
12/16/2011 c5
9GreyMoth
I love this! It's awesome, it's beautiful, it's cruel, and above all it's real. I love how you you didnt glorify war or make them into heroes. This story is art

I love this! It's awesome, it's beautiful, it's cruel, and above all it's real. I love how you you didnt glorify war or make them into heroes. This story is art
12/18/2010 c5 wisecurledqueen
I don't think I've ever read anything so true to how America and Canada- and Alfred and Matthew- act to each other. This. This is good. Thank you so much!
-curledruler
I don't think I've ever read anything so true to how America and Canada- and Alfred and Matthew- act to each other. This. This is good. Thank you so much!
-curledruler
3/11/2010 c5
15nupinoop296
Holy crap. That was amazing and deep and emotional and WHOA.
Why doesn't this have more reviews?

Holy crap. That was amazing and deep and emotional and WHOA.
Why doesn't this have more reviews?
2/26/2010 c5 dgsdgdh
I'm astounded that this doesn't have more reviews.
Chapter after chapter, you unleash a brilliant style and wonderful content.
Chapter 5 is my favourite, I must say. So much emotion and imagery and blood and fear.
I keep repeating the last scene in my head, hearing the quote over and over.
I friggen' love it.
aijdoiajg
TL;DR- you and this story are awesome. Keep it up, bro'~
I'm astounded that this doesn't have more reviews.
Chapter after chapter, you unleash a brilliant style and wonderful content.
Chapter 5 is my favourite, I must say. So much emotion and imagery and blood and fear.
I keep repeating the last scene in my head, hearing the quote over and over.
I friggen' love it.
aijdoiajg
TL;DR- you and this story are awesome. Keep it up, bro'~
2/21/2010 c5
1STEGOSARAUS101
these are so deep its scary but u want 2 continue. i alway wondered wat it was like 4 the countries when they were in actual war plz continue.

these are so deep its scary but u want 2 continue. i alway wondered wat it was like 4 the countries when they were in actual war plz continue.
2/20/2010 c5
34Lady Emzebel
Was the writer from the second chapter Ernest Hemingway by any chance?
Chapter 3 made me happy and sad in equal measure. I do so love it when Alfred briefly reverts back to something like childhood and Arthur acts all paternal. Very bittersweet; I love that last line.
(Cookies too?
Don't push it.)
Chapter 4 both thrilled and terrified me. That is such a haunting image. Mattie reaching down and helping Alfred slit a guy's throat. So chilling.
Chapter 5: I feel unbelievably stupid for not reading the chapter title first. I hyperventilated over Mattie's death for nothing. Still, your rendition of Kumajirou being a spirit bear is just brilliant.
WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE REVIEWS~! *_*
Banzai!
L.E

Was the writer from the second chapter Ernest Hemingway by any chance?
Chapter 3 made me happy and sad in equal measure. I do so love it when Alfred briefly reverts back to something like childhood and Arthur acts all paternal. Very bittersweet; I love that last line.
(Cookies too?
Don't push it.)
Chapter 4 both thrilled and terrified me. That is such a haunting image. Mattie reaching down and helping Alfred slit a guy's throat. So chilling.
Chapter 5: I feel unbelievably stupid for not reading the chapter title first. I hyperventilated over Mattie's death for nothing. Still, your rendition of Kumajirou being a spirit bear is just brilliant.
WHY DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE REVIEWS~! *_*
Banzai!
L.E