
9/1/2024 c1 Lindarie
girl i need you to tell me if you are gonna finish this story :( it is my favorite but i dont know if there is still hope. love your writing and the character development is cheff kiss
girl i need you to tell me if you are gonna finish this story :( it is my favorite but i dont know if there is still hope. love your writing and the character development is cheff kiss
8/27/2024 c25 Sunidhi
This story is garbage. I must have been out of mind because I continued reading. Sorry if it may seem harsh, but that's what I feel about this story. And I feel pretty strongly pissed off about it because I am actually writing a review about how much I hated it.
This story is garbage. I must have been out of mind because I continued reading. Sorry if it may seem harsh, but that's what I feel about this story. And I feel pretty strongly pissed off about it because I am actually writing a review about how much I hated it.
6/28/2024 c7 Guest
Great beginning. So far there is just enough disdain for Edward that makes me want to keep reading. Interested to see what happens with Henry and Bella.
Great beginning. So far there is just enough disdain for Edward that makes me want to keep reading. Interested to see what happens with Henry and Bella.
3/11/2024 c39 Larkz
You have stated several times that English is not your native language - that you find it difficult to write in English.
I have read quite a few Fan Fiction stories and I can usually tell if the author’s native language is not English. Idioms are often the give away
No one would realize, by your writing style, that it is not your first language. You should be proud of the accomplishment of being able to write as well as a native speaker if not better!
You have stated several times that English is not your native language - that you find it difficult to write in English.
I have read quite a few Fan Fiction stories and I can usually tell if the author’s native language is not English. Idioms are often the give away
No one would realize, by your writing style, that it is not your first language. You should be proud of the accomplishment of being able to write as well as a native speaker if not better!
11/21/2023 c37 Grace46
Love this fuc, you know as an individual if you read something and it invokes feelings within you, then you know it's good... Bella pisses me off like nobody's business, she's a hypocrite and her indesisiveness is borderline toxic, I can understand going through traumatic experiences in life but gosh why must you pull everyone else with you when you go under... I hate how she's being holy holy, like she's freaking perfect, her stubbornness is just beyond annoying... She's a know it all whom hates to be wrong even though she can see how wrong she is... And the way she's treating Edward, no just hell no... If you cannot fix yourself don't include other people in your mess atleast that's my philosophy...
Love this fuc, you know as an individual if you read something and it invokes feelings within you, then you know it's good... Bella pisses me off like nobody's business, she's a hypocrite and her indesisiveness is borderline toxic, I can understand going through traumatic experiences in life but gosh why must you pull everyone else with you when you go under... I hate how she's being holy holy, like she's freaking perfect, her stubbornness is just beyond annoying... She's a know it all whom hates to be wrong even though she can see how wrong she is... And the way she's treating Edward, no just hell no... If you cannot fix yourself don't include other people in your mess atleast that's my philosophy...
7/25/2023 c12 KatHat4
Sure am missing this story! I hope everything is well with you and you come back to us soon!
Sure am missing this story! I hope everything is well with you and you come back to us soon!
10/27/2022 c42 Guest
Any chance this will be completed?
Any chance this will be completed?