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4/3/2010 c1 48Sand n' Sable
Good. It's nice to hear his last thoughts as human.
2/26/2010 c1 Anqeole
Hi Meg :)

I don't usually read poems because I'm not very good at understanding and seeing why it was written, but I got to say, this was a beautiful poem.

You hit Edward right on the head, really beautiful and sad at the same time :)

So, basicly, beautiful poem, I really like the way you potret Edward's thoughts and feelings, I actually re-read it, and I don't often do that unless I really like them :D

You can always write a poem about what Edward thoughts is when he approch Bella after he killed Victoria and he and Seth has burned up the pices - I always thought that was a heartbreaking moment.

Love Anqeole ^^
2/24/2010 c1 1TeamAliceAndSeth
Amazing. Very emotional and I truly loved it. please do more poems like it! :)
2/24/2010 c1 1Raffels
Very good. I really enjoyed it. To tell the truth I got goose bumps. What about something from when Edward left Bella in the woods what he was thinking or just after he left. Love to see what you will do with that. PLS write more LOVE IT.

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