for Mobile Suit Gundam Alpha11/8/2023 c3 TheCosmicSoul1263
Oh. It's been a while since I came to this story. And I have seen something change your narcissistic and egotistical behavior. You have deleted those messages biased towards your personal and subjective tastes, which no one cares about. Like attacking the creator of the huge Gundam franchise. Or the fans who like this one, believing you can write a “better” story. Or the fact of having the nerve to underuse the original designs of the legendary Yoshikazu Yasuhiko, for the generic designs of Nasu and Takeuchi. Your sincere and despicable behavior, which sought to erase Gundam, believing yourself superior with an elevated attitude that seems similar to Nazis and communists. In the end, you bit off more than you could chew, looking for a kind of “crossover” between all the sagas that did not coincide between eras timelines. You burned yourself out and you couldn't even give a good characterization to the hundreds of characters, whose plot threads you had to trace. This is what happens to egomaniacs with pretensions of greatness. The story promised a lot, but it was relegated to a poor attempt by a mediocre aspiring writer, whose official books could not be sold nor would anyone who reads fanfiction of his favorite series be interested in reading. Take that lesson in humility, which you really needed. Little cry boy.
Oh. It's been a while since I came to this story. And I have seen something change your narcissistic and egotistical behavior. You have deleted those messages biased towards your personal and subjective tastes, which no one cares about. Like attacking the creator of the huge Gundam franchise. Or the fans who like this one, believing you can write a “better” story. Or the fact of having the nerve to underuse the original designs of the legendary Yoshikazu Yasuhiko, for the generic designs of Nasu and Takeuchi. Your sincere and despicable behavior, which sought to erase Gundam, believing yourself superior with an elevated attitude that seems similar to Nazis and communists. In the end, you bit off more than you could chew, looking for a kind of “crossover” between all the sagas that did not coincide between eras timelines. You burned yourself out and you couldn't even give a good characterization to the hundreds of characters, whose plot threads you had to trace. This is what happens to egomaniacs with pretensions of greatness. The story promised a lot, but it was relegated to a poor attempt by a mediocre aspiring writer, whose official books could not be sold nor would anyone who reads fanfiction of his favorite series be interested in reading. Take that lesson in humility, which you really needed. Little cry boy.
9/30/2022 c27 Guest
Doing Great,I love to see More Info on Other Inner Powers and their Ships.
Doing Great,I love to see More Info on Other Inner Powers and their Ships.
9/26/2022 c27 JC
Doing Great,You need to keep View on The Titans Balances,Showing their Enough Members that are Competent not just Emma,The Dolowa will go down.
I love for the Arc Royal visit the Other inner Powers like the Wing,Seed,X and G fighter,s ones.
Doing Great,You need to keep View on The Titans Balances,Showing their Enough Members that are Competent not just Emma,The Dolowa will go down.
I love for the Arc Royal visit the Other inner Powers like the Wing,Seed,X and G fighter,s ones.
2/12/2022 c27 
5Kaiser Chris
Another good battle chapter and I'm glad to see the climax of this arc approaching. The explanation for the Solar System and how it works as a defensive weapon with all of its strengths and flaws was a good exploration into the weapon both from a Gundam and space opera sense. Hopefully as the war goes on the Federation and their allies will be able to gain all kinds of superweapons so that the war isn't just ships and mobile suits. I would also really love if in the future we had some sort of chapter dedicated to ground warfare to show the grunt side of the war.
I like what you did with Bask and Jaimaican in showing how they are still a cruel killer and ambitious sycophant but at the same time they were incredibly useless and idiotic like how they were through the entirety of Zeta, giving them some measure of competency and charisma that explains how they got the position.
However, one issue I have is the presentation of the Titans. What I am referring to is how the rest of the Earth Federation forces treat them with disdain and suspicion as the spooks of the war and the literal blackshirts of the Federation. It doesn't feel too natural as an in-universe sentiment and instead feels like the cast projecting meta feelings because the Titans were the big bads of Zeta with no redeeming elements so of course they are the EVIL. I'm not saying to make the main characters Titans stans, but just have more nuance and differentiation than everyone being disgusted or shameful.
Also on the topic, while I do like that Emma is a committed Titan here, having her be the sole voice of reason and morals within the Titans and be so personally disgusted with Bask makes her presentation somewhat awkward, like why would the Titans recruit her in the first place? I'm not asking for Emma to become an anti-hero, but just show some subtle actions or attitudes that would show her being worthy of being recruited into the Titans besides her powers, like maybe her being a Nationalist or having compassion for allies and civilians but zero regarding the enemy. The Titans aren't too major of an issue, I just hope they get more exploration and development in the future cause they were definitely the most shafted faction in terms of presentation in UC.
5Kaiser ChrisAnother good battle chapter and I'm glad to see the climax of this arc approaching. The explanation for the Solar System and how it works as a defensive weapon with all of its strengths and flaws was a good exploration into the weapon both from a Gundam and space opera sense. Hopefully as the war goes on the Federation and their allies will be able to gain all kinds of superweapons so that the war isn't just ships and mobile suits. I would also really love if in the future we had some sort of chapter dedicated to ground warfare to show the grunt side of the war.
I like what you did with Bask and Jaimaican in showing how they are still a cruel killer and ambitious sycophant but at the same time they were incredibly useless and idiotic like how they were through the entirety of Zeta, giving them some measure of competency and charisma that explains how they got the position.
However, one issue I have is the presentation of the Titans. What I am referring to is how the rest of the Earth Federation forces treat them with disdain and suspicion as the spooks of the war and the literal blackshirts of the Federation. It doesn't feel too natural as an in-universe sentiment and instead feels like the cast projecting meta feelings because the Titans were the big bads of Zeta with no redeeming elements so of course they are the EVIL. I'm not saying to make the main characters Titans stans, but just have more nuance and differentiation than everyone being disgusted or shameful.
Also on the topic, while I do like that Emma is a committed Titan here, having her be the sole voice of reason and morals within the Titans and be so personally disgusted with Bask makes her presentation somewhat awkward, like why would the Titans recruit her in the first place? I'm not asking for Emma to become an anti-hero, but just show some subtle actions or attitudes that would show her being worthy of being recruited into the Titans besides her powers, like maybe her being a Nationalist or having compassion for allies and civilians but zero regarding the enemy. The Titans aren't too major of an issue, I just hope they get more exploration and development in the future cause they were definitely the most shafted faction in terms of presentation in UC.
2/10/2022 c27 6Juubi-K
The Gate of Abaddon has opened, and the battle begins.
A concise chapter, but a good one; opening this most crucial of battles. The big events here are the introduction of some old faces from Zeta. Bask Om and Jamaican Daningan have arrived, representing the thus-far mysterious Titans; along with Emma Sheen and the fourth Gundam.
Bask is pretty much what I expected; aggressive and slightly smug. Jamaican is a little more complex. He's a careerist and an elitist, concerned with his own advancement and fame, but he is loyal to Earth and its people, and will fight to protect them.
And there's Emma Sheen; the real stand-out compared to her canon self. This version is a stone-cold killer, who has seen many battles, and expects to see many more. I'm thinking, and hoping, we'll see more of her in the future; considering she has the Delta Gundam.
All in all, these Titans don't come across as particularly villainous, at least not yet. But I want to see how you handle them, especially Emma.
A good chapter all around. I look forward to the next one.
6Juubi-KThe Gate of Abaddon has opened, and the battle begins.
A concise chapter, but a good one; opening this most crucial of battles. The big events here are the introduction of some old faces from Zeta. Bask Om and Jamaican Daningan have arrived, representing the thus-far mysterious Titans; along with Emma Sheen and the fourth Gundam.
Bask is pretty much what I expected; aggressive and slightly smug. Jamaican is a little more complex. He's a careerist and an elitist, concerned with his own advancement and fame, but he is loyal to Earth and its people, and will fight to protect them.
And there's Emma Sheen; the real stand-out compared to her canon self. This version is a stone-cold killer, who has seen many battles, and expects to see many more. I'm thinking, and hoping, we'll see more of her in the future; considering she has the Delta Gundam.
All in all, these Titans don't come across as particularly villainous, at least not yet. But I want to see how you handle them, especially Emma.
A good chapter all around. I look forward to the next one.
2/4/2022 c27 Guest
Excellent story,I hope Wing Zero Alpha,will give more Info on Inner powers and Outer powers.
I love to see more on ther ships.
Excellent story,I hope Wing Zero Alpha,will give more Info on Inner powers and Outer powers.
I love to see more on ther ships.
2/2/2022 c27 JC
Great,story,The Big fight against the Dolowa the start,I hope Ark Royal will visit and help out the other inter what the EF did ,I am still for them against Zeon,I hate Zeon Fadboy mary-sue stories,I hope this das not turn into one.
Any chnce you give more info on Ships of the inner and Outer powers.
Great,story,The Big fight against the Dolowa the start,I hope Ark Royal will visit and help out the other inter what the EF did ,I am still for them against Zeon,I hate Zeon Fadboy mary-sue stories,I hope this das not turn into one.
Any chnce you give more info on Ships of the inner and Outer powers.
7/21/2021 c26 6Juubi-K
Another fine chapter. Another belated review.
This was a transition and preparation chapter, setting us up for the battle to come. And from the looks of things, it's going to be a big one. We have a ragtag Federation task force, and a fleet of the Titans appearing at last. The presence of Paptimus Scirocco suggests they will fight well, but one cannot help but wonder what else might be going on.
And over on the Dolowa, Lutjins has troubles aplenty. It looks like he's been sent on a death-ride into the great unknown after all; for what purpose none can say. From what I know of Gihren, I wouldn't be surprised if the whole thing wasn't just a 'spoiling' mission; with the Dolowa wreaking havoc on the Federation and hopefully disrupting the preparations for Odessa. A supremely powerful ship, and a fine commander and crew, sacrificed to buy a little time.
Anyway, a good chapter. I look forward to the next one.
6Juubi-KAnother fine chapter. Another belated review.
This was a transition and preparation chapter, setting us up for the battle to come. And from the looks of things, it's going to be a big one. We have a ragtag Federation task force, and a fleet of the Titans appearing at last. The presence of Paptimus Scirocco suggests they will fight well, but one cannot help but wonder what else might be going on.
And over on the Dolowa, Lutjins has troubles aplenty. It looks like he's been sent on a death-ride into the great unknown after all; for what purpose none can say. From what I know of Gihren, I wouldn't be surprised if the whole thing wasn't just a 'spoiling' mission; with the Dolowa wreaking havoc on the Federation and hopefully disrupting the preparations for Odessa. A supremely powerful ship, and a fine commander and crew, sacrificed to buy a little time.
Anyway, a good chapter. I look forward to the next one.
7/10/2021 c26 32SulliMike23
It figures that the Titans would be here. They are no better than the Zeeks!
32SulliMike23It figures that the Titans would be here. They are no better than the Zeeks!
6/3/2021 c25 UltraMickey
You know, this is an actual good Gundam sci-if Novel. So much so that I wish the Galactic Century should be turned into an anime. Looking forward for the next chapters.
You know, this is an actual good Gundam sci-if Novel. So much so that I wish the Galactic Century should be turned into an anime. Looking forward for the next chapters.