
2/6/2016 c6 Guest
And once again, I completely agree with her reasons for breaking up with him. Good job translating Persuasion to modern day so well.
And once again, I completely agree with her reasons for breaking up with him. Good job translating Persuasion to modern day so well.
2/6/2016 c5 Guest
That navy to acting upgrade is really very apt. Wonderful story!
That navy to acting upgrade is really very apt. Wonderful story!
8/2/2015 c11 jpatter
I've read this story in one go. Just beautiful, very cleverly weaving the original Persuasion story through it. Thank You.
I've read this story in one go. Just beautiful, very cleverly weaving the original Persuasion story through it. Thank You.
4/12/2015 c11
2LJKBananagirl
Just found this and read it in one hit. Fantastic writing, great story telling. Thank you for a gripping read. :-)

Just found this and read it in one hit. Fantastic writing, great story telling. Thank you for a gripping read. :-)
1/17/2015 c11 Guest
Hands down best Persuasion adaptation ever. Loved it.
Hands down best Persuasion adaptation ever. Loved it.
1/16/2015 c11 TheHeffalump
Wow! One of the best modern take on an Austen novel I've read. And all in 11 chapters. Kudos!
Wow! One of the best modern take on an Austen novel I've read. And all in 11 chapters. Kudos!
11/15/2014 c11 Evie
Loved this little story! Modern retellings of Jane Austen books are my guilty pleasure, I've probably read all the published ones...which is why I decided to venture into fanfiction territory to get some more! Yours is the first Persuasion fanfic Ive read and I really loved it! I squealed more than a few times. ;)
Ill definitely have to read your Pride and Prejudice retelling next!
Thanks for the fun read!
Loved this little story! Modern retellings of Jane Austen books are my guilty pleasure, I've probably read all the published ones...which is why I decided to venture into fanfiction territory to get some more! Yours is the first Persuasion fanfic Ive read and I really loved it! I squealed more than a few times. ;)
Ill definitely have to read your Pride and Prejudice retelling next!
Thanks for the fun read!