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7/2/2010 c1 264darkknightsrevenge
Awwwwwwwuuuu! that sooo cute :D I listened to this song, and I forgot that one of my friends sang it for an audition, I really like it. the wording didn't make much sense, but I think it's just me being sugar-high and trying to read and listen to music at the same time, which i'm not good at. :P

Good job :D

~Dark Knight
3/9/2010 c1 7Scarlet Hour
Ah, Wonderwall: beautiful, beautiful song.

I like what you've done with developing Sasuke and Sakura's relationship; the ending bit about them being like a family with Naruto and Kakashi is especially touching to me. To be honest, I think you could have done this without the help of the song. Good job!
3/1/2010 c1 17ish.the.abstract
you know what would be better...if you based it on one stanza instead of the whole song for smooth transition...my advice is a beta-reader...(mine is busy nowadays so my writing's a bit pathetic)

but...it's your fic anyway and I've never really been good with first person plus you're true to the song and I'd love to see you make a multi-chapter 'cause the concept's there...and wonderwall is sasusaku! practically made for them...haha

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