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8/18/2010 c1 13maestra
Hm, could have been the beginning of a good story there. But I suppose you could still continue it. After all, just because MP is trying to get rid of the evidence doesn't mind someone else won't find out about it.

And even though it was a crisis, believe the Centre would almost expect him to show up there. He does have a reputation as a "do-gooder."

I'd like to see you develop the story more. I would like to know what he's doing there. How he's "making a difference." And not just in a generic way. I want to see him make friends & enemies... and interact with the people. That's what makes great Pretender fic IMO!
2/22/2010 c1 126AJeff
Great oneshot. Miss Parker really does have a soft spot at times for Jarod. She couldn't have been that cruel to have run out to capture her prey when others needed him the most.
2/22/2010 c1 dazepurple
love this story it so great

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