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1/1/2020 c1 Djone246
Love
12/4/2016 c8 6Lionnara
hmm it might late to write this but hope you continue the story )
10/4/2015 c8 nguyentrucquynh966
Keep going
3/10/2015 c8 shadowwolf2345
It's very good and funny as hell you should write more of this stuff.
1/31/2015 c8 AlexMarieAshford
I love this story, hope you update soon, I always keep coming back to this one to see if there's been more added, and even if there's not I reread it all over again XD
10/3/2014 c2 niki
best story ever
love it
8/22/2014 c8 A
Great chapter. Great story. Update when you can
7/22/2014 c6 randomer77
I totally agree with you.
event though I myself have left a few critic's comments on fanfiction.
but those where deserving.
I mean most of the time its just a friendly notice about like a spelling fault or something with the sentencing.
but some fanfictions are completely crap with plot.
like - main character grabs the sword and can suddenly use ALL sword and martial arts. -
like dafuq who thought this was a good idea.
anyway back to your fanfiction.
though I could probably find a few spelling or grammar errors in your fanfiction its not glaringly bad (I didn't actually notice them until I looked for them) and the main part is that this fanfiction has a proper and original plot.
very nicely done, event though this hasn't been updated in like 4 years i'm still rooting for ya.
6/8/2014 c8 Reina Rebelde
Y U NO UPDATE?!
12/12/2013 c8 1EruptingStar
I don't care what other say about this story, but I think it's great and you should keep writing. You are a great writer

;)
1/4/2013 c8 betty69blue
Update ! Its been over 2 years! I need a new chapter pleeeeeeeaaasssse this is awesome! Lol
6/16/2012 c8 2Haziebug
cool story, please update.
4/5/2012 c1 Bounty Hunter Vincent Vega
Because Twilight4life221 not all of us who lurk on this site are immature tweens who are incapable of reading more complex and engaging material.

Some people just shouldn't be writing at all. And thank goodness.

You think it's a great story because your mind can't grasp anything that requires you to put on your thinking cap.

One day I hope that you grow up and realize how awful and how much damage Twilight has done to the world.
2/7/2012 c8 Twilight4life221
Why do some people say that this story is rubbish I think it's great story don't listen to that rubbish who are they them saying those things they are even more horrible I don't know if you are going to continue this story but...there some people who actually love it and they say that they want you to continue writing this story and even other stories as well in the future similar to this so don't let people make you feel down and start working not ALOT of people can actually write I can't even write BUT you can so think about why I am writing here
1/15/2012 c8 9AloneBlueRose
love it man update soon!
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