
9/4/2010 c1 Caitlin
omg! I DIED LAUGHING this is great! i lovelovelove dylan =/ unfortunaly im the only one who does, anyways i love iggy! But hes mine not max's =P
omg! I DIED LAUGHING this is great! i lovelovelove dylan =/ unfortunaly im the only one who does, anyways i love iggy! But hes mine not max's =P
7/10/2010 c11 Lizzy D
Omggg made the story of the idea I made :D :D I JUST NOTICEDDD hahahahhahahah yayyyyyyy! I'm soooooooooo happppyyyyyy :) hahahhahahah I waz just randomly thinking hahahahahhahahaha anyway I LOVVEEE ITTT hehehehe yayyyyy! I helped :) hahahahahhahaha SOOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOWWW!
Omggg made the story of the idea I made :D :D I JUST NOTICEDDD hahahahhahahah yayyyyyyy! I'm soooooooooo happppyyyyyy :) hahahhahahah I waz just randomly thinking hahahahahhahahaha anyway I LOVVEEE ITTT hehehehe yayyyyy! I helped :) hahahahahhahaha SOOOOOOO HAPPY RIGHT NOWWW!
7/1/2010 c16
4temporarythings
ok
just to let you know, i just finished chapter 15
so i don't know if max and fang get back together
but all i'm saying is...
THEY BETTER
or else your story sucks.
well, not like that
your spelling is awesome and the plot is well thought through and the reactions of the characters are definitely realistic and add to the story unlike other fanfics i've read where they take away
but as a devoted fax lover, i CAN NOT tell you that your story is good unless Max and Fang get back together
i mean DYLAN?
that's a name for a pansy.
a PAN-SY
Fang.
now there is a though name.
the name of a PROTECTOR
someone that Max trusts
not that i'm saying that Dylan isn't nice
but couldn't you have made him gay or something?
and then made a OC for him to like?
and then he leaves and never returns?
btw,if there is a story like this on fanfiction, please tell me
but siriously,
WHY COULDN'T YOU HAVE?
so,
i hope that Max and Fang get together
and that the last thing in your story is a passionate kiss

ok
just to let you know, i just finished chapter 15
so i don't know if max and fang get back together
but all i'm saying is...
THEY BETTER
or else your story sucks.
well, not like that
your spelling is awesome and the plot is well thought through and the reactions of the characters are definitely realistic and add to the story unlike other fanfics i've read where they take away
but as a devoted fax lover, i CAN NOT tell you that your story is good unless Max and Fang get back together
i mean DYLAN?
that's a name for a pansy.
a PAN-SY
Fang.
now there is a though name.
the name of a PROTECTOR
someone that Max trusts
not that i'm saying that Dylan isn't nice
but couldn't you have made him gay or something?
and then made a OC for him to like?
and then he leaves and never returns?
btw,if there is a story like this on fanfiction, please tell me
but siriously,
WHY COULDN'T YOU HAVE?
so,
i hope that Max and Fang get together
and that the last thing in your story is a passionate kiss
6/30/2010 c22 MangaFang
omg this is the most scary and suspenseful stories ever. Great strategy to keep readers... well reading but don't go all JP on us and kill Fang... AND NO DYLAN! :D GOOD PROGRESS BTW! AAAAH CAPSLOCK! :O
omg this is the most scary and suspenseful stories ever. Great strategy to keep readers... well reading but don't go all JP on us and kill Fang... AND NO DYLAN! :D GOOD PROGRESS BTW! AAAAH CAPSLOCK! :O
6/27/2010 c21 MangaFang
YAY I READ THROUGH 20 FREAKING CHAPTERS OF PAINFUL DYLANxMAX BECAUSE YOUR NAME WAS FANG LOVER! I BELIEVED IN YOU AND I CAN FINALLY ADD YOU TO MY AUTHOR AND STORY FAVORITES FOR MAKING THIS STORY FAX! BRAVO *i'm sure the CAPS are burning your eyes... sorry"
YAY I READ THROUGH 20 FREAKING CHAPTERS OF PAINFUL DYLANxMAX BECAUSE YOUR NAME WAS FANG LOVER! I BELIEVED IN YOU AND I CAN FINALLY ADD YOU TO MY AUTHOR AND STORY FAVORITES FOR MAKING THIS STORY FAX! BRAVO *i'm sure the CAPS are burning your eyes... sorry"
6/21/2010 c20
3Rock n' roll addict
Cool definitely can't wait to see who the new guy is. And wow, Dylan's should get hell from Max... I know I'd kick his ass.

Cool definitely can't wait to see who the new guy is. And wow, Dylan's should get hell from Max... I know I'd kick his ass.
6/15/2010 c20 PewpewDiePie
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH A NEW GUY! seems he's a hottie too! XD cant wait for more hun! post quick!
Xx. Roza
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH A NEW GUY! seems he's a hottie too! XD cant wait for more hun! post quick!
Xx. Roza
6/14/2010 c2 BookHunter
so will this be a Mylan fic? i havent read ne of those in a while...but i love this! Dylan is so in character (i mean, we dont kno him to well, but from book 6...)
so will this be a Mylan fic? i havent read ne of those in a while...but i love this! Dylan is so in character (i mean, we dont kno him to well, but from book 6...)
6/12/2010 c19
16maispecialk
You're updating like crazy! I love it! Is it wrong that all the bad guys sound hot? Maybe it's just because I'm watching World Cup...

You're updating like crazy! I love it! Is it wrong that all the bad guys sound hot? Maybe it's just because I'm watching World Cup...