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4Faith Sparks
I'm leaning towards B. As long as Cloud lives through. If he doesn't then go with A but I'm sticking towards B.
4Faith SparksI'm leaning towards B. As long as Cloud lives through. If he doesn't then go with A but I'm sticking towards B.
6/13/2011 c1 11authorwithissues
I'm going with option A. Although I like both, A seems to serenade me JUUUUUST right. I really do hope you continue this since, looking at the published date, it's been quite a while...
You have set up the bones for a very good fic, if you ask me. It is well written, un-rushed, in good taste (in my opinion), and has so much freaking potential! Spotting an alert for chapter 2 in my inbox would make my day any day! From April to May and from a weekend to a holiday! It'll always be good no matter what day! (but preferably a soon one)
11authorwithissuesI'm going with option A. Although I like both, A seems to serenade me JUUUUUST right. I really do hope you continue this since, looking at the published date, it's been quite a while...
You have set up the bones for a very good fic, if you ask me. It is well written, un-rushed, in good taste (in my opinion), and has so much freaking potential! Spotting an alert for chapter 2 in my inbox would make my day any day! From April to May and from a weekend to a holiday! It'll always be good no matter what day! (but preferably a soon one)
4/22/2011 c1 2Chocobo Knights
Hello there^^ it's been reaaaaaaallly late, I know, but i want to tell you that you've got a lot of potential for this story^^ I mean, wow, even in the first chapter you have shown many potential in this story^^ you're great, really, I mean it^^
If you ask me, I would go for the option A^^
It'll be a shame if you don't continue this, but hey, no hard feelings okay^^ after all it's all up to you whether you want to continue this or not
anyway, thanks a lot for this^^
2Chocobo KnightsHello there^^ it's been reaaaaaaallly late, I know, but i want to tell you that you've got a lot of potential for this story^^ I mean, wow, even in the first chapter you have shown many potential in this story^^ you're great, really, I mean it^^
If you ask me, I would go for the option A^^
It'll be a shame if you don't continue this, but hey, no hard feelings okay^^ after all it's all up to you whether you want to continue this or not
anyway, thanks a lot for this^^
1/29/2011 c1 3Purple-Eyed Devil
Considering how insanely hard it is to find good Clack written in the Inuniverse, you've done a splendid job. A few odd errors here and there (You put an extra letter in Lazzard), but nothing that detracts from the overall story.
Oh, and that choice... I can almost feel the sexual tension from the first one, but the second has so much more potential for angst. Sooooo...
I'mma go with B. GO FOR IT, ZACK.
3Purple-Eyed DevilConsidering how insanely hard it is to find good Clack written in the Inuniverse, you've done a splendid job. A few odd errors here and there (You put an extra letter in Lazzard), but nothing that detracts from the overall story.
Oh, and that choice... I can almost feel the sexual tension from the first one, but the second has so much more potential for angst. Sooooo...
I'mma go with B. GO FOR IT, ZACK.
6/24/2010 c1 damagedworth
Dammit, do the second option! Continue the story, pleeeeeease.
Dammit, do the second option! Continue the story, pleeeeeease.
6/22/2010 c1 1UltimateNinjaOfDoom
BONKED UP THE BUM, BONKED UP THE BUM :] sorry but Zack and cloud should have sex but what do you mean by the loss of cloud coz i don't think cloud should die sure getting captured by Hojo is a good story line but cloud dying would be too sad update soon i cant wait to see where you go with this
1UltimateNinjaOfDoomBONKED UP THE BUM, BONKED UP THE BUM :] sorry but Zack and cloud should have sex but what do you mean by the loss of cloud coz i don't think cloud should die sure getting captured by Hojo is a good story line but cloud dying would be too sad update soon i cant wait to see where you go with this
4/9/2010 c1 9DeathNoteMaker
I choose B! XD Cloud needs some lovin', plus I really think that sex would loosen him up.
9DeathNoteMakerI choose B! XD Cloud needs some lovin', plus I really think that sex would loosen him up.
4/8/2010 c1 14xcloudx
HOLY CAKE BISCUIT THIS WAS DEPRESSING! Thank you for the depression now I need medication. I love medication so its all beautiful thank you, I love this story and cant wait for more! Hahaha Cloud... and Amazing and Understanding Zack how I love thee.
14xcloudxHOLY CAKE BISCUIT THIS WAS DEPRESSING! Thank you for the depression now I need medication. I love medication so its all beautiful thank you, I love this story and cant wait for more! Hahaha Cloud... and Amazing and Understanding Zack how I love thee.
4/4/2010 c1 2raised-perdition
Ugh...the decision is so hard... :( I really like the angsty Zack and Cloud stuff...but I also love the fun Zack and Cloud rolling around in the sheets too...so...how about C) You can choose! (If not, I'd prefer A)
2raised-perditionUgh...the decision is so hard... :( I really like the angsty Zack and Cloud stuff...but I also love the fun Zack and Cloud rolling around in the sheets too...so...how about C) You can choose! (If not, I'd prefer A)
3/17/2010 c1 Gen
They should do the second option ;p
For obvious reasons yes?
Good story! I feel sorry for Cloud though; this anxiety is like horrible :O
Gen
They should do the second option ;p
For obvious reasons yes?
Good story! I feel sorry for Cloud though; this anxiety is like horrible :O
Gen
3/9/2010 c1 6leonsgirl47625
Oh, this is good :D
You've got a great style and even though you don't have a Beta Reader, you don't have that many grammatical errors. I like the way you write Zack and Cloud and can't wait for you to update!
Also, definitely go with the 1st option. Who doesn't love tragically delicious Cloud? :S
6leonsgirl47625Oh, this is good :D
You've got a great style and even though you don't have a Beta Reader, you don't have that many grammatical errors. I like the way you write Zack and Cloud and can't wait for you to update!
Also, definitely go with the 1st option. Who doesn't love tragically delicious Cloud? :S
3/8/2010 c1 3KillersLikeCandy
Oh dear GAIA, you HAVE to keep going. I love your writing, you make Cloud so adorable and Zack so protective and
Please continue? Umm, I prefer option B to be honest. Give Zack and Cloud some sweet loving and then take it away and bring on the angst. LOVE IT!
Please, please, PLEASE update 3
P.s Sex FTW. (Thats just me being a pervert ;D)
3KillersLikeCandyOh dear GAIA, you HAVE to keep going. I love your writing, you make Cloud so adorable and Zack so protective and
Please continue? Umm, I prefer option B to be honest. Give Zack and Cloud some sweet loving and then take it away and bring on the angst. LOVE IT!
Please, please, PLEASE update 3
P.s Sex FTW. (Thats just me being a pervert ;D)
3/3/2010 c1 2mysticalilly
Your writing style is simply amazing. I was drawn to this story the moment I started reading it, and that is very difficult to be able to do as a writer. Being able to capture readers with the first few paragraphs. Please continue...it would be a waste not to. I have a feeling this story will be a masterpiece if you continue it :D
As for the route I think you should take, I'm gonna say B. I can't pass up the chance of reading a very well written fic with ZackxCloud love and a heavy dose of angst.
2mysticalillyYour writing style is simply amazing. I was drawn to this story the moment I started reading it, and that is very difficult to be able to do as a writer. Being able to capture readers with the first few paragraphs. Please continue...it would be a waste not to. I have a feeling this story will be a masterpiece if you continue it :D
As for the route I think you should take, I'm gonna say B. I can't pass up the chance of reading a very well written fic with ZackxCloud love and a heavy dose of angst.
3/2/2010 c1 6Darakna
Hello ... first: great writing, you don't need a beta if you can't find it (unless you found it since you Error status-ed. I love how you describe everything and such and are not afraid to throw a little almost-rape scene - dream.
Most people make Zack perfect - which he is, but there's a fact that Zack isn't all that great with memory XD.
Please, please continue, I won't tell you which way to take, becaue they both seem fascinating and I would like to read them. So either they decide to do it right there or ... later on (just please, let them DO IT! XD) ... I will continue to read, but do not let us wait long.
Oh, the length of this chapter is great, you will probably decide to shorten them, if you don't ... just WOW! =)
Sorry for my bad English.
Please, please, please UPDATE SOON!
Darakna
6DaraknaHello ... first: great writing, you don't need a beta if you can't find it (unless you found it since you Error status-ed. I love how you describe everything and such and are not afraid to throw a little almost-rape scene - dream.
Most people make Zack perfect - which he is, but there's a fact that Zack isn't all that great with memory XD.
Please, please continue, I won't tell you which way to take, becaue they both seem fascinating and I would like to read them. So either they decide to do it right there or ... later on (just please, let them DO IT! XD) ... I will continue to read, but do not let us wait long.
Oh, the length of this chapter is great, you will probably decide to shorten them, if you don't ... just WOW! =)
Sorry for my bad English.
Please, please, please UPDATE SOON!
Darakna