for From Where You Are12/15/2010 c9 followthestory
A Christmas chapter, yes? Hoping you're going to update soon!
A Christmas chapter, yes? Hoping you're going to update soon!
11/26/2010 c9 cricket104
i just read all 9 chapters in one sitting! i'm sorry i couldn't follow this one from the start. i liked that you made mary an old lady, i can totally see that. and i like the different spin you put on hartwick and louisa's relationship-very believable.
can't wait for the next update!
i just read all 9 chapters in one sitting! i'm sorry i couldn't follow this one from the start. i liked that you made mary an old lady, i can totally see that. and i like the different spin you put on hartwick and louisa's relationship-very believable.
can't wait for the next update!
11/24/2010 c9 followthestory
Update soon? Please? Think of it as an early Christmas present for your readers?
Update soon? Please? Think of it as an early Christmas present for your readers?
11/21/2010 c9 buildingacubbyhouse
I am really loving this story- especially the bit with the magazine feature article, it was very clever and your writing is really sophisticated! Good work on your fantastic chapter updates! Looking forward to reading more. Take care xx
I am really loving this story- especially the bit with the magazine feature article, it was very clever and your writing is really sophisticated! Good work on your fantastic chapter updates! Looking forward to reading more. Take care xx
11/21/2010 c9 jmeec316
Argh! You need to update again soon! I think this might be my favorite modern Persuasion and high on my list of favorite modern Austen fics. I love Anne as a musician and Wentworth (and her father) as actors. Great assignments of careers and, in a sense, identities. Works perfectly. And they both seem to be so true to the spirit of Austen's character, while fitting perfectly into today's world. (Way to go for killing off Russel, too. I understand that in both your story and the original, she had the best of intentions, but...well, I guess it wouldn't be much of a story if she hadn't advised Anne against the relationship. )
I've read your other two stories over the past few days, and I want to congratulate you on them as well. I thoroughly enjoyed Shine and YWTFM. But there's something special about this one for me. Something in the nuances of the characters, maybe? Something intangible...
I can't wait to read more!
Argh! You need to update again soon! I think this might be my favorite modern Persuasion and high on my list of favorite modern Austen fics. I love Anne as a musician and Wentworth (and her father) as actors. Great assignments of careers and, in a sense, identities. Works perfectly. And they both seem to be so true to the spirit of Austen's character, while fitting perfectly into today's world. (Way to go for killing off Russel, too. I understand that in both your story and the original, she had the best of intentions, but...well, I guess it wouldn't be much of a story if she hadn't advised Anne against the relationship. )
I've read your other two stories over the past few days, and I want to congratulate you on them as well. I thoroughly enjoyed Shine and YWTFM. But there's something special about this one for me. Something in the nuances of the characters, maybe? Something intangible...
I can't wait to read more!
11/16/2010 c9 Toti G
How much longer are you planning on making us wait?
I love this story; I have been obsessed with it more months now. So, please update soon!
How much longer are you planning on making us wait?
I love this story; I have been obsessed with it more months now. So, please update soon!
11/2/2010 c9 Jane
Gasp! I just discovered your story and I simply fell in love. Just read all 9 chapters in one go. I don't usually like modern settings of Austen but this one is really wonderful. You have completely captured the tone of the original, and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Gasp! I just discovered your story and I simply fell in love. Just read all 9 chapters in one go. I don't usually like modern settings of Austen but this one is really wonderful. You have completely captured the tone of the original, and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
10/27/2010 c9 Guest
write more please! hope you update faster this time :'((
write more please! hope you update faster this time :'((
10/25/2010 c9 taswmom
Thank you for the update. I was worrying that you might not come back! I do hope that the next is sooner, but your writing is very good, and as much as I dislike the wait, the story is worth it! Please continue.
Thank you for the update. I was worrying that you might not come back! I do hope that the next is sooner, but your writing is very good, and as much as I dislike the wait, the story is worth it! Please continue.
10/21/2010 c9 mrzm
that was a wonderful chapter...please say you have the time to update soon. i think your version of the this Frederick /Anne meeting in "cafe/deli" New York style was cleverly done.
keep it up and keep them long please!...
that was a wonderful chapter...please say you have the time to update soon. i think your version of the this Frederick /Anne meeting in "cafe/deli" New York style was cleverly done.
keep it up and keep them long please!...
10/18/2010 c9 belle
Just when I'd given up hope, you've given us an update! I'm so glad you did. This is my favorite ongoing fan fic right now, and I have to say that you're my favorite writer on fanfiction.
Anyway, on to the chapter review: Ben's explanation regarding Lauren's past behavior somehow fits into the story and is actually plausible. It puts things in perspective, and I think it would make Lauren's transition from Derick to Ben easier to understand, unlike in Austen's original where we are (I must admit) left perplexed as to why they would actually hook up in the first place, like Louisa's accident did something to her head, and changed her behavior in the process. That was one of the things I had a difficulty accepting in Austen's work, although it is my favorite novel of hers. I think she did that for a purpose, and it does serve to move the story along and give us readers something to ponder. I like your take on that particular circumstance, however. It is a refreshing twist, and makes your fan fic stand out from the rest of the pack.
I love how you make this story up to date and and giving this story new insights and nuances that are different from the original without actually deviating from the spirit and essence of how Austen portrays Anne and Frederick. Anne doesn't suddenly become feisty or become so out of character, yet you portray her in a way that adapts to modern times, without her values and principles becoming outdated.
I also like the change we see in Derick. When I first read this story, I thought he came off as cold and standoffish, that I really felt for Anne in that parking lot scene. It's great that we can see how Derick's feelings and outlook evolve in this chapter, without the necessity of writing a Derick POV. For that, I applaud you. You write with such finesse and elegance and you certainly know how to convey to readers your intent without resorting to the obvious.
Also, your take on Lauren's flirting with Derick somehow lessens the blame on him for making it appear like they were throwing themselves at each other. Lauren also played a part because she also had a hidden agenda-to make Ben jealous-unlike in the original where Louisa was actually infatuated with Frederick. I'm wondering, though, if Derick knows that Lauren and Ben had a thing for each other from the start?
I'm also curious about how Derick and Walter are going to treat each other now that they have a movie together. I'm sure you have something up your sleeve and I can't wait to find out what it is.
Before I go, I just want to say I'm beginning to fall in love with your Derick. I didn't like him at first, but as the story unfolds, he's becoming more beautiful, with all of his flaws and all. I always loved your Anne, so I don't have much to say in that area.
If I could hug you for being such a terrific writer, I would! Please keep up the excellent writing!
Just when I'd given up hope, you've given us an update! I'm so glad you did. This is my favorite ongoing fan fic right now, and I have to say that you're my favorite writer on fanfiction.
Anyway, on to the chapter review: Ben's explanation regarding Lauren's past behavior somehow fits into the story and is actually plausible. It puts things in perspective, and I think it would make Lauren's transition from Derick to Ben easier to understand, unlike in Austen's original where we are (I must admit) left perplexed as to why they would actually hook up in the first place, like Louisa's accident did something to her head, and changed her behavior in the process. That was one of the things I had a difficulty accepting in Austen's work, although it is my favorite novel of hers. I think she did that for a purpose, and it does serve to move the story along and give us readers something to ponder. I like your take on that particular circumstance, however. It is a refreshing twist, and makes your fan fic stand out from the rest of the pack.
I love how you make this story up to date and and giving this story new insights and nuances that are different from the original without actually deviating from the spirit and essence of how Austen portrays Anne and Frederick. Anne doesn't suddenly become feisty or become so out of character, yet you portray her in a way that adapts to modern times, without her values and principles becoming outdated.
I also like the change we see in Derick. When I first read this story, I thought he came off as cold and standoffish, that I really felt for Anne in that parking lot scene. It's great that we can see how Derick's feelings and outlook evolve in this chapter, without the necessity of writing a Derick POV. For that, I applaud you. You write with such finesse and elegance and you certainly know how to convey to readers your intent without resorting to the obvious.
Also, your take on Lauren's flirting with Derick somehow lessens the blame on him for making it appear like they were throwing themselves at each other. Lauren also played a part because she also had a hidden agenda-to make Ben jealous-unlike in the original where Louisa was actually infatuated with Frederick. I'm wondering, though, if Derick knows that Lauren and Ben had a thing for each other from the start?
I'm also curious about how Derick and Walter are going to treat each other now that they have a movie together. I'm sure you have something up your sleeve and I can't wait to find out what it is.
Before I go, I just want to say I'm beginning to fall in love with your Derick. I didn't like him at first, but as the story unfolds, he's becoming more beautiful, with all of his flaws and all. I always loved your Anne, so I don't have much to say in that area.
If I could hug you for being such a terrific writer, I would! Please keep up the excellent writing!
10/17/2010 c9 
15ILoveTea
I like how you make us know Derick's thought (vaguely) by giving the interview :)
15ILoveTeaI like how you make us know Derick's thought (vaguely) by giving the interview :)
10/15/2010 c9 f.wentworth
Yes, very enigmatic indeed...of course, we assume his unfinished business is anne. But i felt that his interaction with anne at goldstein's was just a bit vague. Then again, it does leave room for a more substantial encounter, i hope...pretty please soon!
As for liam...hmmm...as charming and nice as he seems, he seems to crave associating with celebrities too much. I get the feeling that he is quite interested in anne but he is more starstruck by walter and the fact that he is hanging out with w's daughter. And i'm guessing that is why he persists in their friendship.
I am interested to see how the 3 interact if/when thrown together.
As ever, a lovely chapter even with the long wait.
Yes, very enigmatic indeed...of course, we assume his unfinished business is anne. But i felt that his interaction with anne at goldstein's was just a bit vague. Then again, it does leave room for a more substantial encounter, i hope...pretty please soon!
As for liam...hmmm...as charming and nice as he seems, he seems to crave associating with celebrities too much. I get the feeling that he is quite interested in anne but he is more starstruck by walter and the fact that he is hanging out with w's daughter. And i'm guessing that is why he persists in their friendship.
I am interested to see how the 3 interact if/when thrown together.
As ever, a lovely chapter even with the long wait.
10/15/2010 c9 5florabloom101
thank you for updating. And i'm really happy about how the story is progressing. This is the best persuasion fanfic ever.
5florabloom101thank you for updating. And i'm really happy about how the story is progressing. This is the best persuasion fanfic ever.