for Wonderwall7/2/2010 c1 
264darkknightsrevenge
Awwwwwwwuuuu! that sooo cute :D I listened to this song, and I forgot that one of my friends sang it for an audition, I really like it. the wording didn't make much sense, but I think it's just me being sugar-high and trying to read and listen to music at the same time, which i'm not good at. :P
Good job :D
~Dark Knight
264darkknightsrevengeAwwwwwwwuuuu! that sooo cute :D I listened to this song, and I forgot that one of my friends sang it for an audition, I really like it. the wording didn't make much sense, but I think it's just me being sugar-high and trying to read and listen to music at the same time, which i'm not good at. :P
Good job :D
~Dark Knight
3/9/2010 c1 7Scarlet Hour
Ah, Wonderwall: beautiful, beautiful song.
I like what you've done with developing Sasuke and Sakura's relationship; the ending bit about them being like a family with Naruto and Kakashi is especially touching to me. To be honest, I think you could have done this without the help of the song. Good job!
7Scarlet HourAh, Wonderwall: beautiful, beautiful song.
I like what you've done with developing Sasuke and Sakura's relationship; the ending bit about them being like a family with Naruto and Kakashi is especially touching to me. To be honest, I think you could have done this without the help of the song. Good job!
3/1/2010 c1 17ish.the.abstract
you know what would be better...if you based it on one stanza instead of the whole song for smooth transition...my advice is a beta-reader...(mine is busy nowadays so my writing's a bit pathetic)
but...it's your fic anyway and I've never really been good with first person plus you're true to the song and I'd love to see you make a multi-chapter 'cause the concept's there...and wonderwall is sasusaku! practically made for them...haha
17ish.the.abstractyou know what would be better...if you based it on one stanza instead of the whole song for smooth transition...my advice is a beta-reader...(mine is busy nowadays so my writing's a bit pathetic)
but...it's your fic anyway and I've never really been good with first person plus you're true to the song and I'd love to see you make a multi-chapter 'cause the concept's there...and wonderwall is sasusaku! practically made for them...haha