapointment to the yaoi community and i am reporting u and raping my edward elric bopdy pillow later it is 150cm u can buy from my link on ebay also. mine is so hard if i drop it on the floor it will shatter into a million pieces and diffuse throught the air and impregnate every woman on this earth UwU
3/11/2013 c1 
2LoveDN
Omg... that was so unbelievable hot! And at the same time so good written! Really your writing is awesome! (: And very descriptive... as I said: So hot!
I actually read it before, but I don't know why I didn't review or put it in my favorites.. but lately I remembered it and HAD to find it! So I'm happy I did! Still awesome! Just as I knew it was! (:
So, very good job!
2LoveDNOmg... that was so unbelievable hot! And at the same time so good written! Really your writing is awesome! (: And very descriptive... as I said: So hot!
I actually read it before, but I don't know why I didn't review or put it in my favorites.. but lately I remembered it and HAD to find it! So I'm happy I did! Still awesome! Just as I knew it was! (:
So, very good job!
10/11/2010 c1 Smutluva23
MMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm. That was hot. damn, now I need to change my pants.
MMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm. That was hot. damn, now I need to change my pants.
8/8/2010 c1 10kiiroi yumetobu
oh, so THAT'S how you find out the secrets to the universe. lulz. that was great, and the unexpected 'change of tactics' was very interesting too 3
10kiiroi yumetobuoh, so THAT'S how you find out the secrets to the universe. lulz. that was great, and the unexpected 'change of tactics' was very interesting too 3
7/6/2010 c1 Sailor Jupiter156
ok a) the last line totally funny and b) great fanfic i loved every buit of it ^_^
ok a) the last line totally funny and b) great fanfic i loved every buit of it ^_^
5/4/2010 c1 23tartanbanana
okay just finished wiping up the drool
OMG you are so the reason i read fanfics like theses
loveit
now excuse me while i go and dunk my head in cold water
that was so hot
23tartanbananaokay just finished wiping up the drool
OMG you are so the reason i read fanfics like theses
loveit
now excuse me while i go and dunk my head in cold water
that was so hot
4/30/2010 c1 chocolat-chan
luv it *wipes drool off face* marty the unicorn has some words to say(my pet unicorn)
marty:if master is happy,i am happy.
luv it *wipes drool off face* marty the unicorn has some words to say(my pet unicorn)
marty:if master is happy,i am happy.
4/8/2010 c1 Aimi-chan
That was super funny and hott! I loved the sex, especially cause it was on the desk that knows all. ^^ Thanks for writing this!
That was super funny and hott! I loved the sex, especially cause it was on the desk that knows all. ^^ Thanks for writing this!
3/11/2010 c1 1animeyaoigirl102
omg *blushes madly* i luved it. everywhere i looked the one shots were really long or really really short. and i didnt want a story. this is my 1st time reading EdxRoy and you had just what i was looking for. i really luved it. u r awesome!
1animeyaoigirl102omg *blushes madly* i luved it. everywhere i looked the one shots were really long or really really short. and i didnt want a story. this is my 1st time reading EdxRoy and you had just what i was looking for. i really luved it. u r awesome!
3/11/2010 c1 22spirited curiosities
I can't deny how much I loved this one-shot, it was wonderfully well-written! The graphic details made this little lemon all the more pleasing...I can't say I've read a better sample of yaoi in ages, this was incredible to say the very least! And you kept Ed and Roy in character so very, very well...amazing.
I loved everything this story had to offer...the little details regarding the desk, the title, the significant ideas, the proposed future...it was amazing! This was quite a piece of work and I adored every delightful little bit. ;)
Beautiful writing.
Sexy, scandalous story.
22spirited curiositiesI can't deny how much I loved this one-shot, it was wonderfully well-written! The graphic details made this little lemon all the more pleasing...I can't say I've read a better sample of yaoi in ages, this was incredible to say the very least! And you kept Ed and Roy in character so very, very well...amazing.
I loved everything this story had to offer...the little details regarding the desk, the title, the significant ideas, the proposed future...it was amazing! This was quite a piece of work and I adored every delightful little bit. ;)
Beautiful writing.
Sexy, scandalous story.